Swallowed Star: Mixed Star Saint Lord

Is it the time traveler who has taken over the natives or the natives who have taken over the time travellers? This setting poisoned me to death. Brother, if it were not written like this, it would be outrageous. Either it would be done in one step, or it would be as weak as 🐷🐔.

The natives kill the time-travelers, so what do we see?

If the universe can support the strongest person, he can live forever

The main character in so many chapters is still the background, no wonder the results are not good

Let's get to the point, brother Lao, you can change the previous one. Let's change this mixed star to a time traveler, otherwise it will be too poisonous and it will be easy to persuade people to quit. This is a really good start, ugh

The protagonist is so powerful; do we still have to wait until Luo Feng comes out to join the plot?

Can anyone contact the author? Someone moved your book on Tomato, and even the author copied it 🙂

There were the strongest human beings in the first two reincarnation eras, and there was more than one This is the last book that said Qian Wu was a genius of ten thousand epochs. Obviously it should be tens of millions of epochs, but this book should not write about genius ()

Sleeping for 7 trillion epochs. An era of reincarnation lasts about 10 trillion epochs. This means that you have to lie down until the era of reincarnation is almost over. So what will you write during this time? You can't use hundreds of chapters to write a story line, right?

Bad review, the Skeleton Tribe has no souls and is nothing like a slave!

For example, epoch 1 is 10081 years, and epoch 7 trillion is more than 7 trillion seconds. How did you get 7 trillion seconds in the introduction?

The small universe where the strongest person in the universe is set in Devouring can only last three reincarnations, right? Only by going through reincarnation can we exist forever. There are only two holy land universes in the universe sea, and they can survive forever unless the owner dies or is destroyed by force.

So cool😰😰😰

When will the protagonist recover, or will he always be a background?

Isn't it possible to survive three reincarnations only by breaking through to the True God of the Void?

When the first chapter was released, you still wrote the instruction manual. When it was not released, you wrote the instruction manual, so I tolerated it and wrote all kinds of notes without any content. Can you bear to write this kind of instruction-style content today?

It seems like it was copied by Tomato

I have read most of your books, and the plots and writing are really good, but you have the same problem as most authors, that is, you are too ambitious and have no persistence You have never finished a book seriously, and basically ended it hastily The golden age of online writing has ended long ago. There is no guarantee of updates and completion, and it is impossible to become popular.

If you have a big brain, you won't care about your timeline, because according to the Tomato Universe's habit, the number 15 has no aesthetic value, and 10 or 12 are more perfect.

The writing is very attractive, but can the update be faster?

Author, your book "Across the Heavens" feels very good. You can continue to write like that, stitch together the advantages of each system, and find your own way. After all, spiritual practice is a spiritual practice, and it can be regarded as a technology. It does not mean that it cannot be integrated. It is indeed a good idea to learn from the skills needed by each world and find the protagonist's own unique path.

It suddenly occurred to me that the small universe was only a million light-years in size when I was first promoted. It is estimated that a single supreme treasure palace can cover the small universe.

Don't listen to these people's nonsense, just write according to your own ideas. It would be unrealistic if it were a time traveler, although the novel is also unrealistic.

Looking through the records, I found that you seem to have read the previous two books, but the starting level of this book is too high. The author should mainly write about the Origin Continent. After all, there is nothing good to write about in the original universe. But I read it and found that the protagonists in your previous books seemed to have a sense of rebellion. In many cases, the descriptions made the protagonists not seem like good people. Also, why doesn't the author, the protagonist, try to become a disciple of the mountain guest? You know how easy it is to enslave the fourth and fifth-level universe masters with the protagonist's realm. Why not simply enslave a universe master and let him guard the earth. After Luo Feng is born, directly pack all the earth's people into the protagonist's small universe? In this way, wouldn't Luo Feng become the protagonist? With Luo Feng's talent, even if one piece of the Star Tower is missing, I think he can still become a lord, and in this way Luo Feng can still become one of his own. As for the realm beasts, let me tell the truth, the realm beasts are dispensable. If the protagonist does not study the path of destruction, the realm beasts are meaningless.

Each chapter is too short. I finally finished it in one minute while waiting for the update.

The opening is creative, the mid-term is weak, and the late is confusing. First write a few fan novels to cultivate readers, and then create your own novels and seek TV series adaptations.

The whole picture is about saying that he will not participate in the inheritance of Duan Donghe

Why don't you go to the Black Stone Pillar to speed up time?

How much are you planning to add for the Mid-Autumn Festival and National Day?

Come on