Reestablish the Immortal Way, I Am the First Immortal of the Red Mansion

I have read that Qidian has a copy of Sushen Immortal Lord, which is also about cultivating inner scenes to reflect on the body and spirit. There are 24 immortal concubines, corresponding to the twenty-four palaces in inner scenes. Fellow practitioners will become immortals if they work together. He was reincarnated later, and because of the skills he cultivated, he could still retain the spirit of the eight scenes of Shangyuan. You can refer to the author. Many characters in Red Mansion are cultivating immortal seedlings.

To be honest, this book is a bit baffling

Your book is suitable for Sichuan people to read.

You don't have to read 100,000 words in 30 minutes, you will know the gold content

The writing is pretty good, and he doesn't look like a new author.

Good guy, I said that the seniority of the protagonist was wrong. Some people said that the protagonist and Mrs. Xing were the same generation as laughing to death.

The plot is so messed up and inexplicable

The author wanted to write about the indifferent and pretentious style of cultivating immortals. Unfortunately, the requirements for writing power and realm are too high, and this book cannot meet them. On the contrary, the protagonist's personality and the edges of human nature are smoothed out. The characters are unclear.

It's not as good as Tomato's "I'm a Martial Arts Master in the Red Mansion", but that book is probably going to be scrapped soon. It's slow to update, the plot is lagging, and there's too much nonsense!

Is this a customized article? Written for Sichuan people?

The pacing is slow, there are too many ineffective descriptions, and the story is pretentious about love.

Don't write a bunch of maids for the heroine. Just write less than 3 heroines, and give the others a good result.