Saving the World in a Doomsday Text Adventure

A piece of random nonsense The fallen believers no longer respect the blazing sun, and the bright moonlight cannot be protected by themselves The scholars who seek knowledge look up at the stars, and the servants of gods who betray the Lord try to gain power Purify the world of heaven Transformed into karmic fire, Long Yin, who represents divine grace, is infected with misfortune Pollution, distortion, corruption... I don't know when, the source of the doomsday has spread wantonly But Under the abyss, the demigod Titan insists on his belief in gold At the bottom of the canyon , the original hermits remember the oath to the God Lord because they firmly believe Behind the dirty bloody sun, the golden afterglow has not yet fallen In the shadow of disorder, the only true knowledge is still struggling However This time The filth of evil thoughts has grown extremely evil consequences, and both old and new gods will face their fall Creatures keep wailing, and the world laments this Talents, bodies, holy objects... No matter the outcome, the apostle of salvation will fight hard

It is a very good novel. There are basically no poisonous points throughout. It is the most interesting text novel I have read, especially many levels are very imaginative. Unlike some novels, it is just about killing monsters and completing tasks, which is not interesting at all. But I still think there are two points that need to be improved. The first is the title of the book. To be honest, when I saw this title for the first time, I almost dismissed it. I hate novels such as salvation and the Virgin the most. I suggest the author change the title, otherwise it will affect the sales of the book. The second is the plot of fighting the new world. Although the protagonist is pretending, It seems that the National Intelligence Group and the combat team are very incompetent, especially the second time. Lu Chaiyi can't even defeat the middle-level personnel of the New World, and the team leader is even more incompetent. If it weren't for the protagonist cheating, most people would have died long ago. I hope the author will pay attention to the future plots and not pretend to be for the protagonist, which will affect the characterization and image of the supporting characters.

It was originally written quite well! Really, the plot is good, the creativity is good, and the writing is passable. I have to create an organization and an all-female department... You wrote it very well. There is no need to add some extraneous settings.

All I can say is, stop writing about your realistic plot.

I ordered it all in one go today and I have to say that the author wrote it very well. So far, there is nothing poisonous in the book. What is written in reality is also very consistent with Pig's Foot's character. He did not act pretentious and start a harem just because he gained great power. The only thing I'm a little worried about is whether the author has built up the power system for the later stage. If it is well constructed, it may be possible to become famous by maintaining the current level.

A new book is about to set sail. I sincerely ask all apostles not to keep books. The author hereby kneels down to thank you, dong dong dong!

I saw someone talking about why there are fewer and fewer real-life daily plots, and they don't accept female protagonists and don't fall in love. I want to say that I came here just for the copy, and so do most people

From the practical part, it can be seen that the author does not know much about government departments. Government departments cannot be so lax, and the confidentiality measures are too low. The monthly salary for newcomers is 100,000, and the monthly salary keeps rising. Idiots all know that the male protagonist is very talented. Although the file should be kept confidential, the salary cannot be kept confidential. There are also bodyguards arranged later. If I were the enemy, I would definitely target him first. The male protagonist was also very stupid. Baitian directly told the official about his talent. Shouldn't he get the relevant information first? For example, the standards for measuring talent and the expansion of information channels are not something you can just search online and then give up. In this extraordinary world, you can't just hang it on an official tree. In case there are bad guys in it, that is, the male protagonist with a halo is not targeted, so it is still a bit more novice. However, I mainly came here for the copy. The copy is very well written but I think it is realistic. If the part could be more rigorous and have fewer loopholes, the results of this book would definitely be better. Most of the protagonists in the novel will not simply join the officialdom because everyone knows that the officialdom is not necessarily united or safe, so you have to be more cautious when joining, and there are usually various restrictions. If there are no such restrictions in this novel, it would be very unreasonable.

In fact, I feel that starting from Wet Nurse, the promotion is too fast. It's not that the plot is not exciting, but the excitement of the body is gone. In the early stage, the setting of the body is attractive, but in the later stage, the excitement of the body is abandoned, and the huge world view and grand narrative are used. It doesn't feel like a game anymore, and it doesn't even have anything to do with the game. . .

It looks good, but I wish the protagonist's abilities would improve more slowly. I've seen too many novels like this where the protagonist's abilities improve too quickly, causing the enemy's strength to skyrocket.