The Wayfarer of Illusions

I think the book is okay, and if possible, I hope you can read it as much as possible, thank you.

The setting is good and the writing is good, but there is just no feeling. The two words are bland. The author has talked about the setting issue many times, but in my opinion, the biggest problem with this book is that people have no motivation to read it, there is no ups and downs at all, it is too bland.

Partners are divided into worldly couples and Taoist couples, so female monks also need to have two husbands... It feels so awkward to be like this.

Let me tell you why your grades are not good? The writing and story setting of Xiaowei are not bad. What is the problem? I think the main problem is: it is not grounded. 1. The protagonist is not grounded enough: A common problem in genius novels is that geniuses are too far away from ordinary people and are difficult to understand. They can only be grounded in terms of personality. For example, they have common problems that ordinary people have, such as being rich, lustful, powerful, famous, greedy, etc. Anyway, it is best to have a very attractive character. The growth and development of things should be natural 2. The writing style is not down-to-earth enough. Xiaowei's writing style is a bit like ancient Chinese vernacular, which is not easy to understand. It needs to be read carefully and slowly, or even several times to understand. For many people, it is easy to get tired of reading and stop reading. 3. The setting is complex, there are many explanations and descriptions, and it is not grounded enough. Reading a novel is not like practicing martial arts and Taoism. If the setting is too complicated, it will be difficult to understand, which will make people uncomfortable. It is better to have a setting chapter (you can slowly reveal the explanation). The focus of the novel is the story/plot/characters, don't go astray 4. The plot and characters are not It's down-to-earth enough, but not exciting enough. The characters and plot are not attractive enough. This part is quite complicated. I won't go into details. I think the key points are: attracting people with strangeness (the text seems to look like a mountain with joy, please refer to novels that make people stay up all night and can't stop), and moving people with emotion (including pretentiousness, etc., I won't go into details) 5. To be continued, talented people can add

I originally wanted to cancel the subscription, but after thinking about it, I have been chasing him until now, and I still feel uncomfortable leaving quietly. I have been following the last book "Wanfa" because it was recommended by mistake, so I kept reading. However, I stopped updating for a long time due to physical reasons. Of course I was relieved to continue reading. However, before I finished reading, I started a new book. The old book said it was almost finished, but it stopped reading again. That's fine. If you focus on the new book and can update it stably, I will continue to support it. The result is unstable again. It needs to be changed first, and even if the update is reduced, there is no telling when it will be added. Then he suddenly made an announcement saying that the results were not good and he decided to reduce updates. This logic is completely unreasonable, but I respect the blessings. As a result, a delayed update came on the day when the update was reduced. And the day after the update was postponed and reduced again. We are just saying that when we follow updates, aren't we just trying to figure out something to look at every day? Stable updates cannot be guaranteed and no amount of tricks can save your results! If it doesn't work, let's stop writing! ! ! Goodbye.

I guess the legacy of the protagonist's father lies with the protagonist's sister.

All I can say is that Shen Nong has been poisoned to death

I take it for granted that every character in the plot is like a stationery man, someone pretending to be a householder with it.

After reading Chapter 7, the author has a good idea. If he doesn't write about spiritual roots, why should he write about Xuan Jing? Only by obtaining Xuan Jing can one practice cultivation. How to obtain Xuan Jing? College entrance examination! You take the exam, and the country will give you the money after you pass it. It's quite interesting. I dare not say too much, but if you understand the human species, you will understand, well, how should I put it, next time I will be rich first.

The first eunuch book I read was "Five Elements of Heaven" by Fang Xiang, the second was "Gu Zhenren" by Gu Zhenren, the third was "Nothing to blame", and the fourth was "The Master of the Fantasy World".