Swallowed Star: The Lord Qian Wu

This latest plot is a bit toxic. The protagonist has always sacrificed for humanity, and the Zerg and the Queen have always sacrificed for him. In the end, he kills the Queen for humanity's sake. Where does a transmigrator get such a strong sense of belonging to humanity? The Zerg Queen, purely in appearance, might look more like an Earthling than dragons or apes. If they do that, I'll delete the book.

Giving an immortal disciple a supreme treasure is truly unbelievable. In the original story, ordinary Venerables only have medium-grade treasures, and only high-ranking Venerables who are doing well have ordinary supreme treasures. Qian Wu himself had less than 5 supreme treasure points before he died, and you actually let your disciple possess a special life form, treating a disciple who is of…

I'm just a working stiff, so I can only give you a small tip. This book seems pretty good, and it's really to my liking. I wanted to invest when it was around chapter 40, but for some reason, I couldn't, which I regret. Keep it up! Overall, there aren't any major flaws. After reading it for so long, the best thing about it is how satisfying it is.

Well, overall the writing feels a bit bland, but the pacing and exciting moments are handled very well, and the style is very similar to the original work. There aren't any major flaws; it kept me reading. If I had to point out a flaw, it might be that the author is a little bad at coming up with titles, but the writing itself is still very good.

The idea of ​​a mortal possessing the body of a cosmic venerable being is a problematic aspect, although most things can be explained by the system (it can be forced into a coherent explanation) 🙄. You've already possessed the body of the ruler of Qianwu Kingdom, so why not just call yourself Qianwu? Using the name Yang Hao is so jarring and doesn't sound good either. 😅 You're terrible at naming things.

Keep it up, don't follow the example of the first fanfiction about the Dryad and find a Zergling as a partner.

The premise of Swallowed Star, where beings above the Immortal level cannot possess another's body, lacks plausibility. What belongs to others will always remain theirs; the important thing is that your life shouldn't be a substitute for someone else's.

It takes the 17th generation of Giant Axe to reach the first True Ancestor of the Divine Eye Clan. How much do you look down on Giant Axe and how much do you think of the First True Ancestor?

Hurry up and write, Tomato is writing Luo Feng 2.

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