Starting from Scratch: Building an Alliance of Transmigrators

It's better to give the name of the force to Tianting. It's too low. It has a strong aboriginal smell of feudal bureaucracy in an agricultural society. You can smell it from afar, and you feel like you're about to be killed. Backwardness, ignorance, slavery, conservatism, stagnant water, despair, a mixture of all the negative aspects of the feudal dynasty, it is uncomfortable not to get rid of it.

What I am speechless about is that if a new time traveler joins the alliance and gets to know each other, you can make fun of her at will. Why don't you go and investigate? They are trying to save the world, but you move the Ultraman stone statue and turn her into a dog. Do you think you are being humorous? Grass.

Even though I've ordered it all, I still want to say that the content from the beginning to Chapter 16 of Mountain God is extremely poisonous. This plot arrangement is meaningless. A lot of words are spent describing the ignorant villagers, hunters, and temple blessings, but then none of them are used later. Obviously write the general function of the cheat in the first two chapters, and then break into the plot of the time traveler in the third chapter. You have to grind out a bunch of strange plots that have nothing to do with your theme and the main plot. It's like a book about upgrading. Everyone read the introduction and said that violent upgrades are waiting for you to upgrade. As a result, you are stuck at level 99 with nearly 50,000 words of experience. You fought a pink stuffed rabbit turn-based 99 times and still missed each other. The flowers have all faded. Is this what you want to do in a fast-paced online novel? It's chapter 200 now, where is your Orion? Where is your Orion sister? Where is your mountain god? Where is your ignorant little mountain village? Have you used it later? How can you write 16 chapters and more than 30,000 words without any use? The next Xiuchundao also vomited blood until the time traveler appeared. The pen and ink repeatedly jump around the protagonist of the original work, reflecting the feeling of a mother-in-law who wants to break away from the main plot but is hesitant. It's already 200 chapters, why don't you look at the large section of indigenous martial arts descriptions you wasted in Xiuchundao. Does it have any significance for the Heavenly Crossing Alliance that is now getting better? It was only from the beginning of the second world that I finally started writing. Although there were many minor flaws, such as a hammer in the east and a mallet in the west, it finally returned to the main selling point that many time travelers had cheated on. Fortunately, my poison resistance is higher than the early stage. Not many people have written about this idea of ​​wearing more clothes, it's very rare. The idea itself is gimmicky. The author has been able to write it so far, and it is worth the price.

The more I read the recent chapters, the more I felt dissatisfied. I always felt that the behavior of these characters was a bit strange. Only today did I understand why they were so arrogant. Everyone obviously does not have the capital, but is so arrogant that everyone except the time travelers does not pay attention to them. For those worlds, they are just a petri dish for time travellers. There is only one purpose in entering a world, to find the time travellers. The protagonist is strong enough and doesn't care about those worlds, but why should the others? They enter those worlds to become stronger and go home, and finding fellow villagers is just incidental, so why incidentally became the main purpose? This makes them look stupid and arrogant. Moreover, aside from the plot of the novel, from the author's perspective, I don't know what the author's thoughts are now. Writing a Zhutianliu novel actually does not focus on the interaction between the time traveler and different worlds, but instead makes the search for the time traveler the main content. I really don't understand it.

I don't quite understand what the protagonist's motivation is for forming the alliance of time travellers. As an invincible being, he gives power to new time travelers for free and allows this power to flow among the time travellers. However, the protagonist has no benefits as the organizer, cannot increase his power, and has no purpose. Helping others for the sake of helping others is really unclear.

If you continue to engage in reincarnation or something, just unsubscribe. I don't understand why so many people like to create a trumpet account and then go through the known plot again. It's numb.

Seeing that I haven't posted anything yet, I couldn't help but say a few words. The plots in these pictures are really unreasonable. Several time travelers came up and stared at the son-in-law protagonist. They didn't find the other time traveler, so they directly identified themselves first. What kind of assessment is this? . . At least you need to find them all and observe them for a while before comparing them. It was also said that King Qin was punished because he had offended the members of the alliance. He really couldn't complain. It smelled of forced pretentiousness. Reading it really made people dislike the time and space travelers in the alliance. Third, the reason why King Qin is not allowed to join the alliance is because he took action against the son-in-law and lost the three views of a modern person. Ask yourself, of those who have joined the alliance now, how many of them still have the three views of modern people? Isn't it like an advanced life form? People in other worlds are not human beings, they are just tools. Is this really the three views of modern people? Above.

It seemed a bit interesting at first, but the more I read, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist is invincible, a dimensional demon, traveling through various worlds, and there are time travelers in each world. The protagonist just has enough to eat and nothing to do, and goes around to help others. He also established an alliance of Laoshizi time travellers. Reading a book seems to be of no use, but in fact it is of no use. At first I thought I had discovered this fairy grass, but the more I looked at it, the more boring I became...

I can't stand it after reading thirty chapters! Older people just find this book funny.

Let me talk about my personal views on the three stages of this book, Fascinating - slightly mediocre - nothing new (Zhetian) I have not read the original work of Zhetian, but I have read many other astronomical novels, which also describe the world of Zhetian, so I know a little about the background of (Zhetian). Every book of Zhu Tianwen cannot escape the fate of becoming the nanny of the protagonist group in the end. With the advantage of knowing the plot, he pretends to be an expert and helps the protagonist group make plans and explain various problems. You can still take a look at the first few worlds, but when it comes to Zhetian, you really can't stand it at all. Basically, after reading these few pictures, you can guess the plot behind it and there is nothing new. Every time I get to this moment, I always think of Dr. Chen (let's go over it again! I'm tired). Since then, this book has been completely the same as other astronomical articles in my heart.