Mysterious Resurrection: The Black Hand

After reading seven chapters, Chapters 3 and 4 are too discouraging. They take the information too seriously. They casually tell the information about controlling the second secret, and talk about conflict and balance in such detail. Needless to say how important this early stage information is. Look at our protagonist's understatement and he can't say anything. He doesn't want Yang Jian to owe a favor. I said it's such important information. It's not too much for me to solve the ghost puzzle by myself. As for the protagonist, the information said that he still owes Yang Jian a favor. Brother, you need to lick more. You also told the headquarters almost all of your information without reservation, so that the headquarters can easily handle you in the future, right? What kind of moral character does the headquarters in the early and mid-term headquarters not know about? Yang Jian sells them whenever he wants. He basically doesn't treat the ghost controller as a human being, but as a consumable. He only wants to trick you into doing it to death. The kind of thing where he'll do it until he's dead...

Alas, the front part is really good, but why use a supporting character to make the protagonist and Yang Jian fall out? It's not necessary. Is it just for the protagonist and Yang Jian to have a fight? A fight scene? This gap was left directly, which was a bit uncomfortable to watch. Either you don't have a close friendship with Yang Jian from the very beginning, and they will become rivals directly after the conflict, or you can write as buddies and have a good relationship. . Why do you want to become a brother-in-law, and the relationship is broken by a supporting character? There are so many plots in the original book that can be written and pretentious. Why are you afraid that the plot will not work without pretense? Do you have to fight with Yang Jian in this situation?

To be honest, I gave up decisively when I saw a fight with Yang Jian. This place is really too poisonous. After working so hard to travel back and forth and become a ghost with human spirit, he completed the work that Xiao Wang only dreamed of completing, but in the end it still seemed inhumane. I really don't know why such a big change was made. Two good friends broke up because of a supporting role... I'm so stupid

Collect all kinds of ghost information. Name. Physical characteristics. Ability. Law. By the way, avoid it, otherwise it will be too unsolvable and I'm afraid the protagonist won't be able to defeat it.

I personally feel that being a classmate of Yang Jian, being an outlier and getting involved with Yang Jian in the beginning is a failure.

I thought the protagonist would get benefits by self-destructing himself, but in the end he just forced himself to become a thug. The protagonist has no brains at all if he throws away his bones.

I worship you, I have also written a novel Mysterious Resurrection: The Sunken World. I hope it will also have good results.

I don't know if the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's combat power. The beginning was very good, and he got puzzle pieces one after another. In the middle period, he insisted on suppressing the protagonist's strength, so that the protagonist could not get the puzzle pieces, and he became more and more frustrated. In the later period, he simply wrote dozens of supporting characters, and the protagonist looked like a passerby.

The characterization is not deep enough, including the protagonist, there is no charisma, Yang Jian is like a passerby without any ideas of his own, the original Yang Jian has a suspicious character, and here he looks like an idiot. It looks like a running account and makes me want to doze off

I feel like a fool who has been tricked. He exposes himself instantly in exchange for a little charity and reveals his biggest trump card. He has to pretend to be a ghost master or an alien. How can he expose himself directly?