Game of Thrones: From Hogwarts to King’s Landing

If you keep it for a while, it will collapse. The hang-up at the beginning is too high. The author said that the world must survive, but the problem is that watching the game of Thrones, doesn't it mean looking down on the power struggle? Otherwise, wouldn't it be better to just read the Warcraft fan fiction? The most taboo in fan fiction is to test the bottom and rewrite the underlying structure. Once it is changed, it is no different from writing a novel by myself.

It's well written, but the self-talk in the first few chapters gave me a bad impression.

Many people don't understand some of the protagonist's actions, and even think they are poisonous. I don't know why you think it's poisonous, but I'll tell you a little bit about why I write that the protagonist comes first. The protagonist has been playing all the roles in Game of Thrones so far. There is no one who seriously wants to do something. The purpose is very simple, just like crossing the battlefield and killing the enemy like a general. I want to believe that many boys may have this kind of fantasy when they were watching costume TV series and war movies when they were young. For example, marrying a princess, this kind of fantasy, I think there must be more or less. The protagonist already has an almost unlimited lifespan. A force that has crushed the world, at least in Game of Thrones. So for the protagonist, there is only one thing he wants to do most right now, and that is to do all the things he has thought about but cannot do in the novel. The important thing to remember is to play, play! Therefore, the protagonist has never thought about developing any kind of civilization in the past, and there is no such thing as pure nanny. The protagonist is just playing. In the eyes of the protagonist, the natives in the Game of Thrones world are just toys that can be played with at will. For example, when I was a child, I think some men must have fantasized about arranging troops to fight. I think most men would have experienced this kind of thing like soldiers fighting each other. So understand what I mean, the protagonist is not nannying for anyone, he is just playing, but the way he plays is to play with the lives of the natives.

The protagonist's resume in your profile, if you are going to play Game of Thrones for some Machiavellian tactics, it would be really shit.

The name is quite ill-chosen. The World of Ice and Fire should have chosen an English name. It would look really funny.

Author, an invincible article is an invincible article. Don't write about upgrading the world. The first person to benefit is always the world itself and all the people, not the protagonist. What the readers are watching is the original Game of Thrones, not the Game of Thrones after the dimensionality you say, so don't write about upgrading the dimension, don't strengthen any characters, and don't do any magic resurgence. Any of the above points are poisonous points. Since your novel is an invincible novel, and its core is that it is enjoyable for readers to read, how do you write it? When the protagonist goes to Westeros, he simply becomes an ancestor. What you have to do is to avoid those plots that are clever and poisonous. The core highlights are the protagonist's pretentiousness, high-profile appearance, display of abilities, etc. When I become stronger, others don't become stronger, which means I become stronger. When I become stronger, others become stronger, that means I don't become stronger. Do you understand? Author.

It's okay, but there are too many long paragraphs in the book. You can divide it into different branches. The most comfortable thing for human eyes is 7-15 words per line. A paragraph should not exceed three lines, unless some details are described. There is too much information in one long paragraph now. Looking dizzy.

There is a movie called Fire Dragon Empire. There are many dragons there. As long as the male dragon is taken care of, there will be as many dragons as needed to form an army of dragons.

Although the content has just started, it will be very interesting if the plot does not collapse. There are a few suggestions for this book. First, it is recommended to place more contrasting life paragraphs after and before the protagonist. Two, do not add elements of the industrial revolution such as gunpowder, otherwise the balance of power will collapse even more quickly. Third, more oppressive force is needed, such as political plots such as city-state joint crusade against the protagonist. (There is only one protagonist with high-end combat power, and factors such as insufficient mid- and low-end combat power increase the chance of the protagonist appearing.) Fourth, describe more about the protagonist's subordinates rather than the protagonist alone. Fifth, add grand scene plots such as wars. (Especially describing the individuals under the protagonist in the war) Sixth, it requires a large amount of inquiry (can be queried by AI) about the history of the Middle Ages, Crusades, etc., To fill in the flesh and blood, and understand their living conditions at that time. Seventh, increase the conflict between gods and the protagonist, such as assassination and other plots. Eight, domination and conquest need to be thought about. There is a profound difference between the former and the latter. Ninth, the protagonist cannot intervene in production with higher forces. He can only appropriately adjust production relations instead of directly improving productivity. Above.

After reading through the comments, there are really many comments, and I feel like they didn't use their brains when commenting. For example, I saw a person who said that the protagonist is already a god-like being. Why does he not have a god-like mind and still fight with mortals? Oh my god. Do you want to see what you are talking about? The world's first Harry Potter children's literature in which the protagonist participates. The second Marvel, everyone knows it, it is the poor man's superhero dream. There is no such thing as xinxing. The third world is Game of Thrones. To put it bluntly, its alias is the Song of Killing and Fucking. Everyone wants to see the machinations in Game of Thrones. If you like machinations so much, go see the Ming Dynasty. I tell you, most readers who watch Game of Thrones watch dragons, ride dragons, kill and fuck. Why are you pretending to be saints here? The main character is so horny. The protagonist only has 8 female slaves so far, and he doesn't have a harem of 3,000 beauties. Why is he sexually repressed? I have seen too many unreasonable comments like this. Let me summarize it for you. The protagonist is a non-perverted version of a native of the motherland. Everything about him is pure play. He is an ordinary person with extraordinary power. Everyone likes to watch it so much. There is a protagonist with a heart and brains. You can go to see Xiu Xian or you can go to see Detective. What Game of Thrones are you coming to watch? You really think you're here to see the machinations. Game of Thrones, Machiavellian? In Game of Thrones, is he Machiavellian? Children are more powerful than him. What a bunch of outrageous talk.