Detective Chen Yi

It is a detective/criminal investigation novel with very obvious advantages and disadvantages. The logic of case investigation and reasoning as the core is relatively smooth. It will not make you feel weird while reading, and there is no sense of mystery. People who just like to read case investigation and reasoning will find it very enjoyable. The first advantage is the writing style: the author's writing style is very good, describing the characters' demeanor, eyes, image, and actions. Especially when the protagonist asks, the expression of the person being interrogated comes to life on the page, making people feel more like reading traditional literature rather than online literature. Excellent case: This point has been mentioned in the summary. The logic is smooth, the twists and turns of the case coupled with smooth and vivid writing make it very smooth to read. Appropriate case rhythm: It is rare that this article does not have the "Conan is still alive" drama where he dies wherever he goes (there is a little but not much in the previous chapters). In more cases, it is a prepared investigation of various difficult and backlogged cases, rather than "someone just happened to die when the detective passed by." Having said all the good things, let's talk about the shortcomings The protagonist's image is fragmented: the protagonist is a detective who has passed through the soul and becomes a policeman. This leads to the protagonist taking both black and white when solving crimes, and being all-rounded. However, when interrogating people, he is impartial and inquisitive. A feeling of double standards emerges from the comparison before and after. Why did you turn a blind eye just now, and now you have to break the casserole and ask the truth? The detective is a professional image that wanders in gray areas or even the edges of the law, while the police must be fair and strict. The author wants to maintain the balance and unity between the two contrasting images of the protagonist, but for now, the sense of separation still exists. Forcing cool points: It can be seen that the author wanted to write a cool article, but felt that there were not enough cool points, and it was not fun enough, so there was an outrageous plot like Gudao 1V30 that should be found in the special forces novel next door. Personally, I feel that the cool feeling of solving a crime is enough. If you forcefully feed cool points to the author, the cool points will turn into negative points. Smoking is harmful to health: This article contains a lot of descriptions of smoking, book friends with bad lungs should read with caution ()

Just like the title, the various coercive measures are used inappropriately, which is too uncomfortable to watch. The author still understands a little bit, but not particularly. If the next book is about the same subject, I hope he can improve it. The public security organs handle cases in two categories: criminal and administrative cases. The measures used against people in administrative cases are generally administrative summons (which can also be referred to as summons). If the suspect fails to cooperate without justifiable reasons, the summons can be compulsory; for the items and sites involved in administrative cases, measures can include seizure, prior registration and preservation, sealing, etc. Decisions to deal with people's behavior generally include warnings, fines, and detention; decisions to deal with items involved in the case generally include confiscation (for tools used in committing crimes) and recovery (for illegal gains, that is, profits). Some types of cases will involve confiscation (the writing is used as little as possible and can be ignored). The measure used against people in criminal cases is generally a criminal summons (which can also be referred to as summons). If the suspect fails to cooperate without justifiable reasons, he or she can be summoned; the measure used for items involved in the case is generally seizure. After a suspect in a criminal case arrives and is suspected of committing a major crime, the public security organ can decide on criminal detention. The general period is 3 days. If a single person commits a single crime, it can generally only be extended to 7 days. If a person commits a crime in a gang, commits multiple crimes, or commits crimes on the run, it can be extended to 30 days; Before the expiration of the criminal detention period, the person must report to the procuratorate for approval of the arrest, and the procuratorate has 7 days to decide whether to arrest (this is also the reason why the maximum period of criminal detention is 37 days, that is, 30 days after the criminal detention + 7 days for the procuratorate's decision to arrest); after the arrest, evidence will be supplemented depending on the situation. After the supplementary evidence is completed, the case will be transferred to the court for trial and judgment. At any stage in the criminal case handling process (before judgment), the public security organs, procuratorates and courts can decide to release the person on bail pending trial. So when writing about suspects in major criminal cases, they are usually summoned first (can also be called summons), then criminally detained, then arrested, and finally sentenced. The author please don't casually write the summons as detention or detention next time. I think there are stories where arrest is directly written, which is very imprecise. Of course, there are many details that cannot be explained here. If the author is determined to improve himself, he can study the regulations. 😅

It's almost the 530th chapter. I've read so many of them and I have some feelings. The early cases were simpler. The suspects were all simple murderers or perverted murderers. The protagonist bit the people involved in the case and fought a battle of wits and courage. It was very interesting to watch. As I got promoted in the later stages, there were more and more problems. I heard that public servants are very sensitive. But it can't be excused if you don't get promoted. Some readers have objections. When writing about promotion, the forced credit was a failure (not to mention the hijacking of the school bus, more than 30 pregnant women went on a tour with a group, which was really ravaging my brain) When I started writing major cases in my later career, the plot of the case became a revenge story of the victim. Why do I have to write a revenge plot. People have an instinctive and simple sense of justice in their hearts. Everyone has the pursuit and desire for justice. But what is the role of the protagonist now? He is just a pursuer of the truth and a defender of order (similar to Kudo Shinichi/Conan, but I prefer Di Renjie and Polo). Maybe you would say that the police's job is to find out the truth. This is indeed true. But what Teacher Luo Xiang said is very good: some people lose their humanity after studying too much law for a long time. Same reason. Finally, let me mention something about the heroine. After the middle period, her existence is infinitely close to nothing. In the early stage, she was a beautiful forensic doctor. In the middle period, she became a beautiful woman whose father is the director of the department. In the later period, she became a beautiful woman whose grandfather is in the top group and whose father is the director of the department. The heroine's family gradually appears to give the protagonist more career background and support. The routine of a standard qd heroine. Finally, if the protagonist falls off the bridge and dies, it would be the best ending. After this breaking point, it doesn't feel like a book anymore.

Write less about the perpetrator's inner monologue, it's very boring.

The beginning is so exciting, but there are bugs everywhere, and the plot is suspended. The original Chen Yi and the current Chen Yi are not the same person. Now Chen Yi is wearing a clothes. The two people have different physical conditions and personalities. Now Chen Yi has also had a physical examination. It is found that Chen Yi does not have heart disease. The biological information of the two people is definitely inconsistent. It's too easy to be found out that they are not the same person. I don't know if this is foreshadowing. As a suspense drama, the identity bug is too obvious. However, the case itself is very logical and fascinating, and becomes more and more exciting as you go to the end. It also takes into account the characteristics of the novel and the emotion of the plot. The more you read, the more you get hooked. The dialogues between the characters are very life-like and colloquial, and there is no sense of fragmentation or ambiguity. In addition to the small problem that the supporting characters are relatively flat and not very distinctive, of course, this small problem does not affect the plot at the moment. The story advances at just the right speed. I feel like I will become a god in one book. I will stop it first.

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Did you write 🪞x as Detective Conan?

This book was not too toxic before reading about Tang Yiping's case. Regarding Tang Yiping and Tang Yian, it is obvious that the author is leaning towards Tang Yian and is too protective, especially other people involved such as Zhou Zhiyue. People who know the truth but do not report it and protect the criminals are biased. It is definitely in conflict with the protagonist's identity as a criminal police officer and the intolerance of the law. , And the protagonist often mentions his responsibilities when interrogating people. A person who often talks about his professional responsibilities can turn a blind eye to other accomplices in a case. From this point, this protagonist can be put on the clown list of criminal police protagonists. Without him, there is a double standard. Everything can only happen once and countless times. Second, why does the protagonist have such a clear sense of approval or recognition when writing about Tang Yian? In terms of the result, there is not much difference between Tang Yian and Tang Yiping. They are both criminals and murderers. It is just that the people they kill are different and the motive for the murder is different. It is obvious that the author's subjective subconscious recognizes Tang Yian's motive for killing and will subsequently help reduce the sentence and protect him. However, the law will not choose to punish you because you kill a bad guy or a good guy. If you are not punished, everyone is equal before the law, and you killed someone, then there is no difference between you Tang Yian and Tang Yiping. As a sympathetic person, the protagonist can sympathize with Tang Yian's experience, but as a criminal policeman, because of sympathy and subconscious recognition, he has changed some things he wants to change, so sit at the same table with Tang Yiping. It is all for your own desires. No one can tell anyone else, and you, the protagonist, will fall to the same level as the supporting role. Evaluation: Poison

Author of "Detective Chen Yi": Diligent Guan Guan

Monthly tickets are given, hurry

Author, why do you only have one chapter a day?

I regretted it after I fully booked it Personally, I thought the previous episode was pretty good. Viewed as a parallel world with different rules and systems, the Yunzhou Jade Case was pretty good before. When I booked it at half price, I happened to see that I was going to get married. The plot before this was basically harmless to me. As a result, the jadeite was highly poisonous. It didn't matter if a thief couldn't be caught. After all, it was normal for not many people to be caught. But you, a highly intelligent detective, were willing to talk nonsense with the suspect for half an hour. It's really speechless. After that, the invitation letter was even more disgusting. It was completely incoherent with the previous article. Criminal investigation is just criminal investigation. Why do you have to add these plots? Shuangwen does not mean that you have to work across industries and departments!

I feel inferior to Detective Nie. Detective Nie can solve your cases in at most three days.

Classic open high and go low. The protagonist is suspected of having the special abilities of Will in Hannibal. Personally, I think the first and middle episodes were okay, the second episode of The Seven Loves Case was average, and the second episode of The Jade Murder Case was even more outrageous. I was given an invitation to read the book. The author also admits that it is a good article. Let me not talk about the sense of separation between the criminal police and the detective. 1Vs40 is for skipping levels. I understand why the second half started to be led by the nose. Even if the villain threatens passers-by and asks the protagonist to go, I will accept it, or even if the higher-ups directly give orders to go, it would be better for you, the author, to have a fight first, and then ask the father-in-law to act as a double act. If the National Security Bureau has no one, it insists on the protagonist going. If there is a gun (banquet letter) in the front, it will be fired later. I am tired of this routine. In any online novel, if the protagonist doesn't want to go, the author will definitely let him go. No one will go if they say no. What age has it been and still write like this? Just like how someone helped the protagonist become a consortium decades later, if you ask ten book friends, 7 out of 10 will definitely hate this way of writing.

You are reborn, defend yourself, then work in the police, then solve the case fiercely, and fall in love by the way. There were many books like this over there a few years ago. Although the books there now are a lot of garbage, why did they start eating leftovers?

A brief personal comment: (for reference only) Advantages: 1. The language is not procrastinating, the plot is smooth and smooth, and the author has good writing skills. 2. There are no false evidence or clues that deliberately create suspense or inducement in order to highlight the complexity of the case. Bonus points for this! 3. The characterization is also good, and different characters have different personality traits. (It would be better if other important characters were strengthened a little more.) The protagonist's abilities are also clearly explained in advance, and there is no problem of establishing new abilities along the way while solving the case. 3. The plot of the case is relatively reasonable. I have seen some comments saying that the case is too simple, but I personally have a different attitude here: the background of the story is an ordinary city, and there are not that many highly intelligent criminals in an ordinary city. Even the city bureau's major crime team may not encounter a few highly intelligent criminals for more than ten or decades. The difficulty in detecting cases under this background lies more in whether the evidence is sufficient and whether the investigation ideas of the case are correct. Today, as legal inspections become more and more advanced, the investigation of most cases is much easier than in the past. There can be cases of high-intelligence crimes, but not too many. They can be added intermittently or later at the provincial level (or through cross-provincial collaborative case handling). 4. The timing of the cases is also well connected. There is no such thing as a murder case ending and another murder case immediately starting. Otherwise, everyone will have a hard time, and there will be a murder scene every day? In reality, although the crime team is very hardworking, more time is spent on searching for clues, but not to the point of committing murder every day. Even novels have climaxes and daily parts. (The protagonist goes fishing with his friends, and even I thought that the next step would be to enter the novel routine of catching corpses) After talking about the advantages, let's talk about the shortcomings (or areas that need improvement) 1. The title of this book... Is a bit off, I saw it several times but I didn't dare to click on it, and I wouldn't have clicked on it if I hadn't been in a serious book shortage, hahaha. As for whether to change it or not, this needs to be decided by the author himself. 2. The investigation of the case was too smooth (or the plot was a little off). In two or three cases, I guessed who the murderer was soon after the beginning, haha. Of course, this cannot be said to be a shortcoming. The author of subsequent cases can spend more time designing the plot. (Speaking of this, does this conflict with the "high IQ crime" mentioned earlier? Hahaha, the solution is still to refer to the previous one, and you can occasionally intersperse some complicated cases with ordinary cases) 3. At present, the entire narrative is centered around the protagonist, and the description of other characters is insufficient. In fact, you can add some descriptions of other characters, especially the descriptions of the suspects' actions or inner changes, and the storyline may be fuller. There is no big problem at the moment. Friends in Shuhuang can try to follow up in the long term. The above content only represents my personal opinion. If you have different opinions, you are welcome to communicate with me. I hope the author will continue to work hard! I wish the results will get better and better! 🌹😁

When I saw the part about landing on the island, I felt outrageous The author also explained it in detail, saying that this plot was for the promotion of the protagonist to speed up the plot, so the setting was a bit outrageous, otherwise there would be no chance to investigate cases across the country, so I accepted it The subsequent plot of landing on the island was true. . An unknown woman sent an invitation to a police officer (the protagonist) to attend a party on an overseas island. This party may be a party venue for criminals from many countries. After being rejected by the protagonist, the woman who sent the invitation vowed that the protagonist would definitely go. Platoon, you are still being forced to do the work of an agent as a police officer. The location has been arranged for you, so you might as well let the leader forget it It's outrageous. Also, after the protagonist refused the invitation, the Imperial City issued an order for the protagonist to go to this island. The agent who was assigned to be an undercover agent on the island came to the protagonist for a dressing task. When he came to find the protagonist for a dressing task, he directly attacked the protagonist. He was ruthless, but later said he came to try his skills. . . The protagonist's father-in-law is even more outrageous. When the provincial leader, father-in-law and the protagonist's agents were exchanging intelligence, they actually said "Could this be a coincidence?" When they clearly knew that the mission location issued by the superiors was the same as the invitation letter (the invitation occurred before).

It's outrageous that detective novels don't have golden fingers. Even if Sherlock Holmes comes, he still has to say 666 to today's investigative technology. Regardless of the author's writing ability, you can easily write the police as mentally retarded and modern technology as a joke.

Good, good, good! There's no pretense about answering the phone in the library! Didn't the author even have an undergraduate degree?

I don't mean to be disparaging. I've seen Chapter 350. To be honest, there is no case that impressed me deeply. They are all very ordinary cases. Any murder case requires the protagonist to deal with it. There are no other police officers in the whole city. There are no particularly mysterious cases and there are no old cases like that. "Maybe I watch this type more often. The protagonist's force is not obvious, and no murderer is difficult to catch. If he is caught, he will be arrested without any resistance at all. Since he has killed so many people, he knows that if he is caught, he will die, and he will not resist.

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The most annoying thing about this kind of start is that you have to prove yourself. Say goodbye.

It's very dramatic, and from time to time there will be some ancient urban soldier plots, where one person bravely destroys a criminal base 😰 It's too fragmented

There are more chapters about smoking than about non-smoking. If you smoke so hard, be careful of lung cancer. You can write less or skip things you don't understand. The library section at the beginning and the public interview section made me extremely embarrassed

Why don't you just write pig's feet? You frown, and the name of the real murderer springs to mind😓

The case after the explosion on the bridge is really speechless. Please don't subscribe too much at once to avoid regret. I'll skip it first.

I feel that this work is a bit private, especially in the later stage, which provides rationality for some of the outrageous behaviors of people of the same class as the protagonist. These rich and powerful people do bad things because they are good people or their parents are good people. So their behavior is understandable. Then they say that reality is like this, but does reality have to be right? How do you tell if he is a good person in reality? Moreover, this is a work of communication, and the rationality of these privileged behaviors is predetermined in the work. It's really hard to understand...

Going to a villa for no apparent reason just for the sake of the plot is still bearable, but what the hell is the point of forcing the protagonist to be kidnapped and challenged to an island alone? ? ? What I'm reading isn't a criminal investigation novel, it's about special forces in the city, right? Slip away, waste of money

The Tang Yian case is difficult to describe in one sentence. The protagonist did not close the case as a criminal police officer, but more like an ordinary person or a private detective. Although this makes the protagonist seem humane, it is inconsistent with his identity as a criminal police officer. After all, he is suspected of not reporting the knowledge to those three people.

How many times did you check the word count in Chapter 8? How can you be so selective when it comes to screening readers? Isn't this a scolding?