A Pokemon Master’s Journey, Starting as a Park Ranger

The beginning was fine, but then for some reason, it started acting all high and mighty, and then suddenly it all fell apart. It's a classic case of creating trouble for yourself; life is too good for you, so you want to make things difficult for yourself. You want to build a house, you apply, but your reasons aren't accepted, so why even apply?

What have you been writing lately? A bunch of rambling, nonsensical drivel. You have to explain the same thing three or four times with "because," "therefore," and "but." We readers are here to read about farming and elves, not to read about social niceties. Social niceties can be a nice touch, but look at what you've been writing lately.

It's really pointless to force the tropes of Qidian into Pokémon. The game already has levels and VIP levels, but they insist on adding things like aptitude and Elite Four/Gym Leader levels. They already have Effort Values ​​and Bond Points to compensate for aptitude, but they insist on adding aptitude-boosting potions. It's really speechless. Don't say you don't understand.

I was enjoying the daily life of the forest rangers when suddenly a few chapters appeared featuring little characters stealing my spot. I don't understand the purpose of these gadgets, and I immediately lost all interest in reading. What if they add a dragon king with a pouty mouth later on? That would be even harder to bear.

Can the Forest Ranger class participate in the League Tournament? I remember watching a TV show where a Forest Ranger used Heatran to play in the League Tournament and even won the championship.

The Elf Alliance in the book isn't utopian enough, and the protagonist is too soft-hearted, making his personality not very likable. So, although the plot is good and the setting is excellent, I don't think many people will follow it. Modern people often feel that only what they can hold in their hands is truly theirs.

Even after 200+ chapters, it's still not satisfying at all. There are absolutely no exciting moments. This protagonist is such a submissive pushover, so saintly. So far, he's brought two Ancient Pokémon to the League, but I haven't seen him gain any benefit whatsoever. He's also obsequious to the Elite Four members. The more I read, the more speechless I become.

The plot is very detailed, even a bit tedious. At the current pace, the protagonist's strength should reach Champion level by at least chapter 1000. A single mission takes dozens of chapters, making the reader want to skip the middle and jump straight to the ending. Also, the protagonist's age of over twenty is somewhat unusual compared to other transmigrators.

I don't understand why an elven story would include a modern urban plot about vying for a job, lol. It feels so out of place. Of course, it's possible it's not entirely impossible, but it's just so strange and doesn't fit the overall tone of the elven story. If it had started as a completely realistic urban story with an elven theme, that would have been fine. But after hundreds of chapters, suddenly inserting this plot feels awkward. Hmm, hopefully this is the only instance.

Pokémon Cynthia