Surrounded by Strange Things, If You Can Survive Until Death, You Will Be Considered a Victory!

The writing is terrible and messy. Why does Feng Shi choose the protagonist? What is there about the protagonist that worries her? The two people have no intersection at all. Why do they choose the protagonist? And the subsequent development is also very confusing. Isn't it said that reading is possessed by literary spirit, and aliens cannot get close? Then why can Feng Shi still go to the academy? After reading it all, I feel confused, and I saw Oh wandering around here and there.

It's all gone. The author has deleted the chapter "I'll write it well this time" that he posted in another eunuch novel. Eunuchs are habitual offenders and they pretend to be dead. I suggest the author find a job in a factory and stop writing new books. It's disgusting.

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Is this guy named Feng so casual? He is already dead, yet he goes to the protagonist's room with such arrogance, causes trouble for the protagonist, and then forces the protagonist to help. Why? Don't you understand the principle of taking before giving?

The plot of this book and even Goldfinger are very reasonable and useful, but ridiculously strong. From the current point of view, the development of this book is a battle of wits. The restraint of props and the plot are a test of the author's writing style and ideas. Just one update a day is too slow, and it is easy to maintain a book and die, but it is difficult to survive.

Nnd, it's you again, I'm talking about how the writing style is so familiar, I believe you again 😡 write well, this book is really popular

Whether the male protagonist is strong or not is the first important factor for me when reading a book like "Liao Zhai Zhi Zhi": Too many stories about "Liao Zhai Zhi Wei" write that the protagonist has no cultivation talent and relies solely on various opportunities. In a world view with gods and ghosts, I still prefer that the protagonist has the talent to become an immortal.

Oh, I just got interested and it turned out to be a eunuch.

Now that I have read Chapter 15, I want to ask when Feng Xileng will die.

I don't know what to say about the male protagonist and the female protagonist, but they feel so uncomfortable. When I read the book, I felt it was a good book, but I don't know why, but I just felt uncomfortable. Maybe I don't like their relationship 🥱

A nice book, at least I had a good impression of it in the early stages. Let's talk about it in detail Advantage 1: The world view is large enough and interesting enough. Although it has not been expanded, the introduction has already shown part of it. This is the basis of a good new book. Nowadays, many books directly name the highlights and main lines of the full text (talking about the voices of those who follow the trend). Advantage 2: The current male protagonist's IQ is at least online (time 2023 August 2), and there is no problem with the current description of the male and female protagonists. At least I have a ruthless impression of the character of the eldest lady. She was really ruthless when she wiped out her entire family in less than 3 chapters. (I'm also curious about what the male protagonist did to make the eldest lady have such a special attitude towards him. Could it be Shirou doing the high jump again...) Many authors have no problem writing about other things, but when they write about women, the female characters have no characteristics (the lack of characteristics here refers to those who The same innocent white moonlight, noble and cool attitude that is established in Dou Po, and they are still doing this after 23 years), the male protagonist is like a pig or mentally retarded when he meets a female, it is really not that, the male protagonist is the projection of the author, does the author need to belittle himself like this? Other advantages are not apparent due to the few chapters. Let me also talk about the shortcomings (it is actually a suggestion to the author) Disadvantage 1: The author has only written two books. Without knowing whether it is a trumpet, I will first default to the newcomer. The first book is Eunuch Training, and the word count is very short. I don't know if I can survive this. But a newbie? Please encourage me. If eunuch 2 3 will be discussed separately Disadvantage 2: The setting of combat power and classic problems have not been reflected so far. My suggestion is to think carefully about the initial design. It is best to be vague and have room for follow-up operations Disadvantage 3: Female arrangement. Currently, there are only two women, and it seems that they are both female protagonists. If new characters are introduced in the future, the old female protagonist will often not appear (the ancient heroine has never returned) Xun'er...), My suggestion is that women are diverse, just as there are mothers, sisters, elder sisters, daughters, friends, bosses, subordinates... They don't all have to be female protagonists. Just like the junior sisters in My Senior Brother is Too Steady, aren't they deeply rooted in the hearts of the people? Let me give you an example, the stupid subordinate junior sister trusts you unconditionally and you take care of her like a daughter. This can also be shaped. It is enough to arrange a few female protagonists, and the other women should be portrayed as junior sisters who are deeply rooted in the hearts of the people (persecution). Disadvantage 4: There are too few. After reading this, please update quickly I hope my humble opinion can be of some help to the author.

This protagonist may be the author's portrayal, a clear stupidity that shines into the world.

What. Just recommended by Guan Guan and became a eunuch? Move it out of the bookshelf quickly

This woman made me feel uncomfortable all over. The main character is like a loser. I can't read this kind of book. She is weak and can be bullied. How can a man act like a little daughter when he is alive? He suppresses his desires first, so don't read it.

Others collect 5,000 words from 200,000 words, but you can reach it with more than 90,000 words. God has given you such power, but you have stopped updating? Kavin? What to the sky? What to do to your parents? What about the platform? What to do to a book friend? What to readers? Why call yourself?

What are you writing about? Read it again. . . The whole article is mediocre, do you think you are writing a narrative? There is no climax, no excitement, constant petty poisoning, and an unclear main line. I have no idea what you want to express, and it is not attractive to readers at all. . I even doubt you have an outline at all. Keep writing and keep writing. No solution.