Swallowed Star: I Am the Holy King

If you're a reader drawn in by the title, you can look away now. The author is pure clickbait. The story starts with destroying the Tongtian Bridge, but after twenty chapters, the author hasn't even cleared the first level.

I've only read two chapters, and I feel there's a minor bug at the beginning: when the protagonist first opens his eyes after transmigrating, the scene is actually the Genius Battle Square in the virtual universe! Seeing this, I can't help but ask the author, is the protagonist sure he just transmigrated?

What was the author thinking? Did they think too many people were reading their novel? If you don't want the protagonist to possess the original universe, then don't write the plot about possessing the original universe. Otherwise, when we readers think the possession will succeed, and then suddenly it fails, don't you think there are too many readers?

To dare to directly reject the invitation from the Universe Venerable to become a disciple, is that really necessary? Luo Feng pretended not to see it at the time, dragging it out until the Lord of Chaos City accepted him as a disciple.

This book is ruined. The premise is getting more and more outrageous. How big is the gap between a Huiyuan level and a universe master? It's like an ant trying to study the universe.

The latest chapter really blew me away. A low-level Chaos Origin Lifeform is written to be on par with the Source World, and it's an endless chain of superpositions. Even in Snow Eagle Lord, low-level and high-level Chaos Origin Lifeforms are wiped out by world-level Chaos Origin Lifeforms. And a Universe Lord can violate the supreme rules and be on par with the Source Universe?

Why not write about the proper Swallowed Star? Why write about the Origin Continent? Do you really think anyone likes to read about the Origin Continent that wasn't even mentioned in the original novel? If you're going to write about it, you should at least mention it briefly in a few sentences, instead of mindlessly writing about the origin without distinguishing between primary and secondary points, letting the plot be swallowed up by your single sentence.

This protagonist lacks any of the typical protagonist traits. Other protagonists in Devouring fanfiction, whether brave and decisive or cautious and low-key, are at least not like a "treasure"—they try to solve problems themselves first, and when they lack resources, they fight and kill other races for them.

I just have to get this off my chest. These three incredibly minor, supporting characters, these old women, were utterly disgusting with their limited interactions. If you can't write romance, don't write it at all, but you did, and not only were they completely unlikable, but they also had to play around with all three of them – they were like pathetic lapdogs licking the soles of old women's…

Author, why are you writing increasingly toxic stories? You're even capable of stealing Luo Feng's opportunities, and what's most outrageous is that the one who stole Luo Feng's opportunities isn't even the protagonist?! How could you write such disgusting plots? If it were the protagonist, people would at most say you stole Luo Feng's opportunities, but now you've let the original ancestor steal Luo Feng's opportunities, I don't even know what to say about you.