Swallowed Star: Lord of Thunder

Brother, how should I put it? The first twenty chapters were really superfluous and meaningless. Apart from the martial arts training and the six months of preparation time, the other things, like the girls in the school and the petty thugs, were things that shouldn't have been written. I guess they scared away a lot of people. It has a very old-fashioned feel to it.

I have absolutely no idea what the author was thinking? A cosmic-level being has to find their own clone? Is this teacher just sitting around doing nothing? The teacher they've chosen is completely useless. All my previous subscriptions were for nothing; I can't read any more.

I've been compiling materials from the original text for a long time and have written over 100,000 words, but I haven't had time to update it recently, so I haven't posted it. I'm posting the materials I've compiled here for your reference. Timeline: The Great Nirvana in a broad sense lasted from 12 to 13 years, eight years.

Two huge pits. The first problem is the constant emphasis on value. Frankly, this relates to the very nature of a transmigrator; you're not even from this country. The protagonist's attitude towards the nation is one of utter worship and affection. And then there's his inexplicable kindness towards the people of this world—dude, you're a transmigrator, not a native!

Dear author, you've made a mistake. The protagonist can't actually withstand the highest speed due to his physical limitations. In the original work, psychics never had this problem. You can say that psychics are weak in melee combat, or you can say that psychics are bad at defense.

The way you address him is a bit problematic. Order is being reshaped during the Great Rebirth, and the protagonist's strength is currently among the top on Earth. Aside from his grandfather, no one is qualified to call him "Little Yang."

It feels like the author hasn't read the original work.

The setup was alright, but to be honest, the outbreak of the dual-r virus was indeed a bit slow. After all, the main thing is the fighting and killing. I just hope that the great rebirth can be completed quickly. One thing I'd like to mention is that the female character appears too much at the beginning. It seems the author intends to write her as a character similar to Xu Xin.

Author, you're so old-fashioned! There are clearly two paths, but you insist on using martial arts strength to fight each other. Martial arts practitioners and spiritual practitioners are two parallel paths, with no difference in their upper limits. Therefore, as long as one focuses on the path of spiritual practitioners, it will naturally lead to the heavens.

Why would Jin Kong have an opponent on the Thunder Sky Bridge? They usually take the same routes. Otherwise, how would they detect each other?