Breath of the Dead

In fact, the writing is good at the beginning, but the worst part is in Chapter 6. As a necromancer, there are skeletons as cannon fodder to explore the way. I don't know why there is a group of people with evil intentions. The protagonist is not suitable to be a necromancer, but suitable to be a priest. I can't watch this B plot.

The whole book is good, and the storyline is very good. The protagonist's level is extremely high, and his background is not strong, so he is always forced to upgrade. It feels like I didn't go to school. The talent given is very strong, but it is not fully utilized, and the city resources are piled up and cannot be processed. I always have to be pushed to develop, I am not very smart, and I am often a bit unreasonable and impulsive. The real world has dropped its anchor. The protagonist took almost a year to participate in Genesis and complete the mission before going back to school. In addition, I know that my soul summoning tower is not good, and I lack various drawings for urban development, but I just don't make up for it. The whole book was well received, but the above are just complaints about the protagonist.

As long as the undead and the heroes are invincible, I will definitely help out.

Features of all the author's books 1. Super IQ. The protagonist does not need to compare his IQ with anyone else, because his brain is no different from 🐷 2. Reincarnation of the Golden Thread. The protagonist is a great prophet. No matter how low his strength is, he can always find thoughts similar to "I will lose a lot if I do this and I will regret it." Always join a college, go to high school and go to college 4. Lay the foundation infinitely. If you join any force, you will have to show off and be slapped in the face. I can do anything that a level 20 boss can't do at level 1 5. Unlimited upgrades for mobs. All kinds of big guys are flying around. Level 40 is extremely powerful when the protagonist is at level one, and is still the strongest by the time the book is finished. (This is a metaphor. In fact, it means that the author keeps suppressing the protagonist's combat power while infinitely strengthening the mini-boss) 6. The enemy comes from the void. There are always people who accidentally bump into the protagonist who just came out of the dungeon, and beat the older one and the younger one. 7. The whole map has been reduced. In the worldview, except for important supporting characters, the IQs of other people are not as good as NPCs 8. Classic left and right brain fight. The maximum level was 30 at the beginning, and now it is level 60, and the skills can be upgraded to level 80. Also known as the patching method. 9. Precipitation King. After using the resources of a million people to reach level 60, alas, I just reached level 20. Because I want to settle. In addition, there is also the flirtation of writing sentences from primary school students' compositions into the article, which makes people's skin crawl, and a particularly shocking point is that the protagonist loves PC However, what has to be said is that the author's conception and description of the original copy, as well as his grasp and shaping of the world view, surpass 90% of the starting authors. At the level of Lv5, except for a few people, he is almost the first. (Here we only talk about unlimited streaming ➕copy alien world). The author writes about the undead in impressive places, including Egypt, Westminster Abbey, and Victoria. Including characters and storylines from The Chronicles of Narnia and even the Three Kingdoms, etc., It is indeed excellent. In short, the author's book is far from perfect, but it is readable and worth reading

The weak defeat the strong every time. Are you a necromancer? The protagonist's IQ doesn't seem to be very high either. Don't write everything on the other side as a bunch of rubbish. The protagonist has a castle and an incarnation of death. Wouldn't it be better for you to write it as a story in which the strong bullies the weak? How is it possible in this world that the weak can defeat the strong every time? They are stronger than you and have experienced more wars than you. How could you defeat the stronger enemy every time you encounter it? It is impossible for every enemy to be mentally retarded. People become strong only by defeating countless opponents and growing up.

Featherman, you are really outrageous. I have followed you for several books. First, I didn't want to write about the natural disaster, and then I went to an unknown website to write about Lords of the Undead of Great Britain. This book is free to read on Eggplant, and then I wrote it here without any news. It was only started in June. There are so many interesting settings, and look at your shoe-like plot. I am really speechless.

The protagonist is confused. Why is it that after so many years, the protagonist is still confused? I don't know what the protagonist learned in school, but he is still convinced that he is ranked first in the school.

The author has read several books and likes the imagination very much. The 40,000-year-old game is eye-catching, but the writing method of pressing levels is too old. This book starts with job changes, and then upgrades. I thought the author had changed it, but I didn't expect that there were hundreds and dozens of chapters at level 4, and then 500 chapters at level 5, which completely ruined the early rhythm. The protagonist also has no ambition to be strong. He does tasks for the guild. The guild elites don't care if their children are upgraded, but the protagonist Xiao Mengxin cares more than the guild elites. It's ridiculous, and then there is a promotion task after taking up the job at level 5, and I also wrote the lord, and got three magical skills, but it is not fun at all for the readers. Working for the guild is no fun, nor is changing jobs, both of which are ruined by the long pace. I have also read the author's other books. In that book, I found a part-time job to upgrade, and the main job was to level up. The author should really think about it. If nothing else, change the pressure level. If you use your imagination, your results will definitely be much better.

At the beginning, after killing dozens of mobs, 4 boss-level skeletons were summoned. Later, after killing tens of thousands of mobs, elite monsters, and boss monsters, not a single boss-level undead was summoned. It is too stupid to use military merits to exchange for boss-level undead.

I've read Chapter 88. This author always writes books like this, and the protagonist always suffers a loss in improving his intelligence. Although it is a benefit in the end, I feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded.

You can definitely make more money if you don't keep up with the level. Why do you keep trying to keep up with the level like this? It wears out people's patience. Readers will either throw it away and keep it or run away, always digging their own graves. But looking at the catalog, you express that you want to make money. It's strange. Could it be a ghostwriter?

Yumin is famous for his imagination, but the logic of his writing and stories is at the level of a fifth-grade elementary school student. He has been an author for so many years, so why doesn't he want to improve his writing skills...

There is a bug in the undead, that is, there is no daily consumption. Isn't that a perpetual motion machine? In fact, the power of the undead should be consumed all the time, otherwise it will not be able to move at all.

What's cool about it? Some of the protagonists also have it. Why do most of the protagonists now have golden fingers? I don't think it's unreasonable.

The author should get Deppseek, this will be a big enhancement for you.

The cost of death is a bit serious. It seems to benefit the necromancy system, but without the birth of life, death is like rootless duckweed.

The protagonist is like a junior high school student in the mountains. He goes out to see the world but is afraid that people will know he is from the mountains. He doesn't know how to use online shopping and the teacher can't believe it. It's true. . . Does it match the description?

I hope this book surpasses Mythology of the Undead. I actually quite liked that book.

Really smelly and long! More than 3800 chapters, reaching level 37, with an average of more than 100 chapters to upgrade one level, and hastily and successfully upgraded to the "underworld" that should be after level 60. I don't know if it counts as a eunuch! Surprisingly, I've finished the book!

It still feels not as good as 40,000 Years. Just like the evolution of the undead, there are too many buildings and units and they are too complicated. It is a bit interesting when you get them, but their subsequent development and evolution are not clearly stated, so it feels quite unfocused and fluffy. Later, it becomes a cycle of playing dungeons and harvesting, which seriously deviates from the core of the imagination of unit buildings.

Great God, I read your book in junior high school. I have been a fan for more than ten years, so I would like to make a suggestion. Well, AI is very easy to use now. Why don't you use AI to polish it every time you finish writing.

There are many and miscellaneous, and there is no main line in either setting or plot. In the early stage, I wrote about buildings and arms, and later on, I wrote about equipment. The idea is good, but the writing is a bit fussy. Like the three magical skills of death, the death lord basically has no screen, and the incarnation of death is useless for a long time. They also deliberately suppressed the level, saying that they wanted to learn to develop skills and so on, but basically did not do much. High-level players can live for thousands of years, study for a few years or more, and have already upgraded those messy skills.

I finally finished it and finished watching it. The later stage was too watery and not interesting. It's just that he was the only one writing this track. The world view is quite interesting.

Look at chapters 3255 and 3262. I have killed more than 30 epics. The protagonist still has the same four epics. Are the talents and summoning souls useless?

All engaged, always supporting the undead

People who come to read this book can quit once they see Sanxian Garden. The description of the battle is simply a mess. How can an old author who has written several books have such poor writing skills? It is not as good as AI writing books.

It's getting watery. I saw 3830. This water is too much. If you are not good at writing daily logic, then don't write it! Now I can't write any scene well. It's very common to fight with others every day.

I'm really convinced. Didn't I say before that killing by means of resurrection does not count as killing the undead without double death? As a result, the rule-level clone of Aurora was killed just to ask for information?

It's too watery, Che Lulu talks back and forth

I would like to ask, why are there so many typos and illogical sentences?