Sovereign of Two Worlds

The type and content you write conflict with each other and will not attract readers who like this type of writing. The protagonist is not the protagonist, but just a door-opening pendant. The protagonist is modern civilization. The Blue Star people came to recreate a modern society. It is boring. The protagonist did nothing. It was all the Blue Star people who were doing that. Write a little for your die-hard followers. That is to say, instead of arranging system citizens to go to various places to control the territory, it will all be handed over to the Blue Star people. Then why are you writing the overlord system? The book is called Overlord? The overlord system has no sense of existence. There is no special feature, other similar novels, special talents, professions, and elite armies have long been out. They all started fighting early. It's not good to write about science and technology. You just have to move it over, so you can't write anything new. And it has always avoided the issue of political system. After recruiting so many Blue Star people, what will the protagonist do next? Playing with a modern political system during a Warring States period? The protagonist currently has an overlord system, and has not mastered anything else. Without this overlord system, the protagonist would be directly killed. The image of the protagonist is not seen, it is just a ruthless door-opening robot, so the sense of existence of the protagonist is very low after writing so many stories.

So awesome. Open two books at once and write books as a family

I feel that the author does not need to be so pessimistic. I feel that the quality of this book is still very good. The difference in the previous data does not mean that the latter is also poor. The author has written books for so many years and must have confidence in his own ability.

The group portraits are written from east to west, and the plot development is very slow. Then the main character, the Virgin Mary, is in the apocalypse, and she makes trouble and runs away. If you don't like it, you can leave.

I came from Summoning Frenzy. Frankly speaking, I don't like system novels very much, but it's great without a heroine. The last one I read was a pirated version and it was very good. I came here to subscribe to this book and support the author.

You have opened two books in a row. Is this one ready to be cut?

After thinking about it a lot, I finally want to say that your protagonist should not be named Xia Lin from now on, and don't write your group portrait articles🤣 You can only write about the main characters like Wen Yu, Lin Tang, etc. Like Frenzy, but other powerful upper-level players like the Demon Lord and the Immortal Emperor can also be written. Write a little bit, and then it will be a little guy like Ah Card or even Sun. You only have so much ability👍I won't say too much. I am personally not interested in Xianwu and I haven't read it anymore. It seems like I am chasing after you. This book is not on the shelves. I can only say best wishes👍

Lao Bai. You can't arouse our interest 😟, maybe you are old

I finally started a new book. I had a great time reading Baymax's Doomsday Frenzy at first, and I also read Xianwu. However, I felt that the first volume of Xianwu was more enjoyable, and the later volume was a little less good. Come on, Dabai.

I still want to watch Battle in Paradise😭😭😭😭😭