Immortality: Starting from the Great Zhou Dynasty

That's it, he looks completely different from the other four, cultivating immortals? What do you want to write about pure immortality? The family of the human dynasty is the descendant of a marquis, but it has emotions and it is written like a ruthless novel. There are benefits everywhere, but it is really awkward. Accepting a disciple can be destroyed immediately because he is someone who can be offended. Let a bunch of wild foxes stew for a while. Watch a show with a Qingqiu fox and wait for his friend to be resurrected. What you are watching is a group of wild foxes killing more people... You said that your writing is too ruthless and you have to write about emotions. It's really disgusting.

I give it to you for the first time in my life, why don't I update it?

Realm division Martial arts: skin and flesh, muscles and bones, internal strengthening, marrow cleansing, blood exchange, holding elixirs, divine will, dharma, human immortality Immortal Tao: nourishing essence, collecting qi, entering the orifice, gangsha, jade liquid, golden elixir, mysterious light, Yin Shen, Yuanshen Zhenren, Chunyang Zhenjun

Can't this type of novel use a different formula? No matter what the protagonist was like before, or even what his personality was like, or what his experiences were, as long as the protagonist starts practicing, all kinds of messy things will happen. Things that other cultivators cannot encounter after hundreds of years of practice, the protagonist can experience in one year, and many times more things can be done to him. In short, you have to do a lot of bad things to be the protagonist, otherwise you won't even be considered a supporting role. Can you change your mind and find the protagonist in all kinds of troubles? If you really want to write it like the protagonist, it would be good if only two of the 1,000 cultivators can survive. Those two still rely on luck. The protagonist is the protagonist who has many troubles. Can you write it in a different way?

The protagonist's IQ also has problems, and he has joined the big faction, and he doesn't know how to find something similar to the "Earth Spirit Placenta" to repair his cheats and enhance his foundation. I guess the protagonist will not look for it even if he ascends to Yangshen, because the author forgot that there is such a setting.

The protagonist is almost like a fool. He can't hide anything. Moreover, the protagonist is a time traveler. Just write about the indigenous people. He doesn't know anything.

To tell a joke, the skills for seeking immortality in the seventh level of martial arts can't even be found in the first level. Immortality is only considered by the lower class people. Who doesn't know each other in front of the seventh level? As long as you are in the same world, intersections are unavoidable, but in the end, this is the skill that I asked you for because of guilt? Are you kidding me?😡

We were given by the boss the boss gave the novice protagonist three powerful thief talismans in chapter 3, namely invisibility, running away, and one-time attack, and asked the protagonist to enter the village quietly without using a gun. After giving the boss a rubbish first impression, the novice protagonist turned around and told his friends. Some readers said that it was inappropriate to tell a friend about the opportunity, but the author immediately arranged for the protagonist to take the opportunity without even looking at it, and immediately split it with his friend. At least let the protagonist take a look at what it is and see if it's suitable for him to divide! But the author doesn't want to divide it directly. This is a unique author, let me tell you about it. 🤣🤣🤣

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel that there is nothing wrong with the plot and writing. It's just that the character of Pig's Foot is a bit false and poisonous. The Pig's Foot family is very kind to Pig's Foot. Pig's Foot also enjoys the family's kindness to Pig's Foot with peace of mind. However, Pig's Foot's state has a feeling of being distant from the family and feeling like it is separated from the family at any time. Is this how the time traveler's sense of isolation is written?

Wherever the protagonist goes, there are people who don't like him 😅. Other people's families are like brothers and sisters, and they are all crazy about protecting others. The family relationship of the protagonist's family is weak. On the surface, they appear to be harmonious. They solve problems by themselves. The protagonist's own character is also imprudent. . . . . 6

The upgrade was too slow. At the beginning, I even boasted about my golden finger, but ended up still hanging around at the lowest level for a long time.

Pig's feet are not secretive. You can say anything. A dynasty of thousands of years of gods are all good people. They are constantly poisonous.

The plot is good, but the writing is not very good. The words "can't help", "can't help", and "unexpectedly" are used throughout the whole story. Even when communicating with people normally, I use "can't help but say" and "can't help but laugh." It seems that the characters in it can't help but are controlled.

How to put it this way, it is always involved in the battle between Chunyang and Yang Shen, and the other two higher realms are even more basic operations, which looks very awkward. According to the book, everything depends on Taoist soldiers, magic weapons, etc., So why should we be vigilant? We are from several major forces, so don't you have what others don't have? Especially the underworld is so tough on Chunyang, my dear, is the difference between Yuye and Chunyang just mana? Relying on the formation repaired by jade liquid and the borrowed soul power, he killed many souls and defeated Chunyang. . . .

In the last few chapters, I feel that the villains are making trouble at low levels, and it feels a bit like novices pecking each other. The Zhou Dynasty has not yet completely declined. Are you not afraid of being slapped to death by making trouble like this?

It's all accidents as soon as I go out, and I get bumped everywhere. There is no feeling like before.

I've seen too many people with mediocre qualifications and bumpy roads that make people look down on them and want to give them a few swords. It's quite comfortable to see geniuses who are not stupid. And they won't make their colleagues jealous and suppress them. Is this normal? You don't have to be familiar with each other, but you can't hate you more than your enemies. Sects can't be compared to corporate intrigues. You have to work together like an army. You can leave your back to your companions. You have to be cohesive, otherwise it's better to call it an alliance of casual cultivators. It has its own inheritance, its own rules, and its own educational process.

This book is even better, but not in the early and middle stages 😅

The background was very well thought out, but I wrote it like a fool and didn't notice anything.

It's better to hurry up and seal the pen 😅

A new book sets sail, a new beginning, a new journey. Please give me your support and keep up with the reading~ Sanmiao is grateful!

It's been almost half a year since I stopped working, and it's made me anxious and angry. You have to force me to write a book by myself, right? 🙂

Come back and curse a few words... Let alone say it directly, it will piss me off to death

Congratulations Sanjiang

This book is really good! It's just broken

Come on! Come on! A little more

People. . . When will it be updated? . . If not, can you refund my money? It feels like a waste.

No, when will he update it again?

It seems that one chapter will be finished in two months 😁 The last book was like this