Swallowed Star: I Am the Holy King

If book lovers are attracted by the title of the book, you can withdraw. The author is purely title-based and blew up the Tongtian Bridge at the beginning. As a result, it's already been twenty chapters and he still hasn't cleared the first floor.

I have just read two chapters, and I feel that there is a small bug at the beginning, that is, when the protagonist just traveled through time and opened his eyes, the scene was actually at the Genius Battle Square in the virtual universe! Seeing this, I couldn't help but want to ask the author, is the protagonist sure he has just traveled through time? Or has he traveled through time a long time ago, and the beginning of this paragraph is that he has just recovered his past life memories? I think it is more reasonable to switch to the second one! After all, the virtual universe relies on soul consciousness to log in. If the account owner dies, his account will be offline instantly (such as Croft in the original secret realm qualification battle in the original book). How can he still stand safely in the square? Even the Immortal and the Venerable who were present did not notice the slightest difference. This is totally unreasonable! Of course, this bug is not too serious and can be ignored...

What is the author thinking? Do you feel that too many people have read your novel? If you don't want the protagonist to seize the original universe, then don't write the plot of seizing the original universe. Otherwise, when readers think that they can successfully seize the original universe, there will suddenly be a failure. Do you think there are too many readers? As for seizing the body, you won't read the last chapter of the original work yourself. Saint-level will can try to seize the body, and god-king level will definitely succeed in seizing the body. Are you saying that people are talking nonsense? He is a god king, and there must be more than one example of his body being taken away from the original universe. There must be many examples of endless and long time. Do you think he can't understand it? What the mountain guest doesn't understand is that the protagonist is also a descendant of the God King's power. It was said earlier that a senior sister successfully captured the original universe. Since the body has been successfully captured, doesn't the protagonist still know the conditions required to seize the body? Finally, the author may have no idea about the will of the God-King. It is impossible for the God-King-level will, the True God of the Void and the True God of Eternity to hone such a will. At least it has to be a Chaos Lord to hone it. And the Chaos Lord seizes the original universe? How much improvement can be achieved? In the finale of the original work, Sishanke said that those who could seize the original universe could easily become the masters of chaos. This shows that most people who can seize the original universe cannot be the masters of chaos.

How dare you directly reject the Master of the Universe's invitation to become a disciple? How outrageous is it? Luo Feng pretended not to see it at that time and dragged him to the Lord of Chaos City to recruit his disciples.

This book has been scrapped, and the setting is getting more and more outrageous. How big is the gap between the Huiyuan class and the Master of the Universe? An ant is just trying to study the universe.

Reading the latest chapter really poisoned me. A low-level Hunyuan life is equal to the source world. Even in Snow Eagle Lord, low-level Hunyuan beings and high-level ones are wiped out by world-class Hunyuan beings. If you return to the Master of the Universe, you can violate the supreme rules and be equal to the Source Universe. After the world-class Hunyuan life, there are nearly 10 big realms that have been eaten? You have to have a certain degree of control over your fanfiction, right?

If you don't write "Swallowing Starry Sky" well, write about "Origin Continent", you wouldn't think that someone would like to read "Origin Continent" without even writing about the original work! If you want to write it, you should first describe it in a few sentences, instead of mindlessly writing about the origin with no distinction between priorities, and let you take it through the story of "Swallowing Stars" in one sentence.

In fact, this protagonist does not have the character traits that a protagonist should have at all. Other protagonists written by Devouring fans, whether they are brave and resolute or cautious and low-key, at least are not like "treasures". The first thing I thought of when asking for resources was to find Chaos. Later, when I first became the Lord of the Universe, I saw the giant ax for the first time and asked to borrow 10,000 treasure points. Is the human race in need of a father?

I really hate it. There are three supporting roles for this old woman who can no longer support the supporting role. I was disgusted to death by the little interactive plot you used. If you didn't know how to write emotional scenes, you wouldn't have written it, but you did it. It's not at all endearing, and you still played three of them at once, just like licking the soles of the old women's shoes🐶. I have already skipped a lot of it, but occasionally I write about these three women who are still addicted.

Author, why do you become more and more poisonous the more you write? He can do anything to steal Luo Feng's opportunity, and the most outrageous thing is that the person who steals Luo Feng's opportunity is not the protagonist? ? ? How could you write such a disgusting plot? If you were the protagonist, the most everyone would say is that you robbed Luo Feng of his opportunity. Now that you have allowed the original ancestor to rob Luo Feng of his opportunity, I don't know what to say about you.