Practice in the Northern Song Dynasty

Chen Tuan: courtesy name Tunan, nickname Fuyaozi, Mr. Baiyun, the ancestor of Xiyi, Qingxu Chushi, the founder of Ziwei Dou Shu and Tai Chi Illustrations, known to the world as the Sleeping Immortal, who attained the Tao in his dream.

The subject matter is novel, but the characters of Laozu and Laojun are a bit off-putting to me. They are both characters who have lived on the road for countless years. Do you think they will have this kind of character? After falling behind, there is also the problem of the heroine, which is a bit cliché. After all, the protagonist has two lives, and when I read it, I felt like a funny fool.

You have such a broad view of the world. You have to describe the protagonist in two strokes and insert emotional drama in a hurry. I suggest the author hone it more.

Also, if you write a Taoist companion, especially in the early stages of the book, you will basically be invisible in the middle, so what is the use of writing it? In the later stages of the book, the protagonist becomes a Daluo, and the Taoist companion is also arranged to be a Daluo? Wouldn't that be contrary to nature? Don't arrange it, it doesn't match anymore. It depends on the author, how can he arrange for a great supernatural power to be reincarnated and endure tribulations? Or other

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This started out well, but in the end, the good guy got a female protagonist out of nowhere. It was so confusing that I couldn't stand it anymore.

Chapter 12: Even an old woman in the palace would think that a little Taoist priest is not worthy of a princess, unless she is a disciple of Chen Tuan. I wanted to laugh, but I felt disgusted for no reason and ran away.

The carp spirit at the beginning was poorly written! Too deliberate! It's obviously a monster but he still can't be beaten to death. I hope it doesn't end up killing the little one and making him grow old!

This was a trash novel in the Dou Po era. I kindly suggest that the author think about it carefully before writing.

In the traditional system, any ethics of cause and effect and karma are all illusory, and only strength is real. There are so many vain ideas that are of no use. This is the shortcoming of traditional Chinese culture. Can't adapt to the development of the times. In today's society, who can talk about morality, who can teach you morality, and who can teach you propriety, justice and integrity. Only strength is king. When you make a lot of money, your shit tastes good. Look at Jack Ma. Before you were developed, everyone despised you. But when you are developed, everyone is praising you.