One Attribute Point for Every Half-Kilo of Meat

A Low-Level Shuangwen Liangcao Volume 1 The story of Changqing County has a score of 75, which is not bad. The intelligent water ghost and the vengeful and mysterious mist demon look like a demon in the beginning, but it lacks the writing power of Go away. Go away is very good at writing small characters vividly in the early stage, with flesh and blood and thoughts, and the protagonist's pretentiousness is just right. This author obviously lost points on details. Volume 2 The Baihua County Demon Division Volume has a score of 60. The author of this volume has greatly lost points in terms of details. Even the level of the first volume is not as good as that of the first volume. He even forgets that he has a family. After making a name for himself, there are still mentally retarded enemies who come after him, and there are no bystanders every time he is having fun. , And also wrote the snake girl to death, which can be said to be a failure. The author wrote in the article that the protagonist always wanted to become stronger, but wanted to protect his family, but there was almost no mention of family in the whole article. This sentence is the usual goal of the protagonist in the novel "Go Away". Unfortunately, the author failed to understand it. Volume 3 Jiangzhou War 40 points, repeated pleasure = only once, too monotonous, no plot, no foreshadowing, some just kill one by one, the reputation is never spread, and there are no spectators in the fight. Volume 4 The Story of the Great Zhou Dynasty 45 points. The war between countries is all about the Great Zhou Dynasty. There are no troops of the Great Zhou Dynasty. They are all aristocratic families and sects. In the end, the Three Esoteric Sects are destroyed. The writing is not very good The following can be said to have not changed the previous problems. The details, environment, emotions, and foreshadowing are not grasped. I can only describe it a few chapters in advance when using this character. The author can actually write better, but the author does not summarize the progress, and is complacent. I wish the author can reach a higher level next time

I just like Gao Wu novels where the body becomes bigger (100,000 feet), don't make it smaller 🙂

It feels a bit like

Not bad. You are much better than those novels. You have the most crucial point. You have really improved your level quickly. This is what attracts people.

Many of the demons written by the author are too humane. It would be fine to write less of them, but they would not be pure if they were written too much. The devil is a devil. Even if you can show humanity for the sake of temporary comfort or when you have time, you still can't change your nature. You can write something like this. I have watched a TV drama "The Burial of Fulian", and the demon setting in it is very pure. In a village, a cute little demon girl killed the little girl in the village. When the brave man wanted to kill her, she behaved pitifully and whispered "Mom". Later, most of the villagers decided to give her a chance, and then she was adopted by a couple who had a daughter. Only the couple who killed the little girl always hated her. The brave man decided to observe for a while. After a while, the little demon girl got along well with the couple and their daughter. Then tragedy happened. The little demon girl killed the couple and brought their daughter to the couple who had always hated her. She said that she had always sensed their hostility, so she gave the girl to them as compensation. The brave man did not have time to stop her. Zhi regretted it very much. When the hero wanted to kill her again, she behaved pitifully and continued to murmur "Mom", but this time the hero did not hesitate and cut her in half. However, when asked why she called "Mom", she replied that it was so that humans would sympathize with her and forgive her.

I liked it quite a bit at the beginning and wanted to call the author a little fuck, but after the dragon form, the plot became worse and worse🌚

Overall, it's an okay book. The protagonist's behavior is very consistent with that of a big-muscled bully. If he doesn't accept it, he'll do it. The disadvantage is that the protagonist's dialogue and interaction with others are sometimes childish. If the writing was better, he would be a god.

I'm glad the title of the book affected my grades.

How tall is the author? Why is he always in the habit of describing others as 1.6 Meters tall? His master is, and so is his sister's master at the Demon Suppressing Tower.

Mad, this is the first time I sympathized with a villain, it's so miserable