Apocalypse: Building a Shelter from Scratch

This book feels a bit poisonous. But recently I read a few other books with similar themes, and the writing turned out to be even worse. . . This book feels a little bit toxic. The author didn't pay attention to many parts. The data, information, and outline are all confusing. The writing is probably okay, and the story is pretty good. Others with basically similar themes, the author should be very careful, the research on various data is relatively rigorous, there are few poisonous points, and he is more careful, but it may still be too new, the writing skills are not good, and the story is uninteresting. In terms of reading experience, it's even worse.

Well, it's just that the data is wrong and I don't understand common sense. There is no bloody plot or overwhelming power. As long as I am stupid enough, I can watch it.

Hey, do we only read Golden Finger novels? 🤤

Terra

The setting of this novel is very intellectual. When the apocalypse comes, there is a system and you do not surrender to the country. You are really lacking in brains to do it yourself. The apocalypse is still poisoned by European and American individual heroism. In that kind of environment, personal power is too weak. If you don't join the group, you will die quickly. Even if there is a system, a person has too many things to worry about.

Goldfinger is too versatile. I don't know what ordinary people can do when they go to the protagonist's shelter. Are they going to be raised like pigs?

I reached chapter 88 and I really can't read any more! Tell me what you think after reading it. There are too many loopholes. Doomsday natural disasters are really child's play. The first step is ultra-high temperature. In a intact earth ecology, the global temperature has risen to 70 or 80 degrees in just a few months. I don't know the reason, but it is the end of the world anyway! And under such high temperatures, there are still birds surviving in the wild. So the question is, how do these birds escape the high temperatures and find food under such high temperatures? Do they eat dirt? Second question, the global temperature has risen to over 60 degrees. It is estimated that no living things in the sea can survive. Not to mention deep-sea fish, it is foreseeable that the oxygen-producing algae plants are basically extinct? So the question is, what about oxygen? The third problem, the second disaster is radiation☢. There is no radiation source. Suddenly, radiation is produced here and there. It appears inexplicably and illogically. Then the government releases tasks through the Internet. Knowing that the protagonist can build radiation detectors, it places an order worth millions, causing other shelters to crowdfund and rob, and the protagonist kills them and then makes normal transactions! The government department knew about it in advance, but instead said that as long as they got the detector, everything would not matter and it would not affect the overall situation! Oh my god, what a great person he is. He holds a golden finger. He doesn't feel dissatisfied at all when he is targeted. He works hard without complaining. Moreover, the radiation is so great that your electronic instruments are not affected at all. How can they still be used? Third, those in inland areas can see the aurora! Oh my god, the earth has been kicked by someone and started spinning around randomly?

Well, just build whatever system you want. What the protagonist is thinking about is that if you stay alone in a shelter for too long, you will have mental problems. Without some flowers, the environment will be too depressing. Author, you don't want to write about tactics in a post-apocalyptic novel, do you?

This is the refuge

The protagonist doesn't recruit people, how can he protect himself? He's a lone wolf, doesn't the protagonist's assets make people jealous? He looks up to those people too highly.

Is the size of the shelter written incorrectly? There are 1.5 Billion people living in less than 10 kilometers in length and width.

But who protects readers' rights? Now there are 100 books, 95 eunuchs, and the subscription fee is given to the dog. There should really be a deposit setting, that is, 20% of the author's income is used as a deposit, which can only be withdrawn after the book is completed, otherwise it will be used as compensation. This is only reasonable and reasonable.

It's so damn well written. You clearly don't know anything about various data, but you still write it in a serious and detailed manner.

As mentioned in the title, although there is a female protagonist, her role is quite small, and the emotional drama accounts for less than one-tenth of the total plot, purely as a sideshow. In addition, the protagonist rules such a large territory and has such a large population, all managed by artificial intelligence. There is no privileged class except the protagonist. I will not say anything, but the key is that the people under his rule don't even know who the supreme ruler is. Moreover, I have been focusing on development, and I have been building infrastructure. I feel a little tired after reading it, and there is nothing exciting at all.

In fact, I don't understand why we don't raise a few pairs of male and female dogs and cats since we know in advance that the end of the world is coming. Large and super large dog breeds are helpers and objects that can relieve loneliness and maintain sanity and humanity. Cats can also help the protagonist stabilize his heart, not much better than flowers and plants. As spiritual sustenance, animals are always better than plants, because plants cannot interact with people, but animals can. Animals are simple and do not scheming like people. The current environment is extremely hot, and it will be extremely cold later. Large and extra-large dog breeds can still move in extremely cold weather and can remember the way home.

The protagonist has not yet turned the population into strength. All technology is completed by the protagonist himself, with almost no participation of ordinary people. To participate in the participation of ordinary people, it is necessary to improve the knowledge of ordinary people. The protagonist also rises based on biological computers. Why not develop a large number of biological computers and turn the huge population into a scientific research force.

Even wildfires can be counted as forced disasters, so why do we call them doomsday shelters if they can't even block the smoke from wildfires? You can't even isolate the inside and outside and circulate them for a long time. Are you looking for death if you stay in there?

Why do I feel that there is really no desire to read these chapters of Mecha? It will be released on November 1, so I am adding some water before it is released? And the battery used for this power is incomprehensible. You currently only have a small amount of power generation, and other devices still consume energy. A battery with a capacity of 20,000 kilowatt-hours? This is not as good as a black-tech battery, or better than a so-called 20,000-capacity battery. How long do you have to charge it to allow you to move for a while? Do you want to know how much industrial electricity consumption starts per day? As other book friends said, if you really want to build an evacuation device, it should be something like a base vehicle, which can be transferred at any time and ensure your survival needs for a certain period of time. What can a mecha do? Not to mention your so-called mecha, which is a little bigger than a human.

After reading the latest chapter, I have a few heartfelt words. The first is infrastructure, which makes people love and hate the most. Love means not hating this way of writing. Overwriting is a very good way of writing. Hate means that the author can be said to be crazy in terms of infrastructure. If you put together more than 300 chapters, it is not difficult to find that the minimum content is the most basic. There are more than two hundred chapters on infrastructure construction, even to the point of affecting other lines. The description of natural disasters and man-made disasters is good, but it is too short. Whether it is the heroine, the people at the bottom, the opponents, or even the protagonist on the way to the base car, many things are passed by. Even the scientific researchers on the mountain are simply Briefly explained in one sentence, why are there scientific researchers living on that mountain? It is obvious that a very good copy is launched, and the other two forces that appear in the meteorite look very high-tech, but there are not even a fart in the next 100 chapters. The purple crystal is so important, so strange, so sudden. This thing actually said that no one paid attention to it. After showing its power, Aba and Aba asked for the protagonist. Don't say this. As long as it is on a global scale, who would be stupid enough not to pay attention to it and do more research? What's more, the scientific researchers I met in the base car also shared a copy. People wouldn't be on that mountain for no reason? There must be communication equipment to contact the upper level. If the upper level does not pay attention to it, then it is mentally ill. Those who enter the shelter are not called elites, they are called mentally ill. Who can survive the waves and is not a human spirit? In fact, these problems can be ignored, not even worth mentioning. At least you should upgrade the name of the weapon, the performance of the equipment, and the top technology, such as super cement, exoskeleton, spider robot, robot dog, what the hell 🙄, even in space in the future. Spare super cement. The most basic weapon names and functions of the protagonist in any science fiction novel are more colorful than what you describe. To be honest, if you don't like infrastructure novels, you will want to throw them away after reading a few chapters. The author really should stop listening to those people's random suggestions. Even the heroine is I wrote it as a scientific research tool and then kept emphasizing that I am just an ordinary person. There are too many things I want to complain about. And the way the protagonist relaxes is to look at green things, and then go to work and sleep. She is more powerful than a cow or a horse. This heroine is the author who has been influenced too much. The product has been scrapped. I originally came here because I liked the elf girl in the introduction. The result is just a few scientific research tools. I might as well not write about it. After reading the latest chapter, I don't know if I will read it again, but there is a high probability that this book will gather dust in my library.

It has hit a bottleneck recently, and updates are a bit unstable. Try to recover as soon as possible. .

Although the big scenes at the end are exciting and enjoyable to watch, the current plot gives me a frivolous feeling. It lacks some daily side descriptions and cannot realize the protagonist's changing power. In addition to the increasing military power, the population has simply become data. I am a little tired of watching the end. I would like to see some daily descriptions (the author writes too little, less than 10% of the length). Of course, this is just my idea.

The writing is very good, but the author often thinks of things as they come up, and there is no reasonable doubt about the outline. The probability of collapse is not small, but the writing is really good. If you can accept the weird plot holes or twists, you can read it.

If you don't like it well, you can still watch farming if you want to complain, but science and technology are like liberal arts students writing science fiction. All understanding of science and engineering comes from literal contact. How can there be machines that work all the time? Machines are much more expensive than people. More sophisticated machines have greater requirements on the working environment and working hours. If you can bear to watch farming, can you do it yourself if the machine doesn't work? Then when you see the machine tool, let's not say whether you are turning or milling, even if you are a machining center. It's not big, and the processing accuracy is micron, which is considered common in China. The difficulty in processing our products is not to ensure the accuracy from the machine, but also to the subsequent processes. Each process can still be within the design tolerance range when combined with each process. That machine does cutting, heat treatment, welding, surface treatment, and even cleaning and various tests. This is not black technology, this is Zenith Star Technology, just to complain about it, you can also watch it when watching farming.

There are too many small questions. Is this the author's first time writing a book?

Other places are okay, but the data written by the author is like rolling out a dice. If you need any data, just roll a hundred-sided dice and fill it in, and write it like a funny story Dig a shelter of several hundred square meters. The protagonist wants to eat meat, buy 7,000 chickens and ducks at a time, or prepare to hatch eggs and raise them. Plant a piece of land and buy fertilizer. The price offered by the opposite side can be as high as two yuan per ton.

The portrayal of these two heroines was such a failure that I was persuaded to quit by the heroines!

The problem can be seen from the beginning. In order to depict the difficulties of surviving in the apocalypse, the protagonist is deliberately made more difficult. To increase the difficulty, it is okay to cause some natural and man-made disasters, but you should not create plots that make the protagonist more difficult because he is stupid, such as the two thousand bags of cement in Chapter 39. This kind of Making stupid mistakes really makes me speechless. Don't let the protagonist make avoidable mistakes. You can write that it is too late to move and has no choice but to give up. Write a plot where the protagonist grits his teeth and gives up. The plan cannot keep up with changes. Express some helplessness and powerlessness to remedy the situation. Otherwise, just don't write this kind of plot. Instead of forgetting or suddenly bringing it up to make it difficult for the protagonist, the mistakes that can be avoided will make the protagonist make a plot that is very disappointing.

I didn't expect that this book could be revived after being broken for so long.

Every chapter has the main character talking to himself, which is boring.

Now that the author is resurrected, can you change the name? The shelter with 100 million people is still called a farmhouse, and the name is not changed. Isn't it embarrassing for you to write it yourself?