Princess, I Am Really a Good Person

It's pretty good, it's a good story, and the beginning is quite tight. The battles come one after another, and I took a short break when I arrived in Tianshu. The plot is a bit clear, especially about the saint. It almost tells you clearly that a big event will definitely happen in the future, and it will travel through time and space. However, the family part is pretty well sorted out. There is no silly son to show off, and the characters are a bit monotonous. If there are some details and daily life interspersed in it, Shana may be more vivid.

It feels very fragmented. I originally thought it would be a medieval western fantasy, but then modern technology emerged first, and then I just created Tianshu. The sect is like this, and it feels too fragmented.

It's well written, but don't imitate the male protagonists of Japanese comics when it comes to emotional scenes. He's deliberately slow and poisonous.

As an author, your previous medieval style content was okay, but then you suddenly changed to Tianshu, and it immediately turned into an urban style article. The sense of abruptness between the two is too strong. If you want to write about the Middle Ages, try not to write about China. It is difficult to bring in the background if you change it, but it will also make the reader feel uncomfortable. Good interweaving will make people feel refreshed, but yours can only be regarded as stitched together.

I really can't understand what the author is writing about. Is he writing about how patriotic the male protagonist is? Because the saint can't have other feelings, having other feelings will affect the fate of Tianshu, so they can't recognize each other. However, the male protagonist is Chinese and not from Tianshu. Why does he care about so many chicken feathers? Can the author explain it?

I haven't read it for a while, so I came back and read it again. I just want to ask the author, do you think it's fun to make the protagonist suffocate?

There are too many conflicts and chases, and the reader gets tired very quickly. Equivalent to screening

Keep it, keep it, it's gone 😓

Let me tell you about my journey, I forgot when I added it to the bookshelf, but when I saw the update from the first chapter, it said that it would be on the shelves, and then it said that it would be the saint after it was put on the shelves. At that time, I read it in one go, and my emotions were very coherent, so I was looking forward to the sweet little story about the saint. After it was put on the shelves, it was only now that I got to know the saint. It was still when the protagonist had just opened Wushuang, and the battle situation had not changed at all and was still dead (for the saint) For readers who find this book now and later, It's okay, but for those who want to catch up, we have to wait about ten more days, and then I started to rush it. I don't know if my book review has any impact on you, but now that I have recognized the saint, I feel, it's a bit rushed. Either before the fight, when the situation is not so desperate, you can say that the protagonist saw that the sky was stained with blood, or that something was wrong after the black ghosts were sacrificed, At this time, he asked the little sister in the body, and then because he couldn't bear to watch the "sister" suffer more damage, he opened Wushuang at this time. Or as you wrote, Kai Wushuang went to save people at that time, But don't rush to recognize your relatives first. After saving the saint, during the fight with Taomu, through the saint's psychology, you will first doubt, then blah blah blah, and then recognize it after the fight. If the saint loses the half of the jade pendant, the saint will have no anchor to survive, then the protagonist can just pick up the right one on the way up. In the dropped jade pendant, there is a foundation of trust to fight the enemy together Instead of what I saw, I wrote several pictures. Taomu's men tried their best to make Taomu come, and then tainted the holy way. Brother, you have written all the supporting characters in that place in the previous few pictures, but why did the protagonist save a few pictures and not appear, and suddenly the next picture is "Wushuang Mowing the Grass", it is very abrupt, and the emotions are not coherent This is like I am rewarding myself. , The reward is half done, you suddenly took away my phone and said: "Stop, let's learn about youth learning first" Then after looking at it for a minute or two, you returned the phone to me and said: "Forget it, this has only one day, you can continue to reward yourself first" ? ? ?

Come on

Trumpet, do you have any previous vests? I'm in the middle of a book shortage, and the writing rhythm seems quite comfortable.

Hohohoho

I have mixed feelings when I see the work suddenly becoming academic style.

It's pretty good, the graphics are great, and the plot is well-organized. I don't feel the abruptness that others say is too obvious, because even now, this area is similar to a tribal system, and I quite like this way of writing. What feels a little worse is that the fighting is very tense and non-stop. The author has poor writing skills in daily life, but fighting non-stop is not mindless, and the perception is quite normal.

I just finished it and don't want to watch it again. I don't want to watch it again. In my mind, it's random. I remember it wrong or the setting has changed.

Eastern cultivation, Western fantasy, game time travel, modern technology, Cthulhu, these plus one or two elements are completely enough, but if you are too greedy, you will not be able to chew off more than you can chew.

Alas, it's all to your liking. Come over and have a nostalgic moment.

I think I know why. You should increase your speed and change lanes. You're really being disrespectful here.

Anyway, it's all cut. Can the author publish the outline as a side story?

I'm also looking forward to the next development.

Doesn't the author talk about the difficulty of starting in different modes?

The time travel section was really confusing. After writing so much, nothing changed in the end. I might as well just take it over with one or two strokes.

Ah? No, buddy, I came here specifically for your book, but you cut it

You can go read the author's new book and support him

After entering Tianshu, the plot is completely separated from the previous one. The desperadoes in the wilderness in the previous part are so interesting. Medieval magic + technology, full of porridge flavor. After entering Tianshu, the plot directly changes into a fantasy city. It is so uncomfortable.