The T0 Gaming Guild Saves the World

I have read nearly 300 chapters. How should I put it? Personally, I am not opposed to love plots, and the author writes the love plots after the readers have a certain understanding of the characters. This is actually better than many authors. But the problem is that it's too repetitive... Interaction between Tudou and Siren: Siren's straight ball - teammates heckled - Tudou blushed. Potatoes and French fries (reality) interaction: Daily beginning (cooking/exercise) - spend most of the chapter writing about the figure of French fries - accidentally speaking - both of them blush. The same routine is very sweet once or twice, but it is indifferent three or four times, and no matter how many times it is disgusting. Especially during this period of time, the plot has progressed to a critical point. The supporting characters are provoking, the strategy has reached the key point, something is wrong with the candlelight, and a lot of things are waiting to be filled. The result is a plot that the young couple has repeated countless times. The plot of the book itself is like a retro-style online game with protagonists, which I like, but the love story is a bit boring. I should slow down a bit after a while, forget about the things I didn't like before, and then continue reading.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I looked confused. I only saw the protagonist fighting monsters and picking up dropped items, and then I didn't know anything else. And I didn't see anything exciting. The content was too bland. This is not a daily article, this is a game article. The first dozen chapters are written like this, just like reading a running account. How can this book get better results?

I'm just halfway through watching it, and I feel that there are obviously more descriptions of love, which weakens the plot and the game. I feel like I'm trying to make up for it. It's not that I can't write about love, but that the author can't write about love. There's no feeling, it's too bland, I blush at every turn, and then there's a tacit understanding between the two of them in silence. The frequency of blushing is too high, although the starting point is correct. In fact, quite a few authors don't know how to write about love, but it's a bit too difficult to describe love from the blushing point of view. The game is pushed so slowly that it loses the early highlights. There are too many things to write about. The multi-line advancement and changing of perspectives mean that everything is wanted. The plot is barely clear. You have to say whether it is exciting or not is a matter of opinion. Realistic CP is done in the game, and it is done within the team that qualified for the World Championship. There are more than one couple. It doesn't matter if the love story is good, but if it is not good like the author... It has the beauty of a small life with dumplings as a side dish and white rice. "The teammate who participated in the professional league together is my girlfriend, and the two of them worked hard to win the championship." Then the daily content is that the male and female protagonists tease each other and then both blush without further content. No, it's too abstract. I always feel that it will be seen in the preview of the new quarterly series of Little Days, and the production company will be P9 Having said all this, I just want to ask if there will be too much description of romance, CP, and game content of Fries' Parents. If there is more, I will find another one.

It's okay to watch it fresh at the beginning, but the more you watch it later, the more boring it becomes. The best part is probably the story of the strategy copy, but it starts to get boring later.

But I have to give up first. I spent a lot of time writing the plot with Miss Siren. However, after she became a couple with another teammate, the plot of Ms. Siren was completely different.

Why don't you post the news about your new book in Laoshu? If I hadn't clicked on your author's homepage on a whim, I wouldn't have known you had written a new book.

The French fries and Kesha part doesn't go well. It's normal for teammates to like teammates, but it can easily ruin the team atmosphere if it turns into an emotional dispute...

How could anyone like to be fucked? Chips and Shake, I can't figure out why.

I just saw Mint from another world being killed. Candlelight said that this is because people's hearts are sinister. This is a bit outrageous. If you are just like the smiling coffin in Sword Art Online, that's all. Using things in the game to point fingers and forcibly raise the moral standards of the protagonist group is a bit low-end.

It looks great both in PvE and daily. It's just PVP, it's a complete mess. The plot of crazy belittling and asking the protagonist to prove himself is really a mess. I don't care if the protagonist is scolded and belittled, as long as the scolder pays the price, but what I have seen so far is nothing, other than a slap in the face? Everyone knows that you are just traveling through another world, just using a game skin, so there must be elements of mystery and fantasy, so why not make those who scold you pay the price? For example, what captivates the mind and kills one's own family, relatives, friends, wife, children, etc.? Then I suddenly realized that I had committed suicide by jumping off a building. Why wasn't there anything like being brutally tortured and killed by fantasy elements? How does it feel to just get slapped in the face? They have to be killed, and they have to be brutally tortured to feel good. The above review ends at chapter 88. I would like to ask if it would be convenient for the people behind you to tell me. Is there any punishment for those who scold? Or is it just a slap in the face?