Dungeon with Zero Margin for Error: A Floor Full of Last Words Makes Every Mistake for Me

The progress is slow, there is no climax, the chapters are too watery, the same kind of introduction appears too many times in the attribute panel, there are too many useless introduction links between character dialogues, and the end of each copy is too dull, there is nothing to suppress first and then promote. Summary: Like ordinary people writing diaries to record ordinary people's ordinary days.

The more I look at it, the weirder it gets. Isn't it a speedrun copy? What did He Yun write about in this part? I read this book for your speed-passing copy, not for you to decipher and fall in love in the real world. What inexplicable things have been written since He Yun? Can't stand it at all

NoneDrama</ b>Please let it go</ b>Heart ServeUse. I won't talk about the advantages and disadvantages, but just list some current features. After all, personal tastes are different, and book lovers can make their own decisions. ① If there is a fusion and you really hate the fusion, you can quit. The style of writing is also light and funny, not so heavy. ②There are currently no sandbox emotional lines and inexplicable descriptions of female characters. (I personally wish that there will be no female protagonist, Amen) ③The male protagonist's character and mentality have little potential for growth and are already complete. It saves the adaptation process to facing killing or bloody scenes. ④ Some of the descriptions may be ambiguous, and you need to understand them yourself. Of course, the best way is not to read the book with critical eyes, just take a look at it. Not surprisingly, the author should use voice input, and occasionally there are bugs to catch. ⑤ There are currently no very impressive clips, and there are no parts that are too poisonous. The overall evaluation is that it is food and can be eaten. 🙂 Others will be added after updates.

Isn't this a rules copy? I saw that the second copy suddenly had no rules 😥😥

"The copy is 0 fault-tolerant, and the last words all over the place have been made for me" Twelve Foods ➠ Start reading© {"TopicId":"586286831142961152","TopicName":""},{"TopicId" :"995701360950116352","TopicName":"Amway Famous Scenes"},{"TopicId":"909952577470070784", "TopicName":"One sentence short review activity"}, {"TopicId":"995007324090269696","TopicName":"Book review activity"}, {"TopicId":"1069538616370069504","TopicName":"One sentence book review activity"}

After watching the beginning, I feel that the explosion is not enough, or the intensity is not enough. For example, the first dungeon, a city-level disaster, felt like a village-level ban. It also feels like a stand-alone game, and the plot is very thrilling, but players follow the plot step by step, and it is still a linear plot. Overall, it's not as fast as the one-versus-three game. All in all, it doesn't suit my taste. I haven't read the rest of it and haven't commented much on it, but my intuition is that it's an ordinary book. It's good and can be read, but it's not popular enough. However, there aren't many popular ones on the current platform, so it's okay.

If the survival rate is zero, it means that there is a high probability that it will not give you the last words until the end. There is a high probability that there will only be last words in the early and middle stages. Then what can the protagonist do to pass the level?

If you write less about women, you won't be able to achieve this level of success.

Isn't it inappropriate for the protagonist to be a good person? If this is going to be on the shelves, why should he give the protagonist a Crusu bloodline? I really can't appreciate the protagonist of this kind of strange behavior. Even if I just get some normal bloodline, the protagonist is Crusu, the strange behavior species. I'll give it up.

1. Either join openly or not be a lone wolf. What does it mean to join Pipi? Is it convenient to jump back at any time? 2. Moreover, such a plot is very boring. He neither saves the world and appears holy in front of others, nor does he play around with the world carefree. 3. There are no beauties, no friends, no life, no stories in the NPC. Each chapter is just a copy of the abyss? Please take a look at how to write the plot of an infinite stream like Infinite Horror.

It's a funny article, don't take it too seriously. An evil god is actually disgusted by human sexual habits. Well, it just follows the author's wishes. One minute of determination can make a difference.

Can Shen Nong explain this book?

I started skipping reading when I got to more than 200 chapters. I persisted until chapter 256, when I couldn't stand it anymore. The lack of sense of agency is caused by multiple reasons. 1. For example, the Mortal Poison from the first dungeon is a very powerful artifact. It is indeed very useful later on, but the description of the item is unclear. Many people don't understand its use at all. The protagonist makes this equipment coolly. To put it simply, the protagonist's behavior is inconsistent with the reader's thoughts. The protagonist's behavior follows the author's outline rather than thinking like an individual. 2. The NPCs in the next few copies are all manipulated by the author and have no autonomy. That goddess was basically raised by the protagonist himself, so I won't go into details. Schultz around Chapter 200 has an omniscient crystal, and he also knows that the protagonist is an outsider, and he regards the protagonist as a cousin who has taken away his own cousin. This is completely off the mark... Applying this logic, you can directly give the protagonist a copy, take away the son of the supreme god, and then the supreme god can pass on the throne, so what else to write. 3. The protagonist himself has no characteristics. Whether he is a reckless man who is pushed all the way, or a career-focused careerist, or a childish sixth man, or aloof or funny, everyone will watch. But the protagonist has a little bit of everything, but is nothing... To sum up, the early stage is okay, but as it goes on, the protagonist feels more and more like a fun-loving person without his own personality. Everyone just wants to have fun when they are watching. Who would want to be a fun person all the time, and there will be no motivation to continue reading... The first 200 chapters of this book can still be read, I hope the author can work hard, I can't follow it anymore

I've read Chapter 200, and it's getting weirder and weirder as it goes on. The protagonist's behavior and thoughts don't look like a normal person, it's a bit inexplicable, and the author's perspective is also weird. Anyway, it won't make people happy. If you want to read it, it feels like a waste of money, and there are too many inexplicable bad interactions.

Dungeon part: Protagonist's outlook: not too distorted or darkened, a bit self-conscious but quite comfortable Protagonist's double quotient: The content of the dungeon is very comfortable and nothing too 👎🏻 Plot arrangement: The plot is relatively compact and the development is relatively reasonable Plot reasoning logic (reader's perspective): Basically all the information that can be given is given. The protagonist does not have much content outside the reader's perspective. There is currently no major information conflict Dungeon rewards: There are not too few rewards. It is very comfortable to try it only in the dungeon Now Real part: Personal experience in the real part is poor Protagonist's observation: Unlike the dungeon, he basically becomes a little deaf and blind, basically like a white version of the account. No matter how strong the dungeon is, as long as he returns to reality, he will directly turn into a crayfish and be played crazy by the supporting characters, which is very depressing Drama Emotional reasoning: There is a huge perspective gap between the author and the reader. The content that seems reasonable to the author can only feel aggrieved and uncomfortable for the reader, and there is not much explanation. It is said that there is a lot of foreshadowing, but the essence is to use information gaps to mislead, etc. Plot arrangement: Unlike the copy, the protagonist starts from the wise man All of a sudden, he became a fool and was forced to move forward. He also had no desire to explore or anything, and he had no remedy after suffering losses. Plot reward: Basically not used, most of the content sounds lofty, but it was given a title, a classic example of the Kingdom of God on Earth. It looks very powerful, but several copies are of no use at all. Should the protagonist group be deaf and blind, should they be discovered by others, and their calculations should still be the same Author experience: Interaction: There has been high-intensity interaction, and readers will explain when they are confused. Many contents will be explained after they are explained. I understand, but it would be better if the content of the explanation can be reflected in the book Perspective problem: Through the explanation, it is not difficult to see that the author writes stories with a limited perspective from a higher omniscient perspective, but many of them are not written or explained. The most uncomfortable thing for me is every time the drawing As for the craftsman part, many of the protagonists are weak. It would be much more comfortable if the grade and introduction of the painter were raised to a higher level. This part is the part that the author knows the readers do not know. The gap is too big Record my current personal reading experience and write it down after reading everything so far.

Completed the B-level dungeon perfectly at the beginning! The s props are combined with the later selection reward fusion and combined with a B-level erosion crystal core to get an s props that needs to be charged later, as well as job change props, which are completely useless. I endured it, thinking that there would be a solution later, but I saw that the third copy was still sucking blood and had no help. It was not as useful as a C-level revolver. Thinking of the infinite terrifying growth trap, I was unable to realize my combat power quickly, and I was directly beaten to death. I think this prop has a great effect. If you want to join the national team, let the country support this prop and quickly meet the requirements for usability, but this is the result? The difficulty of the dungeon is targeted, and the protagonist, who has no sense of tension at all, chooses a bunch of growth-type props that he cannot afford, which is really funny. The most unacceptable thing for me is that it has been 20 years since the space server was launched, and I still want to go to the dungeon with the idea of ​​​​fighting alone. But whenever the server is opened, I don't want to talk anymore. Others have money to buy space antiques, and I am still struggling to save money by advertising, and pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger in order to take the civil service exam, without even thinking that I will be targeted if I enter the dungeon. The protagonist's use of this talent is for the country to send people to take advantage of the situation, and everyone will be happy if it passes. If it fails, he will leave a last message, lock the dungeon, and let the protagonist form a team to conquer the game. Believe it or not, as long as the protagonist reports the first S-level props and career change props plus talents, and then joins the national team, the country will help you fully charge the S-level props, quickly change careers and add a team to cooperate with your teammates? Is this difficult for a space that has been serving for 20 years? A bunch of think tanks help you analyze the props and dungeon strategies. I am really speechless when I see that I am worried about tens of thousands of coins later. I am full of petty ideas. I either start a business alone or join the national team. The more I read later, the more annoying I am. Is it fun to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger? Do you really think this is a game? The above are all personal complaints!

The painter part is very poor. If not, the painter is still in the Huangjie, but the force of the description is already stronger than that of Huanxi in the Lijie. It is also written that Huanxi beat the painter and the protagonist defeated Huanxi. In reality, the painter treated the protagonist like a clown. Both the protagonist and the painter are from the wilderness. The protagonist's cheating is already the ceiling of the wilderness. So the question is, who is the painter who is better than the protagonist? The administrator who targets the protagonist is the painter. This can explain why the painter fools the protagonist around. If there is no misunderstanding, the painter is from the wild world, then the painter is the real protagonist, and he has the strength of the rational world in the wild world. And if the painter is the protagonist, then this is not surprising.

I have read 54 chapters so far, rational evaluation 1 The plot is excellent. The biggest reason why I insist on watching it is purely the plot + the character of the protagonist written by the author 2 The economy can be regarded as collapsed. The reason for this is because your author did not write clearly in the main text. One reader said that it might be a reader problem. Every article involving dungeon currency and prop prices was said to be problematic by a large number of readers. What do you think, author? It is true that you have expanded and explained what you said in this chapter and in the comments, but the key point is that if you don't revise or adjust the content, it will be useless. Not all readers have time to read the comments to see your expanded explanations. Most readers will feel crushed as soon as they see the content and do the math in their minds. The manager is outrageous, and then they will change the book. No matter how good your plot is, What's the use? You have to actively attract readers for the free chapters in front of you. Everyone has read a lot of unlimited flow copies. If you want to be better than other similar books, you can't make mistakes on problems that similar books make. In this way, everyone will default in their hearts, oh, it is another unlimited flow copy flow novel that you can't use your brain to think carefully about. Just watch the plot. 3 The trumpet account that readers complain about the most. This question is all the same. It doesn't matter whether you can open a trumpet account or not. How to write it well is crucial. But the author just isn't better than other books of the same type in this aspect. It's not that the writing is bad, it's that he doesn't clearly feel that he is different from other books that open a trumpet account. Even ordinary books won't work now. It's too volume, there are too many books, and plainness means boring and uninteresting. In addition, the most critical point is that the following 4 is to open a trumpet and return to reality. The first thing is to be found by the Bureau of Investigation, and then the main display data is extremely mediocre and useless, full of direct contradictions. You either don't open a trumpet account and are a lone wolf, or you open a trumpet account and enter the investigation bureau to show your rapid development of talent, but you have to shackle yourself without getting any benefits. When you enter the investigation bureau and be controlled as a waste, I am confused. What kind of operation is this? It's hard to say whether the author has the ability to fight. I really can't understand it. I want to read on, but I'm afraid that there will be more problems later. 100 Points is perfect, 60 is a pass. The starting point of this book is 75+. I'm not afraid of big poisonous points. It's easy to find big ones and adjust them. What I'm afraid of is accumulation. The so-called little poisonous points that make up the difference are one of the basic reasons why good books cannot be popular nowadays. There are too many small poisonous points. Most readers just read the book with the idea of ​​making do with it and will not be motivated. I hope the author writes better and better, don't let his talent go to waste, persist, and summarize his own problems.

Erin

Author, how did you come up with such a disgusting character as the painter? A villain who appeared in the early stage treated the protagonist like a 🐶 for hundreds of chapters, and said that the artist set the B level to be high. This is not a question of whether the artist is strong or not, but a question of how disgusting the character B is to the point that readers have been disgusted for hundreds of chapters. If this character skips a few more chapters, more people will abandon the book.

I'm a little disappointed... First, your title becomes more and more useless in the future. There is almost no death information in the subsequent copies. The feeling you mentioned that others have finished exploring the road is completely gone. Second, the cheating is too big, making the whole story feel like a stand-alone. Not only does the protagonist have good things and high attributes, but more importantly, your protagonist is specialized. It is a hidden mission, which creates a feeling that other players will never know the true appearance of the copy. In all aspects, other players are not even considered backgrounds. There is no difference with them or without them. Thirdly, maybe you want to create an invincible flow, but the protagonist is still too smooth. The author of Shun himself complained that the opponent was specially giving him a booster pill... Invincible flow is not such an invincible method! The feeling now is that the protagonist is invincible without any effort...

The author couldn't help but made a fuss about it in the middle of writing The second-floor boss was killed like a dog by a 🐷corner The result came to reality. The Mazai and the third painter below the second-floor boss treated the protagonist like a fool. Those who didn't know thought that the third painter was the final boss The author didn't finish high school, can he brush up on his logic at his own expense?

When the world is in crisis, will anyone really be happy to see trouble happening in other countries? I think that except for xj gangsters and kb elements, no country should take pleasure in others' misfortune, or even resort to resorting to tricks. Just like a building, would you watch the unit next door smash the load-bearing wall? Although it is not a unit, it is this building. In the past two days, there was an earthquake in Myanmar. There are so many people in Myanmar who are crazy about kidneys. Are some of you gloating about it?

The plot at the front is okay, but it gets worse as you go to the back. No matter how smart the protagonist is portrayed in the dungeon, he is just as stupid in reality. The Painter Incident is really written in rubbish. I knew that there was a painter who was causing trouble, and several real-life events pointed to the gallery. Alas, I just didn't know that he was the painter, and I was told that there was nothing wrong with him several times. You must have a pig nose on purpose. Moreover, the Management Bureau depicts a pig-nosed person, and does not have the vigilance and responsibility that an extraordinary management agency should have. There are a lot of moles, and every time something happens, a pig's nose is useless. The four major organizations could not defeat the cult in the wild world, and they could not defeat the Guangming Society in the political world. He sounds like he has a big reputation, but he has no shit. There is almost no intelligence function, and everyone on the roadside is better than them.

The poison died at 260. I really can't stand the role of the gardener. If the author can't write a high-IQ villain, I suggest you not write it. I suggest you write more copies. Obviously the previous copy was very good-looking, but the gardener had to come out to disgust people in reality. Isn't the copy of this book very good? Author, you use your strengths and avoid your weaknesses! When the gardener dies, I'll come back and take a look.

After reading Chapter 60, I can only say that the first dungeon at the beginning was so well written, but now it is not completely unjust. A series of plots starting from the clone are eroding the goodwill brought by the first dungeon. It is a pity.

Because a stupid person wanted to cancel the highlight, he suddenly deleted the post. He thought about it, but he was afraid that if I didn't ask for it anymore, what if all the good brothers thought that I didn't need it anymore, so I could only post it again. Good friends, it's on the shelves soon. Please read it and collect it. Newbies really need this. There is nothing else I can do to repay you good brothers, I can only promise to put it on the shelves (on the same day) and update it regularly. Punch. Jpg

The more I look at it, the more something is wrong. It is not just a little green text that makes the male partner happy. It appears too many times, hinting at her love affairs, and even giving her a make-up and order to cheat her.

All ordered, all I can give is given, update soon 😡! ! !

Seeing that the reviews in the comment section are not high, the Shennong people came out to talk about the poisonous points and see if I can accept it.