My Otherworld Runs on Game Rules

It's really good to watch. As long as there are no ambiguities, subterfuges and vulgar scenes, it will definitely be good to watch. Even if it's a little watery, there should be no vulgar poisonous scenes, otherwise it will really deduct points.

Your setting is not very good, if it is true that all the law knights in a kingdom are so rigid. Who among the superiors and common people can accept such a law enforcer?

The arrangement of the dragon beasts is too unreasonable. If you have gone through all the hard work to kill the almost eight-level boss in the second volume, then fighting some fifth- and sixth-level villains in the future will be unattractive. Even if the difficulty of the subsequent adventures does not exceed level eight, it will not feel more exciting, which will make it difficult for you to get a response from the subsequent climax.

After seeing the latest chapter, let's talk about the feeling of reading all the way. I didn't skip a chapter. Generally speaking, it allowed me to see the previous adventures in another world. It can be regarded as a hearty legend. However, the biggest problem is the problem of female supporting characters. Maybe the heroines were like this in ancient times, but in the current social environment, I feel that these women are too familiar. Who are you? How can you be so shameless and directly ask for something? How long have you known each other? I feel like this. Of course, I can still convince myself of the hero's qualities, but these female supporting characters give people an incongruous feeling. Maybe I still prefer the kind of protagonist who kills and burns all the way. I just don't eat beef. But in fantasy adventures, the hero and the princess have always been a good match. It's really an old problem. It may be that the author is not good at writing, so he didn't handle it well. Generally speaking, it is a better fantasy adventure story.

Everyone is welcome to give comments about this book here. Concerning this point, I hope everyone can put forward their own thoughts when reading the novel. The advantages and disadvantages can be directly stated. However, please describe the problem in detail. When I create, I basically use stand-alone code. This writing method will definitely have many blind spots in the field of vision, and it is also necessary for everyone to point out problems from the perspective of readers. Thanks in advance. Of course, when expressing your thoughts, please refrain from verbal abuse and personal attacks . In this case, I will directly delete and ban you.

The writing on the second map is too disgusting. There is no need to forcefully show a sense of justice. Also, why does the protagonist like to accommodate others so much? It's a bit courting death.

After the City of Art, the writing was too self-exciting, especially the ending of each chapter was terribly bland. It was basically just a lot of foreshadowing, and I picked up props for a second, and then went straight to the next chapter without explaining anything. There is also the inexplicable heroine. The writing is so flat that it is almost pasted. I wrote a bunch of female supporting characters and chose the one with the worst writing. There is also the inexplicable combat power at the end. I don't know the use of upgrading. The combat power really depends on the plot.

I just don't know what to say. This book gave me a good-looking but boring feeling. There are obviously ups and downs in the plot, but I found the content interesting but very bland. Maybe it's because I've read too many abstract novels recently, and this kind of orthodox western fantasy flow is a bit out of place.

It's not that the author's writing is not good, but it's because the author's writing is a little too good, which makes people feel uncomfortable! Forget about the teacher's daughter in the first volume, after all, she was still young at that time. But what happened to the red? We have been together day and night for more than 2 years, and then nothing happened. I turned around and started talking to a guy I just met, Wala Wala. Where is this going? Hilud was portrayed so well that nothing happened. What's going on with Alice in the back? ! Is the protagonist Schrödinger's eunuch? ! After so many years of adventure together, nothing happened, and now we are left widowed for a woman whom we have known for less than two months? ! The protagonist doesn't look like a human being at all, he just serves the author's requirements. It's so uncomfortable.

I feel that the scenes of Wala Wala are too detailed compared to Hong. She is a simple person who follows her inner thoughts. She reflects on things later but does not completely fail to reflect on them. I feel that this character is not very likable and too familiar. The protagonist is asked to take the initiative to reveal his own experience, and the protagonist doesn't have some thoughts about this ability; and he joins the team so naturally, which feels a bit stiff. To me, it kind of steals the show. I feel that after she came out, the novel's perception became worse. Well, personal opinion.