The Pokemon Breeding Story

Have you ever run a petting zoo? Some of this is just random writing and assumptions.

You're cutting again? If you're not in the zone, just rest. There's no need to force yourself to write. This constant cutting will only make your already small fanbase abandon you.

The character's backstory is written like this... The mother runs an animal nursery, the parents died in a shipwreck, and after selling their belongings, they spent all their money in the orphanage in just two years? Does the protagonist have no relatives? It gives the impression that they were completely exploited and left without any family connections.

You've really made enough money; I'm never reading your books again.

Funny, he said it might be abandoned again, and that's it. 🤭😏

I can no longer write in the style of the Trainer book.

Don't you even have an outline for your books? I really don't want to criticize you; I quite like your writing. But cutting off two books in a row is outrageous. You don't treat your readers like human beings at all. Did you become burdened after writing one good farm-themed novel? If you're not satisfied with your writing and get criticized, you have to cut it off?

I hope this time it's a real resurrection 🙏🙏

I can't stand it anymore, I have to write one myself.

Now, we've reached chapter fourteen and there's already a Growlithe with hypnotic powder. That's bad enough, but the comments say they're even launching this service! They're making a huge fuss over nothing, and the background information at the beginning wasn't very well done. It feels so different from the book before last. Could they be selling accounts? 😥