Warhammer 40,000: Doom

The rest of the book may be a good book, but there are a few poisonous points in the first few chapters: the first system causes trouble and disgusts the protagonist, the second seals the memory of the protagonist waiting to be retrieved later, and the three golden chapters have a lot of settings.

One of the better ones written in the Warhammer circle. 10 Chapters a day😭😭😭😭😭

The author's work is not bad. I hope the author will continue to update it.

Everything can be said to be strong, it doesn't matter, but just don't brag too much. I read another Warhammer novel and picked up a Saiyan emperor who is as good as the king of all the good guys. It's so awesome that I don't know how to brag about it. A new recruit of the Imperial Army is as awesome as a Saiyan. A warhammer with a combat power of several hundred is a game with strong religious meaning. Just brag about space. Don't brag about the physical universe.

The evil Destroyer led the Night Guard to break into the subspace, burning, killing, looting and committing all kinds of evil. The powerful demons who originally thrived without care are facing extinction, and the subspace, which was full of vitality and everything was competing for it, was slaughtered into a dead silence The sound of bullets being loaded became the sound of the demons The death knell, the figure that destroys everything, is the lingering nightmare of the surviving demons In order to resist the invasion of the real universe and save the kind and innocent demons, the four strongest destructive powers joined forces and launched a desperate attack on Him in a certain network. The attack On the apocalyptic battlefield, the corpses of the great demons covered every corner of the webway, and the piles got higher and higher The angry Khorne could no longer hold back and jumped to chop Doom, but he was casually snatched and chopped in half by the giant ax Slaanesh waved Countless limbs launched backstabs, but unexpectedly, a chainsaw dismembered him at a faster speed, and the remaining body turned into a sky full of ammunition Nurgle recovered the wounds caused by various gun bombs at an astonishing speed, trying to persuade Doom to change his ways and fall into his arms. Seeing Doom walking towards him, the loving father showed a smile of relief, but then a BFG was inserted directly into his big mouth. The emptying of the magazine announced that the last ray of flesh and blood of Nurgle had been completely evaporated Tzeentch kept changing his body, and his unpredictable figure made Doom It was difficult for bullets to hit him. Just as he smiled proudly and was about to tell his plan, Doom, who was already impatient, put down his gun, grabbed him and pressed him into Nurgle's cauldron until Tzeentch completely melted in the scream, and Doom's palm remained unscathed Reluctantly Khorne, who had put his body together, had no time to grieve for his companions. He took his last breath and sat on the brass throne, using the corpses of the three gods and countless demons to completely seal Doom and the webway Khorne, whose life and death were unknown, sat alone on the throne, his withered and broken body maintaining the web. The seal of the gap in the webway, the surviving demons guard the webway, desperately praying that the existence that symbolizes destruction will not break through Maybe one day in the future, as the last old demon passes away, those ignorant and reckless new demons will unintentionally open the seal...

The protagonist loses his memory and becomes a baby who grows up in the Warhammer world. His personality has already been formed. Even if the original memory is retrieved later, what is the use? Can a drop of water pollute the entire sea. It can only be said that it does not suit my taste. Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was about the fun people coming to Warhammer to cause trouble, but I didn't expect it to be the growth history of an indigenous Primarch. 🙂

Like the title, I can only say that the author is sick. Although there has been a plot of eating green skin before, it was brushed off at least, and there is no description of roasting a whole person. This time the description of roasting a whole person is really disgusting to me. Can authors like you fix this kind of bad job in the future? Don't waste my money and time

You can't tell the difference between time traveler and doomsday warrior. It's just an indigenous original body.

I think the author's way of thinking has become rigid. I can already guess the plot he is writing now. I no longer have the interest to read it at the beginning. But I have a plan that will definitely make the author's ideas spring up and become a great master. But I need to see the author's manuscripts first so that I can make a reasonable judgment to help the author🤔

That's too long-winded. Are you here to see you introduce the background of Warhammer?

Why doesn't the full version of DOOM go to 40K?

As a novice author, I try my best to write a world with clear logic and full characters. Even though I am a fan, I will still write original and original characters. As for the previous dozen chapters, I personally think they are necessary. Thank you very much for reading the many chapters on background. But I saw that readers and friends were very controversial about the background of these dozen chapters, and even started to attack each other in the comment area. It's completely unnecessary. If you feel you know Warhammer well, you can skip it. If you don't understand, you can take a look and know what happened in the first place. Even some friends who know the background have read how the author explained the fusion background. I am particularly grateful to these people. As for those who want to have fun fighting as soon as they come up, I really can't do it. You can also choose to leave without attacking other readers. Fighting is certainly exciting, but just like Slaanesh's everlasting desire, it reaches a threshold and is looking forward to the next threshold. In addition, I am really grateful to those who understand and support the author. People in the book also have joys, sorrows and joys, and they are not just tools. Thank you all!

The plot is well written, but the author obviously doesn't have a clear understanding of the Warhammer universe. There are a lot of surprises in the plot. For example, there is no faster-than-light navigation in Warhammer, and the only similar technology is subspace navigation.

I don't even know what to say. In the first 18 chapters, you just wrote the introduction? No one was seen in Doom.

How many humanoid creatures in Warhammer are defined as demi-human. . . If you apply to the emperor, he will definitely agree. Even if you don't say it, the emperor will turn a blind eye. A small primitive planet, a group of primitive creatures. . You can protect this planet after all, and when you have time, you can invite the Primarchs over to have a barbecue and do some team building and so on. The strong should protect the weak. What's the difference between you and the devil? The Emperor is so busy that he is too lazy to care about this nonsense. As long as the network channel can be repaired, anything can be compromised. I remember that in the official history, many aliens mainly surrendered to the Empire and had no dark history of persecuting humans. The Emperor would not do such a cruel thing. At first I thought it was a team-building article on vacation. .

The beginning is amnesia. This ancient writing method is worse than the entire indigenous people.

Why are the Keepers of Secrets out? Why doesn't Slaanesh just let the Great Demon capture the babies of the original body scattered everywhere? Before 40k, the impact of subspace on reality was extremely weak, but before the book was put on the shelves, every two or three chapters would promote the pollution of Chaos. Chaos is so powerful, why don't most people in the empire, including the Primarch, know about Chaos?

Chapter 21 of Volume 2 gave me a strange feeling, personal feeling. Let me first state that I have not read the official novel. But I think the reason why the Emperor gave the Adeptus Mechanicus ally status is because fighting it will outweigh the losses. I don't know whether the losses will be great, but it will definitely cause serious damage to industrial facilities and affect the Great Crusade. As a descendant of the Emperor, the protagonist is inherently a member of the Empire, but he is asked to sign an agreement similar to that of the Mechanicum, which is a bit confusing. After all, he is returning, not joining.

The name of the protagonist's eldest son is too awkward, just like in oriental fantasy novels, there is a man named Yamamoto Ichiro, it is too inconsistent 😡😡😳

1. The four gods of subspace are ordinary people with personalities that break defenses, are hysterical, and engage in abstraction. (Basically, all the characters in this article have quite a lot of emotional fluctuations, but the reasons for the emotional fluctuations are quite reasonable except for the four gods.) Poison: Lack of divinity. Highlights: Easy 2. Goldfinger is quite invincible, with very high settings. Poison point: There is no original seriousness and despair of Warhammer. What to watch: It doesn't have the original seriousness and despair of Warhammer. 3: Patriotism (love it both in real life and in Warhammer) Poisonous point: The elements are not very harmonious, and there is a strong sense of dissonance. What to watch: A strong sense of pride?

Why is Doom so full of nonsense? Can you please stop writing about him talking?

Do you want to follow the original Doom story in the future, where you are betrayed by the Night Guard during the expedition, your teammates die in the subspace, you start killing in anger, the killing absorbs power, and then you return when you reach 40k? It would be great if you could really write like this, but the main reason is that the development you write now is too boring, not like the Doom Slayer, just like an ordinary cheating time traveler Primarch. But in fact, although the idea of ​​Doom is very attractive, it is actually difficult to write. What is not written is that the game itself is a fun game, and the plot is just an addendum. After all, the core of the game is rip and tear. Now your adaptation of Dark Age is not easy to write, so that means 2016 and Eternity. I can only say fast forward to the beginning of 2016.

Does it look good, everyone? I am not afraid of spoilers, so I will tell you the general plot of this book 🙂🙂

In this book, the Thunder Warriors don't actually have to clean up. The gene seed of the Doom Slayer doesn't care about age anyway, if the seed is implanted. The success rate will be higher, after all, someone can become a Thunder Warrior. His willpower is not bad, and he will make money by having one more chance to come back again.

Monk Wen? There is no heroine

The plot of Pandora is so weird. Why is it written like this and described in detail? Reading it in one go makes me feel sick to my stomach.

For the Emperor!

Twenty-first Legion

When will we get our memories back? It will be interesting to get our memories back.

It's a pity that the Soul of Loyalty was wiped out. The Emperor's great demon was wasted like this. It could have been thrown into the warp to fight fire with fire!