Don't Step into That Good Night, Lord Evil God

Everyone in the comment section says that the male protagonist is not good at writing, but I think on the contrary, the male protagonist is well written. The conflict between the evil instinct and the normal three views in the first few chapters is quite right, but the female protagonist is a bit wrong. At the beginning, she seems to be silly and sweet, but later on, the painting style changes to bitter and hateful. In comparison, it feels like the character has changed a bit.

The pacing is well controlled and it is very beautiful. It is the most beautiful new book I have read recently. The setting that the heroine has an anointed mark on her forehead reminds me of the foodie saint from Yu-Gi-Oh! I hope the author can write more in this book

It is recommended to compare and read the first few chapters of The Wandering Toad. The truth is too much, the key is to have fun. The first chapter doesn't have any exciting points and is also depressing. Being obedient to power and talking nonsense about justice. Within one chapter, the protagonist's behavior undergoes a complete reversal. If the protagonist has a conscience, then he should be ashamed or silent when faced with accusations, rather than being reasonable. If the protagonist does not, then the motivation for what he does next is stupid. In normal novels, the characters are finalized as soon as they appear, but the author reverses the situation when nothing has been constructed in the first chapter, which is a taboo in writing. Author, if you look at Romance of the Three Kingdoms, Water Margin, and Dream of Red Mansions, the characters' personalities are finalized as soon as they appear. In Journey to the West, how many chapters did it take for Monkey King to change his personality?

I seem to have seen similar ones. Especially the part about stealing money reminded me of it.

This introduction feels like the author put his mind into writing the book. I look forward to the follow-up.

I thought the beginning of the story looked familiar, but it turns out it's the same author.

Come on, come on 😆 There are many magical girls and eunuchs, they can complete this unsigned work, they are strong

It's good-looking, just like this drama about the confrontation between human nature and evil nature.

Looking forward to the encounter between the princess, the protagonist and Vitrice! In addition, if the surviving princess grew up in a parallel timeline universe, and she is here now, is there still a princess in the original universe or is there no more? If it is not a parallel universe, it is a fantasy. Did the princess come from a dream to reality? If she comes to reality, will she still be her? Is it just something under the influence of the Ring of Memories?

Looks good, faster and faster, come on

The writing is quite interesting, no worse than the previous one

The writing is quite good, but the number of words is a bit short. If you can send me the saved manuscript, I will give you some advice 😁

It's 2:30, and I haven't read a new chapter yet. I finally have to adjust my schedule to the earthly world.

What are you talking about? I'll give you the vote for writing such a good-looking article.

The description of the male protagonist is very good, but the female protagonist is too weak. I can't accept the heroine. There is neither a stunning opening nor any eye-catching characteristics. He is a young man with ideals, but he is obviously too young and has no "ambition". But the description of ambition is unsatisfactory. Compared with the male protagonist, it is not good and weakens the image of the female protagonist. The benevolent see benevolence, the wise see wisdom. I think the novel is well written, the story is very good, and the text is very comfortable to read. It's just the heroine's description that I find hard to accept.

Oh oh, I remembered, I was here before Changing memories has real-life effects Then it stopped abruptly

Author, can you write with your eyes closed? I don't like reading second-hand words 🙂

Why does the beginning of the introduction sound a bit like "One Hundred Years of Solitude"?

It just feels like the main character is a little too nice sometimes.

The protagonist feels less like an evil god who is being hunted down many times, and more like an anointed knight.

😍😍😍😍

Well written, keep up the good work, author😁

Holy Mother Evil God is a bit funny

The author still can't forget the previous one. I thought it was a bit awkward so I didn't read it. Will you win this time?

They were all good reviews, so I had to read it 🪖

Not bad. Friends who are bookworms can give it a try.

The first chapter is very good. I gave you a monthly pass.

This book is good, very engaging, and the plot is very informative.

Maybe it's because I'm too old to read this kind of "fairy tale" with mediocre stories and characters. The author's writing style is relatively smooth and it is worthy of recognition. This book is worth reading. Come on! 😁

Come on, I came here for the last book, please support me