1990: Criminal Investigation Files

I just read Chapter 3, and I have a question. First, the protagonist returned from rebirth. Why did he leave the billiard hall and dance hall when he knew that the family named Zhou would be exterminated. There were sufficient witnesses there. Second, if it was to prevent the tragedy from happening, why did you enter the house when it was already too late? The author explained that it was to find evidence. I don't quite agree. If you enter the house, it will only increase the suspicion.

I have read 169 chapters so far, and have finished six cases: the case of being mistakenly framed, the case of emotion transfer murder, the case of a criminal group, the case of serial murder, the case of kidnapping and the case of love-hate murder (for those who have not read it, try not to spoil the story based on my name) I personally think the first four cases are the worst and are very qualified. Personally, I think the best is the third one. The character creation of the protagonist, the use of past life memories, the creation of supporting characters, and the introduction of the case are all reasonable and exciting. The last two cases are relatively average. I personally don't recommend watching Kidnapping Case to people who haven't watched it. I watched the whole case in one go and felt uncomfortable. Compared with the suspenseful nature of the previous cases and the excitement of the protagonist's efforts to solve the case, this case has a lot of descriptions of the victim's situation and psychology. On the one hand, the protagonist is relatively relaxed and less urgent because of the ample time in his past life memory and the nature of the case is not so bad. On the other hand, the victim is tortured by the criminal and the pain and despair in his heart. The two are interspersed, just in time for the interaction between the heroine and the protagonist, loose and tight at the same time. To be honest, it highlights the feeling that the protagonist does not take the case seriously. The latest case I watched, I finally read it and felt that the story was quite exciting and reasonable, but it showed a large number of interrogation chapters (especially the early interrogation was ineffective), and I personally felt that it was a bit contemptuous of the search for physical evidence. The criminal's defense at the end is also a bit incomprehensible (this criminal was a former policeman who killed the victim who was rescued by his sister but was selfish and could be said to be repaying kindness with revenge) for the sake of his sister who committed suicide. The article also said that his circumstances were not serious and there was a high probability that he would not be sentenced to death. He had no reason to defend his confession and cause trouble to the police, who are the protagonists' friends. The two cases combined may result in a heavier sentence. I personally think it is inconsistent with logic. Although the last two cases I watched were not good, I still ordered them all. I still prefer the portrayal of the protagonist (especially in the early stages), who is peaceful, has high emotional intelligence, and is principled. He is young, does not smoke (this is my personal appreciation point), and the protagonist has a strong sense of responsibility and mission, trying his best to promote the development and popularization of criminal investigation technology. His values ​​are very positive. I like it very much. I hope the author can write better cases.

You were persuaded to quit in the first chapter. You have been wronged. Even if you are redressed, you will not be promoted. Working as a police officer until you retire is the best outcome. You are still promoted to the provincial department. Why is your father at the national level?

I gave up the case after seeing Lu Xiaoyue. What is more accurate is that I gave up the moment I saw the sentence pattern "Li Dong would not have thought that he would just cause something in the future". (This fixed sentence pattern is just like the first three chapters of the ancient time-travel novel, which describe the protagonist being blocked and beaten by the gangsters of the rich second generation in the bar. It is completely a cliché and poisonous point of the Internet novel) What is ahead of you is the fast and smooth rhythm of the Internet article. , But here suddenly some flashbacks and interludes were played, the uncertainty of fate, the protagonist's frustrations, the psychological journey of the victim's parents, the victim escaped and was caught back, the protagonist and the criminal passed each other... Inappropriate. It would be fine if you had written it like this from the beginning, but it is inappropriate to write it like this here, and it doesn't even have anything to do with your writing style.

The case written about Liu Fang is bullshit. What did the author want to express? To sympathize with the mistress and her son? Those who destroy other people's families first and then kill others should be shot! ! There's still a lot of empathy there! So fucking disgusting

The case is big enough, the era is real enough, the suspense is exciting enough, and the solving of the case is exciting enough. It is one of the rare period criminal investigation novels in recent years that has a realistic style and a wonderful story. The author has worked in the court for many years, and has sold film and television rights for the online articles he once wrote. His writing skills are very good. I recommend giving it a try.

One of the best detective stories in recent times, one is about the security department and the other is this one. The plot of this article is compact and not procrastinating. The protagonist is upright and decisive without being pretentious. Although there are some impressions of previous cases, the cheating is not big. The case is well-founded and reasonable. I follow the update every day and always find it unsatisfactory. The kidnapping case in these chapters is slightly inferior to the previous ones, but overall it is much better than many similar novels. It is normal for a work to have its ups and downs. Adjust it and create the following plot. Come on! (I rarely write reviews, but good books still need to be supported. There are too few comments in the comment area and not enough popularity)

I really like this work. I feel that these recent chapters are not good in terms of chapter reviews and personal feelings, so I would like to give some feedback from a reader's perspective. Of course, the author still focuses on his own creations. There are not many criminal investigation articles that I can read recently. I hope the author can work hard. First of all, the plot is advanced. The question is not whether to describe the victim. Of course, the victim can be written, or from certain angles, it must be written. Personally, I feel that there is a conflict in the rhythm of the two-line narrative. The victim line feels very urgent, but the detective line is too step-by-step and does not seem so anxious. It feels very contradictory like the speed of the soul travel 🔪, so it is uncomfortable to read. Each line of the multi-line narrative should be paved as much as possible. After the development, the climax should be controlled to appear at one stage. For example, in the recent paragraph, the victim's life has entered the countdown stage, and it is difficult for readers to separate and watch your protagonist fall in love. It would be much better to adjust the rhythm. For example, the front two lines advance to a novel reconnaissance angle, but do not directly feedback the next step. Turn to the victim line and let the victim struggle for life and death. When it feels like the death is imminent, the magic weapon will fall from the sky (the plot is consistent without skipping the scene), and then through the interrogation stage, insert flashbacks, and then expand on how the previous reconnaissance angle worked. You can even use the memories of the supporting characters to help the protagonist pretend. Then talk specifically about why there is no sense of urgency on the police line. The so-called feeling actually comes from the author's various detailed descriptions. For example, the author (dog head) who often kidnaps people must know that the golden rescue time in a kidnapping case is no more than 24 hours. In this case, it is really bizarre that the protagonist can go to a restaurant to eat safely. I guess The author must have never received the blessings of 996 or the blessings of 007 (funny), and Sister Hong's jumping face also feels like a forced intelligence. No experienced detective will let go of this kind of problem at first glance. Even the protagonist already feels that there is a problem, but still want to leave it until later? The police station doesn't work? Suggestions: For example, you can change the situation to a door-to-door search, and then Sister Hong overhears and runs directly through the back door to advance the transfer. The protagonist advances from another line, and the two sides compete to see who is faster. In this way, the tension in the reading can be maintained coherent. As for the victim line, at this pace, normally the victim would be cold. Violent crimes such as kidnapping and robbery can turn into injuries or even murders very quickly. There are basically not many opportunities to escape, and there is only one chance at most. Moreover, once the kidnapper shows his face, he will basically not consider letting the victim alive, and there will be no scruples in his behavior. Therefore, from the moment the escape fails, the victim basically has no way to survive. The countdown to life is usually counted in minutes. Now it can only be said that it is the will of the world to save one life? Looking at the author's previous description, it seems that the kidnapper wants to hide his identity in front of the victim, so he should have a certain understanding of criminal psychology. In this case, it seems too fake that Xiaoyue can still be intact, at least his legs will be broken, right? From this perspective, the protagonist's movements seem even slower if they are still progressing in half-day units. Based on the above detailed suggestions, the escape arrangement can reveal flaws during the transfer process, which can be exploited by both the police and Xiaoyue. Then Xiaoyue escapes and is captured, Sister Hong is exposed, and the criminal decides to break up the fight. During the attack, the police finally caught up with the progress, and then successfully rescued the victim. Wouldn't it be more coherent?                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                   novels are just for everyone to enjoy. The plot can have ups and downs but not lapses.

It's the case of the retired cadre's family extermination later. Because these veteran cadres used various methods to cause the accidental death of nine key figures who prevented the company from turning from public to private. Then a few years later someone took revenge and killed the entire family of these veteran cadres. There is nothing wrong with the case itself, but it is inappropriate to appear in the book. The problem lies below. Why were these nine people initially deemed to have died accidentally? Who identified it? The master of the protagonist, Lao Qin, was the captain of the criminal police at the beginning. Does it matter if he can get rid of it? So is Lao Qin stupid or bad? Calling him stupid, except for the protagonist who was wrongly accused before his rebirth, all other cases in the previous plot have proven that he is not stupid. If you are not stupid, why can the deaths of nine key people in hot social events be treated as accidents? Say he is bad. The plot also proves that Lao Qin is not such a person. If he was really bad, should Lao Qin be one of the exterminated families? So we can't think about this case in detail. If we think about it carefully, Lao Qin will lose his life insurance at the end of the day.

After seeing the mine explosion, there were a few points that I just couldn't hold back and wanted to stop vomiting. 1. The age of the protagonist. He became an assistant police officer at the age of 18. In the same year, he became a full-time member of the county criminal police team. In the same year, he served as the squadron leader, acting brigade captain, and brigade captain of the criminal police brigade. Generally, the captain of the county criminal police brigade is at the deputy section level. At the age of 18, the deputy section level can be said to be in my Unprecedented and unprecedented in the history of the country, he participated in provincial training at the age of 19 and was revealed to be promoted to deputy director of the Public Security Bureau. The 19-year-old deputy director of the Public Security Bureau will definitely not be able to pass the organizational and personnel test. No matter how many second-class merits you get, you will still have to wait for two years. 2. The frequency of cases is too high. The governance model of the county where the protagonist is located has been promoted throughout the province and even the country. It is the protagonist's political achievements. There are almost a hundred chapters about it. However, in this case, vicious murder cases, serial murders, serial killings, etc. Have occurred continuously in the jurisdiction where the protagonist is located. The social impact is very bad. Do you still want to be promoted under such circumstances? Although it is a novel, we must pay attention to the objective reality 3. The mining accident case in the provincial capital originally had nothing to do with the protagonist. The protagonist came to the provincial capital to participate in the province's outstanding public security officer training class. The author emphasized many times: All those who can participate in this training class are local backbone leaders. Some of them are deputy directors of the municipal bureau, with the proper deputy director level. The teachers who come to the class include leaders from the next door province, leaders from the ministry, and teachers from the criminal investigation school. The standards are not low. However, under such circumstances, after the mining accident, all classes were suspended, and all students joined the task force to start solving the case. Not to mention how precious the time of these students is, but the professors and leaders who come to the training are just left to hang out? You invite people to come to class, but when they come, you can't teach them? Not to mention that the level of the students is very high. Generally, the level of the team leader and deputy team leader is in the task force. When you come here, they become ordinary soldiers. You should consider the reality, right?