The Damn Witch Is Disguised as My Wife!

I just read Chapter 17. The book is a good book. The writing is very detailed and the characters are three-dimensional. But it's only so short and you have to start cutting people. I'm almost 1920 years old. I can't stand cutting. I have set so many flags. I can tell at a glance that you are going to do something later, so I can only give up. I wish you better and better grades. I will run away now.

The advantage is that the plot is very classic and the author's writing is good, but the disadvantage is that it is too classic. After reading these dozens of chapters, I feel like I can deduce the general plot of the next hundreds of chapters. This does not mean that the writing is not good. If I saw it a few years ago, I might continue to read it, but now I can't stand it anymore. Finally, I hope the author can finish this novel

Because martial arts stories are polluted by high sequences, the more martial arts they are, the easier it is to become green. I'll wait and see.

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The light novel is so long. If you write about martial arts, you might as well post it in the martial arts section. The martial arts section is better.

Please tell me the words! Please read more in the new book issue! 😭😭Don't keep your pillow to death! ! !

Give it a year first 🙂, otherwise it will be a matter of asking for leave sincerely

Sister Zhen is my mother, you are not allowed to scold her 😭

I have read Chapter 25 now. When did Jiang reveal his identity to Xie and kick us after revealing his identity?

I think this book is generally above the level of food and close to grass jelly, so I recommend reading it. But the shortcomings are really obvious: many plots are too rough and could have been written better. The first is the reason for the sword. Generally speaking, this kind of thing is realized at the end of the first volume at the climax, but here it is found in less than ten chapters, after witnessing the death of a friend. This reason is of course fine in itself, but in less than ten chapters, the character has not even begun to be described yet, so death is used to foreshadow this. Even if you replace the character with a certain designated heroine, most of the audience will not resonate with it, let alone identify with it, because the emotions are not yet in place. Then there is the fighting scene, you have to write some of it, just kill the Wolf King and it will be gone. Although the author explained that this is a romance novel, romance novels are classified. Since the background of the story is here, you will inevitably write about fighting, and this low-level world of martial arts requires fists and fists. There is also Xie's feelings. Normally, who would think of someone they met once when they were three or five years old (even before the male protagonist was adopted, they never played together or exchanged letters) as a friend and miss him for ten years In general, It's just too deliberate, and it feels like shooting an arrow first and then drawing a target. In order to achieve a certain goal, the feasibility and rationality of the intermediate process are ignored, which leads to very rough writing. However, there are no mistakes in the text and general direction.

When I saw it was martial arts, I was a little afraid to watch it 😰

Martial arts should be as popular as they should be. Please don't be a eunuch. Just have an ending. I really like the heroine's character.

1. Of course the male protagonist can save people. I also hope that the male protagonist can act chivalrously and be righteous without any regrets. But? Is it a bit reckless for a person to lead a pack of wolves into the snow-capped mountains? Have you considered the situation where you are exhausted and have no luck? If the heroine does not come to save you, will you die instantly? Will the people in the church be sad because of this? Of course it looks cool to sacrifice your life to save others, but is it wrong to save yourself and do your part? 2. Slave trader. This man really deserves to die, but if you just kill him, only a few little girls will be left? After looking at it, it seems that you didn't say how to deal with it and just released it into nature. Are you sure you didn't harm others? The story is about the male protagonist's early immaturity but he changed it later. It's really unbearable to keep doing this

Hoho, you mean the Infinite Xuan Dome, the High God, the Jade True Lord, the Nine Chens, the Royal Calendar, the unifying sky, the Zhao Kaihua, the Chongxiao, the light, the Thunder, the Dharma Master, the authoritative power, slaying demons, destroying evil, destroying demons, and protecting the Tao, pure and subtle, innate and holy, Chenju Zijinqiong. Que takes pictures of all the spirits in the three realms and ten directions. They parade through the Great Thousand Authentication Fruits. They are outstanding and inconceivable. Their merits are free to move and influence the gods to save suffering. Compassion and breadth. The Heavenly King. The Golden Que. The Supreme Supreme Nature. Milo. The True Jade Emperor. He always holds the two qi of yin and yang to mediate creation. Xuanji holds the latitude and longitude of the heavens and commands the stars to bring blessings, eliminate disasters, relieve disasters, save lives and save lives, and Yanxiang should be transformed into boundless saints. His grace is widely spread by the sect master of the Ten Thousand Heavens. The three realms have great compassion and great wishes. The emperor sits in charge of evil and subdues demons. His aura shines brightly and his holy virtues are clear. His golden appearance and jade appearance will last for eternity. His virtues have passed through the past and present. His virtues have been powerful in the world. He has been blessed by the world and blessed all living beings.

To put it simply, if the plot drives the character's death, then death is not just an end, but reflects the tension of reality, the movement of history, and the loneliness of the character - the character dies in the plot, but the character lives; on the contrary, if the character dies in order to promote the plot, then death is a kind of deliberate violence, and all shaping serves the plot, and the character will appear fake, like an NPC or a tool man. It's been 26 years, and there are still people who are deliberately trying to kill people. There are a bunch of flags written about the protagonist's family, and it seems that they are all going to be killed. It's not impossible to die, but it must be because of one's own choice, and it must be driven by history. It cannot be for the author's plot. The pure accident is essentially under the author's control, and the tension of the plot is given up by arranging coincidences.

I hope it can be updated stably, I will subscribe 😭

There's nothing wrong with being a young person, as long as you don't commit the disease of being young

Write more characters, two of the three heroines are resting on their laurels 😅

When I saw the familiar Miss Mingmei and the famous fishing star, I realized they were pillows 🤔

I used to have a leave application form, but now I don't even have a leave application form.

Pillow, please tell me carefully, then you will know whether Yiyi is the template of Zhang Wuji's ability.

Do you want to follow the old path? If you ask for leave sincerely, I will send you the razor blade.

At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist was not treated well by his righteous father when he was a child. Does anyone know the spoiler about the protagonist's mother messing around with the villain? Mainly, I am a little disgusted by this kind of plot. If it were me, I would avoid watching it🙈

I was very depressed to see such a good guy like Narisong gone! Why is there such a thing as a knife at the beginning? I originally wanted to use your parents as a starting point to criticize you, but even though it's not to my liking, from what I've seen, the writing is pretty good. Forget it, I can only say that you're an asshole 😭

Is this book confirmed to have three female protagonists? Or will it be added later?

I really liked the story in the previous book (although I didn't finish it), but I still wish you well with this one

Please read the book again. There are too few chapters now.

It's pretty good. It's not fast food literature. I don't know why no one reads it.

It's pretty cool. Why is the monthly vote list so low?

What is the connection between Fang Zhiyi and the protagonist? Will you tell me later? It's impossible to be familiar with it 😰 I haven't seen the back yet