Swallowed Star: The Battle-Flame God

Emperor Yan is not a good bird. He was expelled from the human race because he selfishly attacked the strong men of his own clan (otherwise, who would drive away the Lord of the Universe?) Er Mingming is the Lord of the Universe, but he only occupies a secret realm to thrive as a member of the Yan God clan. Does the Lord of the Universe not know that very few tribesmen born in the secret realm can break through to the Master of the Universe? No, he definitely knew. Backed by the Mountain Guest, he is also a relatively powerful master of the universe. He can compete for a territory in the original universe to reproduce and become a relatively powerful top-level ethnic group. However, he only wants the secret realm for the Yan God Clan to reproduce. He probably does not care about the Yan God Clan and only cares about himself. Secondly, let me tell you that there is no need to rush back to the human race after the chaos is brought to order. The Flame God Clan has become a foreign race after breaking away from the human race. If they return to the human race now, they will at most be treated the same as the Lord of the Universe in Hongmeng. It is impossible to become the core member and pillar of the human race as before. Therefore, I personally suggest taking two paths. One is to simply stop returning to the human race and lead the Yan Shen tribe slowly on their own, otherwise they will lose their status. The other is that after the protagonist becomes stronger and kills Emperor Yan, the human race will initiate an invitation, but it still feels difficult to return to the core. Unless the protagonist shows extremely high talents, such as reaching the fifth level at a super fast speed, so that the human race can put down the humiliation and invite them again, otherwise it feels like returning to the human race is just like a Hongmen alien race, so it is better not to go back.

The protagonist can go to Qiang Emperor Yan's mountain guest disciple quota. The mountain guest has been disappointed with Emperor Yan. As long as the protagonist surpasses Emperor Yan's achievements before the Lord of the Universe, he will have a chance. In theory, anyone in the Yan God Clan has a chance, as long as he shows a strong talent in the divine power genre!

That doesn't make sense. Cody and Luo Feng both have 20th level law understanding. Luo Feng has the Secret Book of Nine Tribulations, does Cody have it? Luo Feng has Wu Yuyi, does Coty have it? Luo Feng has Yan Shen Clan general armor, Wang armor, and Coti? The clone of Luo Feng's Golden Horned Beast itself has 10 times the genes. If it is fused with the Blood Luo Crystal and reaches the level of the black warrior, it will have 100 times the genes. With the blessing of the Nine Tribulations Secret Code, the genes will be hundreds of times higher. You, Cody, have not even got the 100 times the genes. Luo Feng also has the most precious weapon, Wu Yuyi, which Chaos City Lord Mao didn't even give to Cody. The Wu Yuyi's combat power has been greatly increased. General armor and king armor can give a thousand times or ten thousand times the power of the realm master. This is the peak strength of King Feng. This alone cannot kill King Feng Peak. He still needs the air-locking arm behind him to block the space. Feimo's venom is super expensive, and the King's Peak reaction is very fast. You can use your divine power to wrap Feimo's venom and reduce the loss of your divine body. It is not cost-effective to kill a Fei Mo Venom who is at the peak of the title of King and has more net worth than the peak of the title of King. So, with dozens of times the genes of Coty, how can he achieve the peak combat power of the King without the ultimate treasure? You are completely comparing with Luo Feng to strengthen Cody's combat power. Immortal Luo Feng can kill 6,000 venerables, and venerable Luo Feng can kill the Lord of the Universe, the strongest. Can Cody do it too? If Cody can enslave King Feng, he can kill King Feng at his peak. In the original book, why didn't the Chaos City Lord say that Coty could kill the King of Feng during his time as a Realm Lord?

Keep comparing Luo Feng, keep emphasizing that he is better than Luo Feng, and always fall behind, and then continue to compare Luo Feng. Basically, these are the routines. When others see your fandom, they have read the original work, so there is no need for you to keep elaborating. Originally, it was good to have a Dou Zhan Sacred Heart, but you wrote it as a dog-licking mentality. Dou Zhan Sacred Heart have such a dog-licking mentality? How does the Great Sacrament of Monkey King compare with others in Journey to the West? Dog-licking Sacred Heart is about getting stronger when you are strong. After reading hundreds of chapters, it should be called Turtle Sacred Heart or Dog-licking Sacred Heart. A wimp awakening to Fight Sacred Heart is the biggest failure.

No... How could this mercenary group come up with this? Don't you know how big the entire universe is, how could you, a mere person like you, be working as a mercenary for others? For each ethnic group, it is either a matter of internal competition and domestic sales, or it is a direct ethnic battle. How dare you even think of setting up branches? Except for the protagonist himself. It's not enough to tie all the remaining subordinates together, so it's really involved in this, so what's the point of this mercenary group? And in this kind of ethnic conflict of interests, we either take sides directly, or we kill you first. How can we tolerate your two sides? Do you guess why the original book only mentioned the mercenary group internally and never mentioned it again? The more I write, the more outrageous it becomes, man. I don't mean to say it to you, but you are becoming more and more brainless, and you are copying these settings of the human race, which is really embarrassing.

. . . Please change the introduction. I don't have the desire to click on it.

The previous writing is good, Douzhan Xin is very creative, but after Luo Feng was born, he was licked in various ways, and given out one big opportunity after another. This is a fan, can you write your own book better? Can't you continue writing without licking? The meaning of Dou Zhan Xin is easy for readers to understand. Who hasn't been a bookworm for a few years? When you encounter a strong one, you get stronger. The more you fight, the stronger you are. At first, I thought you would arrange the law of war or the law of force in the later stage. Now, Gou Dao is really suitable for you. Luo Feng, the human race, is always on guard against you. I even licked my face and sent it to you. I read the book and changed it. It's called, Devouring the Starry Sky. I am Luo Feng's first human shield bodyguard and the first subordinate thug of the human race, the Yan Shen Clan!

The writing is okay, but there are many common sense mistakes that I still don't regret. Adding a second setting actually doesn't matter, but changing the original setting to speak for myself is annoying

Juaxe admires him very much, but since it's not all the way, why should he be so merciful and soft-hearted? After the giant ax falls, isn't it possible to protect the human race in one fell swoop?

Author, when writing about the world of Jin, don't give in anymore, no one will read it anymore. This Luo Feng is not the Luo Feng of the original world. This Luo Feng looks unhappy. The original Luo Feng values ​​​​love and righteousness.