Begin Immortality by Slaying Demons

There's nothing bad about it. It's at the level of a textbook. I haven't seen a book like this in a long time. It's so enjoyable. The only drawback is that the author doesn't work hard enough. It's so short. If he updates 30,000 words a day, it would be so enjoyable.

It's really rubbish. You worked so hard to set up the East, West, South, North, and Middle Ten Thousand Demons Halls, but you didn't mention it right away after Hongze. So what's the use of all your hard work laying the foundation and creating Taoist soldiers? How about putting aside writing a collection of short stories?

It looked really cool at the beginning, but the routines in the later stages hardly changed. Sometimes some villains were created for the sake of the plot, and they were arrogant and domineering. Most of the people above were like this. They beat the younger ones and the older ones came out. After leaving Nanyang and reaching the Shen Dynasty, the basic routine was that something happened to the friendly side, the protagonist rushed to kill the villain, and then was surprised in various ways. I just saw that Ye Lan and I returned to the sect to become apprentices. The statue of the ancestor was replaced, and a group of elders came out to point fingers... I was worried that the routine would be repeated when I continued reading, but I felt it was a pity to abandon the book...

The main premise, let's talk about the author first, and summarize the comments in the comment area. As an old eunuch, he was reincarnated at least twice, with the same path each time. Let's talk about the work. The first four hundred and twenty chapters are a story with a beginning and an end, and the rest is another story. Before Chapter 420 (Nanyangli), it was flesh and blood, and the grievances and grievances were clear. Although it had flaws, it implemented the concept of "cheating means being invincible, and being invincible is very cool." This work is not a novel written by a novice (novices really can't write it). He is just like when you go for a massage, the master pretends to be tender and massages you to the point of ecstasy. After the massage, he even begs you for a good review. This is how I felt before Chapter 420. After Chapter 420 (entering Hongze), I fell out of the outline, my photos were taken off, I felt unhappy, and I started to eat books. For now, it's enough to watch before 420. As for the follow-up, everyone has their own preferences for radish and green vegetables.

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1. Change the chapter name, such as the chapter "The Decline of Qingqiu". People might be better off if the chapter name cannot be so big. When everyone looks at this chapter name, they naturally hope to see the corresponding content. It is a big taboo to not live up to the name 2. The author must know where the climax is. He can save the manuscript a few days in advance (this requires the author to save the manuscript), and explode at the climax. Even as some book friends said, you can consider updating one less chapter first and posting it together tomorrow. 3. The author should be thick-skinned. It is right to learn lessons in time, but he should not be too inconsistent. If you make mistakes out of context, it is normal for readers to criticize you. But after you read the chapter review and hurriedly stayed up late to make up for it, how can you guarantee your creative status in the next few days? It's okay that the author is a young person, but if he's a little older, he won't be able to recover from staying up late for several days, and it's easy to get into a vicious cycle. 4. Generally speaking, repairing broken chapters should be done beforehand, not afterward. Come on, author! The book is still very good

Advantages of this book: The pace is bright and refreshing. The writing style is also okay. Disadvantages: The routine is too repetitive. It's easy to get bored after watching too much. The supporting characters in the later stage are not three-dimensional Starting from the Thousand Monster Cave, the intelligence is seriously reduced. Every one is at the level of Demon King. After being led out of the cave, there was no one to guard him. The protagonist easily stole the weapon, which was still part of the demon's body. How did you live for tens of thousands of years with such poor protection? The same goes for stealing the Demon Emperor's eggs. Co-author These demon kings are all lonely, they all fight alone and have no subordinates.

I think this book is at its peak when you're not out of the city.

It's getting worse and worse. I frequently ask for leave and break the chapter, but I don't make up for it. My monthly votes were given to you before, but now it's really disappointing. Originally, I didn't want to criticize the author. I have endured it for so long and tried to persuade him to build it. But now he still has no repentance and is getting more and more useless. How can I give you a monthly vote?

To be honest, even if you become an immortal, there are some written about it, such as becoming a true immortal, and Zhang Dao Immortal Official, Golden Immortal, Immortal King, Immortal Lord, and Immortal Emperor. Sanxian: divided into unofficial Sanxian and Sanxian officials. Because before becoming an immortal, there is no 'origin' and the future is limited, so almost all of them can only be immortal officials, not officials. Zhengxian: divided into unofficial Zhengxian, Zhengxian officials and Zhengxian officials. Immortal officials held by Zhengxian are all superior officials; Sanxian are subordinate officials. An original avenue can only give birth to a true immortal. Zhangdao Immortal: These beings are all immortal officials. So, it is also called the Palm Immortal Official. The ultimate of an original avenue is the Immortal Official of the Palm Path. Golden Immortal: Masters more than one original avenue, and also holds the position of Immortal. The Immortal King: Rules the heaven and earth, is called the lonely Taoist, and presides over the world. There needs to be a symbol of becoming a king. There can only be one golden immortal becoming a king in the same universe. The Immortal King no longer needs the origin, and all the origins, laws, and orders of the entire world are for his use. Immortal Lord: There are eight Immortal Lords in total, symbolizing the past, future, heavens, worlds, order, chaos, life, and death respectively. In the balance of heaven, the Immortal Lord will not come out alone! It is inevitable that two opposites will occur at the same time. The Immortal Lord can make use of all the origins, laws, and orders that his own symbols belong to. Immortal Emperor: The Immortal Emperor uses all the authority within his own symbol, even the authority of the Immortal Lord. Two opposing deities compete for the throne. Only if they completely occupy each other's symbols can they become emperors. There are four immortal emperor vacancies, namely the Lord of Space, the Lord of Creation, the Lord of Time, and the Lord of Reincarnation. When you become an emperor, there will be external calamities from other immortals. You need to withstand the attacks of other immortals before you can ascend to the throne. Or become a true immortal, there are also Xuanxian, Tianxian, Jinxian, Daluo, quasi-sage, saint or a true immortal, Tianxian, Jinxian, Taiyi, Daluo, Taoist master. The Taoist fruits of the heavenly immortals are condensed, the three flowers of the Golden Immortal are gathered at the top, the five qi of Taiyi are heading towards the Yuan, and all time and space of Daluo are eternally at ease. The Taoist Master becomes a source, and everything in the world and heaven where he is is under his control, omniscient and omnipotent. Beyond the human world there can be the three realms of heaven, earth and man. Beyond the human world there can be the spiritual world and the fairy world. A Hongze cannot get out of hundreds of chapters. It takes tens of millions of years of life to reach the heavenly level of the Taoist realm. There is still the Taoist level in the combined Taoist realm. Before becoming a god, you can increase your cultivation level by practicing exercises. Now, the immortal methods can only increase your combat power but not your cultivation level. To be honest, it is estimated that the immortal Hongze is not even a million years old.

I started reading novels from "How to Make a Badass", which must be 20 years old. I added this book to my bookshelf when the author's book had just reached 180,000 words. I felt that this book would be popular, and it became really popular for a while. Book lovers who have been reading for a long time know that reading too many novels will cause reading fatigue. They feel that all books are the same and copied from a template, and there is no freshness. What attracted me to this book at the time was that it was refreshing, it had no ink stains, it was read in seconds, and its combat power was crushing. I loved watching the powerful battles. This was a different feeling from the books on the current rankings. But later, after the author moved in with another author, I felt that the author had changed. I felt that the author did not expect that the book would become popular and make money at that time. The author did not want to finish it too early, so he wanted to add layers to the book, to beat the immortals after finishing it, and to defeat the immortals and gods after finishing it. In this way, the book became the template article it is now, so the performance of the book is gradually declining now. I think it is very necessary to finish the first successful book at about 1.2 Million words to attract some of my loyal fans, and then carefully plan the second book and use the second book to improve the results. I'm tired of typing. I haven't been good at writing since I was a child. I write wherever I think of and it makes me laugh. The above is purely my personal understanding. Please lightly comment 🤐

The same thing has been mentioned repeatedly with slow updates and low quality. The war in Nanlong Palace was like child's play. The Seventh Son just hunkered down in the treasure land to protect the protagonist. They didn't even mobilize before the war to be too cold-blooded towards the affiliated forces. Is it difficult to bring the direct descendants of the affiliated sect to the treasure land? If the Seventh Son is really like this but the author also sets the Seventh Son to be stronger than Nanlong Palace 😰

Immortal Grass will definitely become one of Shuangwen's pinnacle works. It's so cool, the author is so good at writing, I'm so happy. I read 260 chapters in one go, and it felt completely boring. The plot is compact yet relaxed. The first thirty chapters can only be said to be at the level of bread and butter. The author focuses on evolving while writing. The more I read, the more enjoyable it becomes. You are really invincible when it comes to refreshing writing, kid.

Seeing it so far, I think the writing is really good. The plot and writing are both very good. The only thing I personally feel is that it lacks a sense of immersion. There is too little psychological description of the protagonist. It feels very awkward. To put it bluntly, it is just watching a game video. The content is about a person playing the game without talking the whole time. Then, if you watch him play, it probably feels like this.

It is not recommended to continue reading. Others take several vacations a year. This vacation is about once every two weeks, and it is updated every day. It is recommended to wait until it is finished and then read the reviews before deciding whether to watch it or not.

The author's writing of the drama is still a bit poor, and the feeling of real fighting is not written. However, in the overall situation, the plot is very compact, giving people a sense of oppression that a storm is coming, and the protagonist continues to make progress, which in turn subtly reflects another kind of "fighting". Shen Yi also wanted to live a peaceful life, but he never had the chance to choose.

The work is rated 6/10, which is quite satisfactory. Just like the God of Death, after defeating Aizen, the boss with higher combat power is also a routine.

The writing is actually quite good, and the pace is not as slow as the chapters say. It is a good experience to read it in one go, but it is really painful to read chapter by chapter. I feel that the plot bugs are innocuous. Why does Shuangwen pay so much attention to numerical values? The numerical values ​​will definitely be inflated. If read as three books, the bugs will not be so abrupt. It can also be seen that the author worked hard to fix bugs. In fact, this is not necessary. Sometimes it seems very deliberate. Overall, it's good. The author just writes step by step. Come on.

What are you doing? Let's get more characters. There's only one male protagonist right now. Let's get some more female characters!

Hongze

This book is a book with a fast pace and decisive killings. The characters are very distinct and unique. It is all about fighting and it is very enjoyable to read. Now that I have finished reading it from beginning to end, I can say that it is a very representative book that I can't bear to put down. It is what I keep reading. It is very difficult for book lovers, who have to endure chapter breaks and requests for leave. Now that the book is finished, Aunt Shen's story continues. After seeing the truth of the world, she still loves life and never forgets her original intention. I hope you and I can defeat every monster on the road of life, come on! ! ! ! 🤓🤓

I just finished watching Killing Spider I think the author has the appearance of a great god

Complete the book 😁 The book is full of fun and memorable points, and it has derived some breaking jokes such as "If you don't temper your body, you don't understand" and "Strong Fight" 😃 Although there is a suspicion of copying when changing the map, the rhythm is tight, the supporting characters are vivid, and there is no boring feeling[fn =1] The protagonist has not changed his original intention, the author often updates it, which can be regarded as not changing his original intention, and the ending is quite satisfactory 🤫 However, for most book lovers, the biggest advantage is that the book club group has daily updates and good pictures 😏

The author should work hard to start a new book. I came from a small website, and I often made cartoons better than novels because of the nonsense. But this article is rare. The animation and novels complement each other, the plot is not procrastinating, there are no big surprises, and the protagonist is not aggrieved. The protagonist in the author's works does not forget his original intention and shines with the brilliance of humanity. It has been a long time since I encountered such an ending. It makes me feel disappointed. It is a very good and refreshing article.

Finished spreading flowers! If I remember correctly, I should have been following it since the 100th chapter. Before I knew it, the previous plot had become a lot blurry. I just remember a dog monster at the beginning or something, and then to the ancestor dog monster, hahaha, the defeat of the watchdog. It felt weird before and after. It was like reading two worlds in one book, just like reading two books. It was quite magical, and I finished it without realizing it. I always think of updating when I am about to give up. The author is really slow in updating, so I can only read it after a week and a half. Yes, in short, it has a perfect ending. It is a good thing that it does not enter the palace. The author has a good rest and hopes to update the next book more quickly.

Keep fighting

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Little slut, I'll look at you hard when I get off work

As Shen Yi killed more and more monsters, the entire Boyun County was completely different from before. When the common people looked at the monster corpses that were transported back from outside the city every now and then, their faces were no longer numb and resigned to fate, and their smiles became brighter day by day. The officials in the Baiyun County government office are becoming increasingly excited, and more and more people are following Shen Yi out to hunt monsters. But the demons are in constant panic. The Huangpizi clan has been extinct. The few remaining three or five ape demons followed a group of foxes and fled to the snake lair of Mother Qinglin. The arrival of the Demon Suppressor is getting closer and closer, and the Yamen of Boyun County are hunting down monsters more frequently. Before the Demon Suppressor arrives, one of Shen Yi and Mother Qinglin must die. One night, when the moon was dark and the wind was high, suddenly a gust of evil wind blew up, leaving a mess everywhere it went. When the evil wind stopped, many people were horrified to find that their daughters were missing. The families who had lost their daughters went to the county government to report the case, crying. A total of eighteen young women were lost, including Chen Ji's younger sister Chen Jinyu. No need to think about it, you can all know that it was the old mother Qinglin who did it. Holding a piece of paper, Chen Ji hurried from home to the Yamen. The lights were brightly lit in the yamen, a group of common people were standing in the yard, and the yamen servants were arriving one after another. Looking at the yamen servants who were not fully dressed and running in a hurry, the people felt a little more at ease. Chen Ji handed the note to Shen Yi. "If you want a sister, give Shen Yi in exchange." The time is early tomorrow morning, at the foot of the mountain in the northern suburbs outside the city. Shen Yi looked at the note, then at Chen Ji, with a slight smile on her lips. If you believe in me so much, I will naturally not let you down. Shen Yi took the heads of each team into the room to discuss countermeasures. From time to time, government officials came out of the house, and then more government officials started to move. The people in the courtyard were waiting impatiently. After a cup of tea, Shen Yi and eight of his men were tied up and pushed out. The people hesitated and didn't know what to do. If Shen Yi was handed over to the monster and Shen Yi died, wouldn't they have to become the monster's meal? But if Shen Yi is not handed over, what else can be done? The government officials are still busy. The common people looked at the nine tied people standing in the yard and at the busy government officials, and they didn't know whether to feel calm or panic. "Is there no other way?" Finally, a gray-haired old man couldn't help it. "Master Shen cannot be handed over to the snake demon." The old man grabbed Chen Ji's sleeve and began to shed tears. Others also followed suit and begged softly. Seeing the people who were obviously worried about their daughter, worried to death, begging Chen Ji not to hand her over, Shen Yi felt a sore nose. Chen Ji patiently comforted the people and told them not to panic. When it was a girl, he would save Mr. Shen and come back. In this way, the people calmed down. At dawn, Chen Ji escorted Shen Yi to the exchange location. Eighteen girls were surrounded by a group of ugly monsters, and they were all terrified. Mother Qinglin and a few big demons sat aside, eating meat and drinking wine. The other little demons are still sleeping. The snake demon did not expect that Chen Ji would come so quickly, nor did he expect that he would kidnap so many people. Who wouldn't be happy with one more plate of Chinese food? Soon, the girls were replaced, and a group of government servants quickly helped the girls into the carriage and rushed back to the county. Mother Qinglin led Shen Yi and others towards the mountains. The carriage waiting to deliver the girl disappeared, and Chen Ji led the government officials to chase after the snake demon. Shen Yi stayed close to Qinglin's mother along the way. When he heard the sound of running behind him, he suddenly broke away from the rope in his hand. A dagger came out of his hand and stabbed seven inches into the snake demon. The other tied government officials also broke free from the ropes and started fighting with the monsters. The girls were safely returned to the county town. The government officials guarding the city closed the city gate tightly. A group of young people, holding sticks and torches, ran to the city gate. "Let us out." "We want to get rid of the demons together with the adults." ... The government officials couldn't persuade them anymore, so they followed them out of the city, leaving some young people to guard the city. By the time they arrived, all the monsters had been wiped out. And everyone in Shen Yi was covered in blood and exhausted. Looking at the people coming from afar, these men who fought bloody battles finally couldn't hold on anymore and fell down. Shen Yi was half-kneeling on the ground, supporting his body with a long sword. He looked at the monster corpses everywhere and smiled. He finally returned peace to Boyun County.

Although the sun has set, the heat is still raging on the earth. A few withered old trees stood beside the road, providing a little shade for pedestrians coming and going. In this weather, not only people are lackluster, but even livestock are drooping their heads. Chen Ji straightened his bamboo hat, wiped his sweat, and slapped the donkey hard on the crotch, urging it to follow the tall figure in front of him. As soon as he approached Shen Yi, he was hit by the smell of blood. The green clothes on his body had long been stained red with blood, and now they were evaporated by the heat and stuck to his body. The smell of sweat mixed with the fishy smell of demons made those who were close to him gag. The smell was not pleasant, but it surprisingly made Chen Ji feel at ease. He looked a little complicated and spoke tentatively. "What are Mr. Shen's future considerations?" Shen Yi didn't look back, "I'm hungry, let's go home for dinner." "..." He took a deep breath, feeling that he could not understand his former boss more and more. Wait until Baiyun County. The children laughed and ran past the two of them, pointing at the wooden cart filled with monsters and marveling. Occasionally a sentence was heard, "When I grow up, I will become a person like Lord Shen." The people on the roadside showed familiar smiles and greeted Lord Shen warmly... Within a few days, Shen Yi's reputation as "children dare not cry at night" completely changed. "Hey, come to your senses, your home is not here." Unknowingly, Chen Ji followed Shen Yi to the door of Shen Yi's house in a trance. He raised his head and saw Shen Yi frowning and staring at him. "Want to have a meal? There is no way." Chen Ji didn't know which rib was wrong, so he took out a few dimes of silver from his pocket and handed it to him. Shen Yi was a little surprised. He didn't know what happened to this subordinate who always looked down on him, but he subconsciously grabbed the money and put it in his arms. No matter what he does, can he still let the money he got fly? Chen Ji followed and crossed the dilapidated threshold, only to see a heroic woman with exquisite facial features in the cramped room. The beauty is hidden in the golden house! A word came to Chen Ji's mind. This was the Master Shen he was familiar with. Now that he has such a beautiful woman, Shen Yi will no longer be interested in his own girl. Thinking of this, he couldn't help but let out a sigh of relief, but somehow he felt a little disappointed. Holding a copper basin filled with crushed ice, Lin Baiwei blinked and looked at them curiously. She was wearing a baggy gray and white robe, with her sleeves rolled up, revealing her tender lotus root-like forearms. It's amazing at first glance. "Why are you back so early today?" She asked with a smile, turning her eyes to Chen Ji behind him, "This is it?" Shen Yi did not answer, only staring at the copper basin in her hand. Weird, why did Lin Baiwei change her gender? Stop eating mutton and become a vegetarian? "This is the fruit wine sent by the people nearby," she subconsciously raised the copper basin. "I heard her cry that you killed those wolf monsters to avenge her dead husband, but you accepted it because you couldn't refuse." Shen Yi was speechless for a moment, and couldn't help but think of the same scene in her previous life. Lin Baiwei scooped up a bowl of fruit stuffed food for him. There is crushed ice flipping up and down in the rose-red fruit stuffing, and there are a few slices of cut fruit garnished at the top of the bowl, with a layer of finely chopped dried osmanthus floating on the surface. He took a deep breath and felt the heat disappear. {"TopicId":"1006226817294336000","TopicName":"Summer Ice Drink Party"}