Swallowed Star: Lord of Thunder

Brother, how can I put it this way? The first twenty chapters are really redundant and have no meaning at all. In addition to martial arts training and preparation time half a year in advance, other things such as girls in the school and gangsters should not be written. It is estimated that many people have escaped because of poison. It has a feeling of the ancient times.

Have no idea what the author is thinking? The cosmic level has to find a clone by himself. Is this teacher just for a living? The teacher I worshiped was completely useless. My previous subscription was in vain and I can't stand it anymore. There are also conditions for direct disciples: a thousand-year universe-level Tongtian Mountain, a three-thousand-year domain master-level Tongtian Mountain, and a ten-thousand-year world master-level Tongtian Mountain. Realm Master Dutemo Only when he reaches his peak can he be considered a direct disciple. This means that the realm master stage is completely free. What else do you need as a teacher? The most important thing in the realm master stage is that you have to wait until the peak of the realm master stage to become a direct disciple. What are you thinking in your mind, author?

I have also compiled the original information for a long time, and have written hundreds of thousands of words. However, I have not had time to update it recently, so I have not posted it. I will post the compiled information for your reference. Timeline: In a broad sense, the Great Nirvana lasted from 13 to 12 years, eight years. The actual Great Nirvana was the birth of the ultra-high frequency laser cannon from January 2015 to March 2021. In January 2015, humans who had already relaxed their vigilance suddenly discovered that the R virus mutated into the RR virus, killing 2 billion people in a short period of time (many fan authors commonly make mistakes: a short period of time is three months, not that it does not require time). During the period from January to April, the physical fitness of those who survived human development improved (note: humans must have also discovered that the physical fitness of animals has also improved, but it is not as good as It frightens humans, but they haven't transformed into such awesome monsters yet, so it's the top management of humans who don't care. It's not that humans are so stupid. They don't know that animals have also improved. And it's not the top management who doesn't care, not the masses. After all, cats, dogs and mice are several times stronger and will also pose a threat to the common people. ) The first beast wave in September 2015, humans developed hot weapons and could not stop the monsters. (Note: From April to September, monsters cannot appear instantly, let alone beast generals and lords. Human satellites monitor the global surface. It is impossible not to know that monsters have evolved like humans. Most likely they did not care at the beginning.) Another perspective: Thor and Hong, the original work is about half a year to God of War, that is, they will become warriors in January 2015 and God of War in July at the earliest (but this and 9 The Moon Beast Tide's human development of monsters without fear of missiles is a bit of a conflict, but it is not a complete conflict, because the strength of Hong and Thor may not be exposed to the human government. The others' highest strength can only block ordinary light firepower, such as pistols, rifles, machine guns, etc. They still have to die in the face of heavy firepower such as artillery shells. The reason is that they have always been the only one. If they cannot exceed level 3, how can they be considered the only one?)

Two huge pits. The first one is to increase value at every turn. To be honest, the nature of this relationship is that you are not from this country. The protagonist's attitude towards the country is all kinds of admiration and good opinion. There are also all kinds of inexplicable kindness to people in this world. Brother, you are a time traveler, not a native. The second one is to write about the Great Nirvana as an epidemic. The Great Nirvana should be chaotic at the beginning, because the death rate of the Great Nirvana should be very high, but the author wrote it in a very orderly manner, and actually started fighting with strange beasts at the beginning? Seriously. The alien beasts directly unified the good guys. I see no trace of human frailty or disorder. Such an order flood and thunder god cannot get up at all "because the top human beings must control most of the resources." The summary is that they are not out of control at all. In my impression, the Great Nirvana is at least virus invasion-virus outbreak-a large number of human deaths-biological evolution-the upper level panics and the lower level is attacked by alien beasts. But the fact is that the alien beasts mutate at fixed points, there is almost no mutation around the protagonist, there is no persecution in order, and there is no competition among the alien beasts to directly democratically elect the emperor to fight against the human race. Human beings are even more powerful, anticipating the harm of viruses in advance. The virus can be detonated in a controlled and reasonable manner, and the senior management is smarter than our teachers. It's a complete political machine. Is this still Nirvana? There are only two possibilities, the history of humankind's demise: "Although the alien beasts have been democratically elected, can they still keep you alive?" Or the end of the epidemic: "Please, if our military and political systems remain intact, what kind of waves can mere carbon-based organisms make?"

Dear author, you are mistaken about one thing. The protagonist cannot withstand the maximum speed due to his physical condition. The original Psychic Master never had this problem. You can say that the Psychic Master is weak in melee combat, and you can also say that the Psychic Master is not good at defense. But if the spiritual master cannot even control his own highest speed, there is obviously a big problem, because the spiritual master is the group that values ​​speed the most, or in other words, both sides value speed. The warrior must quickly break into the range of the spiritual master, and the spiritual master must quickly open the distance to carry out long-distance attacks. There is no funny reason because the physical fitness cannot withstand the highest speed, because the speed is not enough, the spiritual master will only become a living target. After all, spiritual masters and warriors are two distinct paths. There are many strong men who major in spiritual masters who do not deliberately cultivate their bodies. After all, genetic energy is something that can be strengthened in all aspects. At the worst, you can get a protective shield to resist wind pressure, right? In fact, this is unfounded worry. After all, the apprentice-level mental power is only two levels weaker than the physical body, while the warrior-level physical body is strongest not in attack or speed, but in defense. Yes, warrior-level monsters can already ignore heavy machine gun fire. How much weaker do you think the physical body of a warrior who can fight with warrior-level monsters will be? After all, the first condition for the warrior assessment is to kill a monster of the same level. The body of a warrior-level monster is probably stronger than ordinary alloys. Will the physical body of these levels be unable to withstand the speed of a mere sonic boom? I can probably withstand the speed of the protagonist's warrior-level body at tens of thousands of meters per second. After all, we are not facing this kind of attack directly, we are just resisting the wind pressure. To give a simple example, the minimum launch speed of a spacecraft is the first speed in the universe, which is 7.9 Kilometers per second. Do you think the spacecraft can withstand heavy firepower machine gun fire?

There is something wrong with the title. The order was reshaped in The Great Nirvana. The protagonist's strength is also one of the ceilings on the current earth. Except for the protagonist's grandfather, no one is qualified to call Xiao Yang Xiao Yang.

I always feel like the author has never read the original work.

The foreshadowing is okay, but to be honest, the outbreak of the Double-R virus is indeed a bit slow. After all, fighting is the main thing that devours the main body. I just hope to get through the Nirvana quickly. One thing I want to say is that the girl at the beginning appears too much. It seems that the author has the idea of ​​​​writing her as Xu Xin. I personally do not recommend it here because the author really can't grasp the heroine. After several appearances, she felt that the portrayal was very average and not as three-dimensional as the protagonist's best friend. My suggestion is, don't write her as a heroine. Her character and outlook are too different from the protagonist. If you write her, she will be the second Xu Xin, and you can only keep her at home. Instead of this, it is better to create a girlfriend who is a genius war. After all, if you want to write about the earth period, the genius war must go there. This kind of girlfriend who is also a genius is obviously more in line with the three views in terms of pursuit and personality. Although the status will become similar to Xu Xin in the middle and late stages, at least there will be one or two more appearances in the universe-level secret realm. I would recommend Qian Shui or Ai Chen here. The original novel has a female character, and everyone is more accepting of it. In fact, it was obvious from the last book that the author is not good at writing female characters, and the heroine really lowered the level a lot.

Author, you are so pedantic. There are obviously two ways, and you have to fight with the strength of a warrior. Warriors and spiritual masters are two parallel paths, and there is no upper limit. In this case, as long as you concentrate on being a spiritual master, this path will naturally lead to the sky. What does the protagonist say? Those who practice both martial arts and mental telepathy will only go down two paths if they are distracted. In the early stage, just focus on one path, either as a pure martial artist or as a pure telekinesis master. The warrior apprentice level has various skill levels, so the spiritual master must also be the same. The controller does not have the spiritual power to be the controller. I can't feel good when I should be feeling good. I have to inject water, but also suppress my strength, and even play the role of pretending to be a pig to eat the tiger. These two chapters of Gu Zao Poison really take up half of it. Let's put it this way, you can understand my understanding of Devouring fandom by looking at my book list. I am considered a fanatic Devouring fan. I can tell at a glance how to write about Devouring to be a big hit and how to write about Devouring to have problems. You said you didn't want to write a cliché Swallowing fanfic, but I can tell you that I have read all the works of Swallowing fanfics that are high-quality or above. Your book was okay in the early stage and had good foreshadowing, but now it has started to become watery. Take a look at what I have written in the last two chapters. The Great Nirvana broke out slowly, and it took two chapters to prove my strength. There is also a plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It is obvious that the strength of the spiritual master can kill monsters wantonly, but I have to find an excuse to hone the martial arts realm to fight with monsters up close. This way of writing is destined to fail to achieve good results. Let me put it here, no matter how good the writing style is, works written without grasping the essence of Devouring can only be considered a third-rate fan. What is the essence of swallowing? In layman's terms, it means "genius" and "shock". To sum up, it means "refreshing". Yes, it is the ultimate enjoyment. For example, the most basic requirement for current Devouring fandoms is to defeat "Bolan". Even those high-quality fandoms have all penetrated the seventh trial tower. Basically, they are all shocked and shocked. But even for geniuses of this level, the long ones they write are more than 3 million words, and the short ones are more than 1 million words. To put it bluntly, the book "Swallowing" is just a piece of white text. The word "shuang" runs throughout the original work. If a fan of "Swallowing" cannot grasp this essence, then the writing style is better than being original. If I were to continue writing the plot of this book, I would show my full strength to quickly clear out the more powerful lord-level monsters in the Jiangnan base city, and then cooperate with the country. The country would take out some rare treasures, such as weapons like arc blades, or one or two copies of the spirit of grass and trees, and quickly increase the mental power to the level of the invincible God of War. Then first clean up the powerful lord-level monsters in the Chinese region, and then clean up the global lord-level monsters. Minimize the number of breakthrough king-level monsters. During this period, always conduct live broadcasts to build the protagonist into a hero. Just highlight the word "cool" and that's it.

There were still relatively few books before crossing the Great Nirvana. I thought the protagonist would build a martial arts gym. Unexpectedly... He was still under the "country". It was annoying to have "chiefs" every time. The strong have the magnanimity of the strong. Respect for those who are stronger than yourself is nothing. Respect for those who are worse than yourself is just a hammer.