Don't Be Afraid, Fairy, I'm Blind

I have not read many novels, so this is the first time I write a book review on a whim, and I even downloaded the APP specifically to do so. Overall, after reading it in one sitting, I felt it was quite to my liking. First, the author is said to be a female writer. I think the description of some very detailed things is very delicate, and the writing is smooth and not laggy. I personally like the overall look and feel. Because I haven't read many books, it's quite rare to find such a book that is so interesting to my eyes. Most of the writing, scene descriptions, psychological descriptions, etc. Are just right in my eyes. There are a little awkward things, for example, I feel that some plots end very hastily, but on the other hand, I like how the endings of some of the plots are neat, clean, and refreshing, so it's hard to say whether it's good or bad for me. The second is some small metaphors, such as the story of Xu Xian, and the relationship between Xiaoqing, Xiaobai and Xu Xian that was later adapted. These metaphors and some hidden threads will be recovered soon, so that they will not be drawn out for too long and eventually forgotten. It will also make me sigh in the end that the content that I spent so much time describing will finally be reflected in this form. There is a feeling that I took the time to memorize the test points and finally wrote them out during the test. Third, although it is a book about cultivating immortals, because the protagonist has a time-travel identity, it is quite interesting to occasionally make one or two modern complaints or jokes, which can really make people smile. Some relaxed descriptions interspersed with tense environments also add to the overall emotional level (although this may greatly reduce the sense of urgency or depression) Fourthly, I think the description of girls is quite good, unlike some books that are too homogeneous or too formulaic with distinct personalities. The female characters have their own differences, but they also have similarities. In fact, I quite like watching these female characters wandering around and thinking about things, or complaining about the male protagonist and other plots. It feels very cute. Maybe because the author spent time and effort in shaping it, it feels quite vivid. I don't think there's any need to overly pursue the male protagonist to become stronger or feel more refreshed. I think it's quite commendable to write out each character in detail for everyone to see. I think Wu Cheng's description was very good (except when he died, it felt so fast that he died so quickly that people didn't have time to grieve for him ==? Maybe that situation meant he was about to die more decisively, right? ) I tend to be verbose in my writing, and sometimes I don't express myself well, but I actually just wrote it specifically for the author to read. I just wanted to praise the author for writing this book very well, but could I write it faster? 😢 After reading it in one go, I felt so lost that I didn't even want to eat. Finally, I hope the author can use his knife and not be too harsh. Finally, I hope the author will write better and better.

I'm just one chapter away from reading the latest version, which makes me feel a little strange. At first, I was attracted by the reversal of the evil spirit of the junior sister and master wife. I felt that the author wanted to write a dark and cruel world view that was corroded by evil spirits. In the second volume, I felt that I wanted to write a general feud between immortals and other gangs. There are also a series of settings such as monsters, immortal cultivators, and evil spirits that are not well integrated. It makes people feel that the world is a bit incomplete, as if it has been pieced together, and the perception becomes worse and worse as it goes on.

It's very frustrating, it's a pity that such a good heroine has such a good character.

I spent a few days staying up late to catch up on the latest chapter. Overall, this novel is quite good. The writing is smooth, the characters interact with each other, and the images are three-dimensional. It has great potential at this stage. The biggest problem currently seems to be that the author's characterization of the work itself has not been clear yet. The author said at the beginning that he wanted to write a harem novel that focuses on emotions, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists will inevitably take up the bulk of the novel. However, as a novel about cultivating the world of immortality, improving strength is also an important thrust of the plot. This leads to a question, how to distribute the proportion of emotional interactive literary dramas and fighting and strengthening martial arts dramas? Some people come to see the harem and flirt with girls, and like to watch literary dramas; some come to see the novels about cultivating immortals, and like to watch martial arts dramas; and some people watch both, and want to see cool and refreshing novels. This problem is not originally a problem. As long as the author sets the tone of the work, he can filter out readers who don't like this kind of work. However, in a certain chapter, the author asks whether literary opera is too watery, which shows that the author himself is wavering and is not sure how to allocate the space between literary opera and martial arts. "Wen Wu is the first, Wu Wu is the second" is a suitable description of the current situation of this novel. Readers are hard-pressed to agree that some people will like both literary and martial arts dramas, but the author wants to write more about the interaction between the protagonist and the girl, but to make an article about cultivating immortals enjoyable, the protagonist needs to be able to continuously improve his strength. On this issue, I personally think that the first thing an author should do is to clarify the type of story he wants to write. Whether it is to write the story he wants to write or to cater to the taste of current readers, he must first determine the path before writing. The article is not the first. We should pay attention to the opinions of readers, but we should not get lost in different voices. The current tone of the work is a combination of harem romance, suspense and mystery, and fairy tales. These attributes are not in conflict, but whether they can balance their respective scales and reasonably intersperse the corresponding lengths to write a work that both the author and the reader are generally satisfied with will test the author's ability. Some other minor problems that I personally feel are not harmful, such as the puzzle-solving process being a little stiff and the slow update speed leading to slow plot advancement and a decrease in the overall perception (this is also the reason why some readers feel that the writing is a joke. As long as there are more authors, no one will complain about it). Overall, I think this novel is quite good. The pace is a bit slow, but it has great potential. I really like the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists, and the driving of the car is also very appropriate. I hope the author can write better and better.

This is my first time writing a book review, and it happens to be the author's first book. Regardless of the subject matter, characters, and plot, they all attracted me. Many of the harem novels I have read before failed to grasp the balance between plot and harem, but even though this is my first time writing this, I think the most important factor is that the author has a good balance. What surprised me even more is that even if you don't consider the emotional part of the harem, the plot setting and overall logic are remarkable. Even the level of the latest plot of the He family surprised me so much. However, the connection between some plots will appear a bit abrupt, making people confused. For example, I was a little confused about some of the plots before and after the battle for the awakening aura, which was a major turning point. I watched it from the beginning two days ago, so I can immediately recall some of the echoes. If you follow the update, this rhythm may be a little confusing. Let's talk about the emotional part. I think the character settings are among the best among the harem novels I've read. Not only are the heroines' personalities distinct and three-dimensional, but the male protagonist's character is also rare. The transitional description of the changes in the relationship between the characters is also very attractive to me. The best thing is that the plot promotes the transformation of the relationship between the characters very naturally, and the two are combined very cleverly. The only shortcoming that I can't call a flaw is that the scope of the male protagonist's harem is a bit high. It only needs to be liked by marginal characters like Long Chiyu and the elders of the snake clan. There is no need to think about catching them all in one go. Although you can make up for it later from the male protagonist, writing it out will always affect the perception a bit. In the end, I feel that this book may be almost finished with more than 100 chapters. I still remember that the author said that there was no outline when writing it, but many of the settings of the story were explained very clearly. As the first book, the quality is quite surprising. I hope that I can try more to control the plot rhythm in the end, and the next book will definitely have good results.

Rating: Liangcao is above average The plot design and character creation are of a certain level. The characters are not flat, and the plot is relatively smooth, but not too watery. The only shortcoming is that the protagonist's emotions are sometimes pushed too hard, which makes me very embarrassed. But overall it's worth a visit, it has the potential to climb up.

This book starts off with a hint of Taoism, but in fact, it is followed by an orthodox royal harem that can no longer be orthodox. Compared with Taoism, it is more like the "Burial of the Gods" written by Imaginary Swordsman. The Oriental flavor is an embellishment, and it is essentially the structure of a flirtation + suspense novel. But the first copy is pretty good, with platinum writing style and conception. The initial rating is 🌿. The suspense setting and plot structure are well designed, and I can look forward to writing it in the future. The author is so experienced in balancing driving and serious plot that he doesn't look like a newcomer. Currently, it's a harem-oriented story, but I feel like the author needs to be more restrained in the new characters. It's only the second volume and there are already a lot of female characters. If more are added, it will be a bit like a stud. What I feel is a little strange at the moment is that the character of the protagonist is a bit "inconsistent", or better said, "three-dimensional and not natural enough". On the one hand, the protagonist is young and mature, careful in his actions and has high emotional intelligence. This can be seen from the fact that he can see through Tai Sui when dealing with the first mini-boss. It also matches the impression of a blind man. On the one hand, the protagonist is a bit like a kingly type character who is passionate from time to time. He will be aggrieved and angry over the victory or defeat of the game, which makes him feel a bit childish. However, the ultimate moves are all from the fighting type and require the fighting type buff. This has an impact on the sense of substitution. I guess the author designed the first half of the character to pass the plot, and the second half of the character was designed for comfort. The two are naturally not contradictory. Take two extreme Litchi brothers, Li Changshou and Xiao Yan. Li Changshou also has chapters of fighting, and Xiao Yan also has plots of layout. But the outstanding points of the author's core portrayal are not half of the plot that makes Li Changshou stable and half of the plot that makes him break the plan for something. Is the protagonist resourceful and resourceful, and a small impatience will mess up the route of a big plan, or is the protagonist adaptable to changes and can't change the route of frenzied fighting? I think the author needs to strike a balance or establish a style early on. In other words, when the protagonist faces an almost unbeatable boss in the future, will he be the one who seeks wealth and wealth in a reckless way, or will he be the one who clears all the branch lines and has all the props, and is the one who will fight back when there is no superior to become a minor superior, and the minor superior will take advantage of the big superior to kill him? The current Yousu gives me the feeling that if someone fucks him in front of him, he will either rush over with a sword or stand still and deal with it calmly. For online articles, I personally feel that it is better to focus on one or two characteristics of the protagonist. Of course, the author can also portray a very three-dimensional protagonist, but this requires a lot of foreshadowing. In addition to the previous examples, you see, even if the protagonist of Squid has grown from beginning to end, the core characteristics are still the same. The fire is strong from beginning to end. In general, I am optimistic about the author.

It's very interesting, but the pace is a bit fast and depressing later on. I miss the peace and happiness I had at Lotus Peak

You are the first author I have paid money to read. You write really well.

The beginning and reversal of the work are enough to attract readers' interest, and the plot connection is relatively smooth. The main problem at present is that there is some lack of excitement. It is recommended to deepen the shaping of the protagonist and appropriately increase the protagonist's presence and value. As a new author, the writing style is enough. I look forward to the author writing more exciting plots.

Come on, come on, I like it very much, I stayed up late to read the latest chapter in one breath

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The opening is very well written, and this kind of development can be called the beginning of a masterpiece. It uses narrative tricks, the protagonist's monologue, and the writing method of information gaps to lead the readers into the mist of interlocking truths. After the sudden realization, there is actually a reversal. The subsequent revelation of the mystery makes people feel numb. , I only read the Yuncheng chapter. I will definitely recommend this book to everyone, but since joining the sect, the evil spirits have become dispensable, and it has directly slipped into traditional cultivation of immortality. The writing power of the previous article can be vaguely felt in the writing, but the development of the story has fallen into a cliché, and there are many reasons for it. The plot is illogical and lacks an eye-catching foreshadowing climax. The audience's perspective jumps from the same frequency as the protagonist to an omniscient perspective. It feels like it has gone from meticulous craftsmanship to mass production. The most regrettable thing is that a promising world view has been cut into pieces. Although I am not in a position to blame the author for my fantasy novels from a few years ago, I was still a little bit emotional when I saw a novel that started so satisfactorily that I read it all night long. I have recently read a lot of novels that started well, but in the middle, the author's writing failed and the plot collapsed. This one It is definitely one of the most amazing openings in recent months and even in my entire novel history. However, in the later period of Izumo Castle, the world suddenly turned to traditional cultivation of immortality, and the plot also took a turn for the worse. I really have no position to criticize, but I still want to say that hate can never make steel. Ah, obviously this book is not due to the author's inability to control the writing. It once again made me realize that it is not easy to find books. Nowadays, too many plots of classic old books have fallen into clichés, and new books have so many highs and lows. While I am picky about the plot, I also have requirements for the emotional line. I know that my taste is too picky, so I often make do with it. After such a long time, I encountered a book that completely suits my taste. I am more happy than winning hundreds of lottery tickets. However, seeing the plot going further and further makes me unhappy. I really can't read it anymore, but I also ordered it all to repay the author for allowing me to see such a shocking beginning. I have no intention of blaming the author. After all, there is a kind of audience for each kind of writing, and there is no distinction between high and low. I was just looking for a book late at night, and I was disappointed when the rain came after a long drought. If I didn't express it, I would probably lose sleep all night.

It's okay, but after the end of Chapter 18, it can be said that all the secrets of the book's introduction are revealed, and there is no motivation to watch the subsequent plot. I guess I will just take it slow and fight the monsters, and fall in love. There are too many clues, and the world background is all explained, the sense of mystery is gone, and the reader's interest in reading is gone. Moreover, the protagonist clearly believes in his junior sister-in-law, which leads to a hot topic in the introduction. The question of whether he should believe that he turned into a monster has been solved. Without new difficulties, dangers, or contradictions, there would be nothing to watch. I took a look at the title after chapter 18, and it was probably about steady cultivation and romance. It can be said that it suddenly fell into a normal fairy tale, but the writing is not bad.

When I first read the opening chapter, I felt a bit like "The Strange Fairy". However, I was a little disappointed after reading it. After more than ten chapters, the mystery was suddenly revealed again, which made it boring. Inexplicably, I remembered a saying, "Those who learn from me will live, and those who resemble me will die." Sure enough, a classic is a classic. How can a novel with a similar style and first-level writing style to "The Strange Fairy" suddenly appear? The more you expect, the more you will be disappointed.

The main plot is very good, and the author has put his heart into it. Unfortunately, his writing skills are young and his control of heat is insufficient. In many places, he knows what the author wants to portray and what he wants to express, but he cannot resonate with it, creating a sense of drama.

In order to get Lianzi, the heroine goes on a date with the man in the dungeon. I don't know why I wrote it like this. I created an NPC with a high reputation, and then asked the heroine to have sex with him... Although I know it is fake and just for fun, I still feel a little uncomfortable watching it, just like normal people don't want their women to accompany them for drinks. Moreover, at this time, the heroine has been looking at the hero through colored glasses. Everything he does is wrong, with the kind of scrutiny and consideration from above. With this contrast and contrast, I feel even more unhappy 😅

It's good-looking, and the author writes it well. Now it's mainly about the sense of suspense, which is what attracted me. But I think it's almost refreshing and a bit depressing.

True Junior Sister

He Shutong

I thought it was not very good after reading the comments,,, but it turned out that the writing was really good and attractive 🙂🙂🙂🙂

It's good to watch, but it's so depressing later on. Either there's a misunderstanding here or there's a mistake there. After two volumes, I can only vent my anger on Karami. The villains I meet are more and more defiant, and I'm being led around by the nose. I'll read this volume after raising Fengxue.

It started really well, but then it looked like there was a substitution.

So the wife and junior sisters are all fine, but the protagonist is the one with the problem?

It's boring. I followed the promotion account all the way from station B to fully booked and voted for it. I originally thought it was a weird story, but in the end it turned out to be a story about a fairy harem. There is something in the main plot, but the plot that involves pushing the main plot has been pulled again and again. Now even the plot of the senior sister's face can be tied to Ace's love to promote it. Since it is a harem, but the protagonist shows his deep affection everywhere and emphasizes more than once that he has boundaries with other women, he feels very cut off. To be honest, he can tolerate it, but in the end, he directly raises a dog here in Qianhua? ? ? How did You Su have the nerve to like his senior sister and feel comfortable letting her stand outside the door while he was inside? How did he have such a face? Otherwise, just act like a scumbag and stop being affectionate and moral. At this point, I feel that the characterization has collapsed. This is completely different from the blind man at the beginning. What happened to make the blind man who was not easy to attack even the familiar Junior Sister become the casual dog collector today? I have tasted the sweetness of writing these things, and the writing on the following things has greatly improved, but I just don't think about how my book started in the first place. What a pity

Begging to read! ! Reading the updates within 24 hours is the greatest help to me! ! I've actually finished a round of woowoo and want to go further, so I won't miss everyone's follow-up reading. Don't keep it, I don't want to be fed to death... I still have a more pink story that I haven't unfolded yet woowoo or 2✌️🥵✌️

I said goodbye. The suspense was good. After seeing the 80 pictures, I felt more and more like a literary youth. It was disgusting. Reading novels didn't feel any better. After hundreds of thousands of words, it was still depressing. Are you tired? Are you happy?

I stayed up late to see it now, because the suspense at the beginning was really interesting. Until Chapter 28, I felt like I had traveled more than ten years ago. I saw those dirty words about the women around the protagonist and died of poison. Sorry, I ran away. If you like to be disgusted, you can continue.

The initial impression was not very good. The two-dimensional flavor of cultivating immortals, with the dog-licking male protagonist Asasi + some meaningless black characters, is too awkward. I hope it has less of a Japanese comic flavor.

Everything is good, except that the combat power is too uncomfortable. Both humans and ghosts are at a higher level than the protagonist. Moreover, Pig's Feet still feels like he doesn't want to eat soft rice and feels that he can't stand up, which makes it uncomfortable. Moreover, when he goes on adventures, he really doesn't collect any information and plunges into other people's traps. Oh, tasteless, tasteless