Mythical Card Creator: Myriad Ghosts Night Parade at the Start

After seeing it on the shelves, overall the author's knowledge level is online, his use of allusions is relatively good, and the gods he has recruited are all in good shape. But the writing style and plot design are too immature. For example, in the case of Dionysus, using a female supporting character who has not enough foreshadowing and is not particularly mature to forcibly lift up the hot-blooded dare is embarrassing and lowers the quality. And knowing that the opponent is a god who is difficult to deal with, he goes deep into the enemy camp without fully preparing a plan, completely destroying the original image of the protagonist who is knowledgeable, intelligent, courageous and resourceful. He seems to have knowledge but no brains, forcing himself to show off, and is passionate and explosive, which is very dramatic. In addition, due to insufficient foreshadowing of the relationship, the passion was forcibly stirred up by the text, and it was constantly reversed, reversed, and reversed, and even the enemies were spared in order to pave the way for the subsequent plot and other plot designs, which created quite a poisonous point. Currently looking at the issue of Gui Shui, it is obvious that the deputy director of the official side has divined that the protagonist is very strong and is the key, but the method of inviting the protagonist to participate in the action is to use the emperor to control the princes. The previously created image of a grassroots leader with strength and judgment has been transformed into a somewhat negative image of someone who has a high self-esteem and uses small means to manipulate the protagonist, which is quite awkward. Summary evaluation: Liangcao, a little higher, is worth reading. The rich knowledge of myths and legends and allusion descriptions have shaped the world view and heroic characters, and established an excellent background structure and core image of the story. However, due to insufficient writing and plot design or insufficient behavioral thinking, the characters cannot stand up, resulting in a strange and awkward reading.

I saw someone in the comments section was worried about this book. I also know that there are some senior things about this subject. I can solemnly declare that this book will never be supervised and will be completed. Because this is my first book, my goal is to finish it and fulfill my novel dream. I have no financial or work pressure, and my parents support me, so I don't care about my grades. Writing a novel I am serious! I want to do it as a lifelong career, just because I like it. Just watch me make cards and pictures for each character, write a biography of the character, and a small theater at the end of each chapter. You should know how much effort I have put into this book. So readers who like card-making stories, please feel free to read them, we will accompany you all the way, and we will achieve glory together!

Have you ever been a trickster? You just wrote random things without knowing anything.

Open a harem! Open a harem! Open a harem! The wooden protagonist who does not accept any distractions and cultivates wholeheartedly, male-channeled novels, strength is respected, the strong should recruit more confidante I hope the author can seriously consider this kind of card-type novel, there are almost no female readers, all are male readers

The author's writing style is not bad, and the historical research is also very good. Because these two points support me to continue reading. But here comes the problem, the author is very wordy. It's okay for the author to be verbose in normal plot chapters, but the author likes to intersperse a lot of verbose content in important parts of the battle. For example, I now see the part about the river god getting married. It was originally the two climaxes of the River God's coffin robbery + the River God's marriage. However, the part about the River God's marriage was too long-winded to explain the popularization of card security management. Forcibly cutting a plot that should be enjoyable to watch into many small pieces makes it very uncomfortable to watch.

The writing is very good. You can tell that he has been a card maker. He knows how to make cards very well. The writing is well-founded and reasonable.

The writing is very good, but the map feels a bit small. It revolves around a city. The biggest character I have seen so far is the director.

It's not that we don't believe you, it's that there aren't many completed books on this subject, even if it's a tomato. I wrote ten books at the beginning, eight eunuchs cut the books, one was unfinished, and one deleted the book and ran away I'd better fatten up before killing.

It's an unpopular subject, a newcomer's first book, a niche category, but it's not only popular in Sanjiang, it's also been promoted all the way to a high-quality book! Awesome! A role model for our generation! In the future, when you achieve greater success, you will definitely be talked about by more people. The legendary journey that started with this book.

The writing is okay, but the early chapters of Bacchus are awkward