Enlightenment of All Heavens

The mentality of a 99-year-old person is not shaped correctly, but the rest is just fine.

Author, don't you think there is a problem? It is always said that the protagonist must live in peace, but in the next chapter it is written that the protagonist goes out to wander? And are you sure the protagonist was indecisive in his 90s in his previous life? I'm afraid I would have starved to death long ago. It's understandable if you want to write that kind of plot, but I won't say anything about why you went to Hard Steel knowing you were in trouble, and what's written in the book is also strange. Others' actions are based on others, but the protagonist seems to be silly and sweet? You also wrote in the article that the protagonist is afraid of trouble, but he still takes the initiative to do things to cause trouble. I think there is a problem. There may be some misunderstandings in the article above, but they are indeed some things that I think are weird, and it seems that the plot has some minor problems... I can really say that I have written it before, but no, if I am a novice as an author, I still have some say as a reader who has been reading novels for 7 years.

After watching The Mermaid in the Sewer, I wasn't disgusted at all, I just felt like vomiting 😁😁😁😁

The first few pictures are too wordy and not good to look at.

Can you use less "dian" and "dian"? Every sentence is "dian". It's too embarrassing. It's not like there aren't any other adjectives, so deleting them won't affect it.

Please refer to the following format: Name (road number): Major exercises: The natal magic weapon: Realm: (forging the body, nourishing Qi, unblocking meridians, building foundation, jade liquid, golden elixir, soul, immortal) Character traits: Commonly used magical powers: Introduction:

I am a newbie on the street. The writing is poor, the settings are not rigorous, and there are bugs. Thank you for pointing out the problems~The author is working hard to revise and correct~❤️

I feel that no matter how awesome the skills are, once they are restricted by the environment, they will become spiritual energy. That's not so good. If immortals are just another type of life, rather than a higher level of life, it would be meaningless. Just like an ordinary person eats at a fly restaurant, but if the world's richest man can only go to five-star hotels and is not allowed to go to a fly restaurant, what's the point? The richest man in the world should be I can go to five-star restaurants and fly restaurants, but I generally don't like to go to fly restaurants, it's not that I'm not allowed to go. The same is true for immortals.

Just let it happen. . . . . . . .

Classical is not like classical, prehistoric is not like prehistoric, and the setting makes my head hurt. Logically speaking, the author thinks that Yuanshi Tianzun is the head of the Three Pure dynasties. Is this a classical setting? But here comes another Yu Ruyi! There are also the Qingping Sword of Lingbao Tianzun and the Bagua Furnace of Daode Tianzun. These are the settings of the ancient times. It makes me feel so uncomfortable! According to Yuanshi Tianzun, who is the head of the Three Pure Ones, what he holds is the orb, while Lingbao Tianzun is the Jade Ruyi. According to the prehistoric period, Daode Tianzun is the head of the Three Pure Ones. What an obsessive-compulsive disorder of mine! It's heart-breaking! ! !

There are quite a few flaws. First of all, is a system that has been developed for tens of thousands of years since the birth of the universe so sound? After the creation of Pangu in the prehistoric universe, it went through many Huiyuan (one Huiyuan is equal to 120,000 years) before entering the primitive social stage of the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors. Secondly, I feel like I can't see the protagonist's need for time travel at all. . . First: Since the newborn universe must be full of spiritual energy or bursting with spiritual energy, the resources for cultivation must be more than most worlds! Second: the protagonist has supreme skills and has no need for them at all! Third: As an old man who has been teaching for most of his life and is 99 years old, the protagonist can be said to have a high level or experience, and there should be no need for understanding of various aspects of life. . . . . Then here comes the problem. Why travel through time?

I added this book to my bookshelf and deleted it again, going back and forth many times. My evaluation of this book can be summed up in two words: tasteless. Let me talk about the good side first. I like the setting very much and the plot is okay. On the negative side, I don't feel that the protagonist is a centenarian at all. If the author can't write it, don't add this setting. Now when I read a book and see the protagonist's settings such as the King of Soldiers and the rebirth of a boss, I just don't read it, because few people can write a protagonist that fits the setting. Also, can you create some original worlds? I'm almost sick of these worlds, such as A Chinese Girl, Jin Yong's Ancient Dragon Martial Arts, and Yang Shen. Too many people have written them.

I thought it was a bad ending, but it turned out that I wanted to have a super exciting finale, but nothing happened.

The main character's actions and personality are not lovable. I always feel that Sanbaoyu Ruyi is following a loser.

The pace is too slow, this dungeon is too long, and there are too many irrelevant descriptions, making the content too flat and like a running account. The setting is actually not bad, but the author does not strengthen the control of the rhythm. I am really worried that this good start will be wasted.

It is a rare book that relies on the destiny system. Unfortunately, time travel is a failure. It seems that the author deliberately reduced the protagonist's intelligence in order to write the plot of time travel. For example, in the first world, it is enough to destroy the five ghosts in the seal. Even if they are released, they should be properly prepared. It is written as 50-50. This is very inconsistent with the character of the protagonist.

The overall plot is pretty good, with a lot of flaws. Some of the plots were too ink-filled. Five or six chapters were written for one fighting scene, and from time to time there would be a poisonous point. I remember that there was a plot where the protagonist relented to zombies, and then when his teammates were injured, he immediately regretted it and never relented again. Is this increasing your xinxing or decreasing your IQ?

I remember that there seemed to be two real-life books, "Daozang" and "Xianzang". "Xianzang" seemed to have been lost in the long river of history.

Today's largest sect, the Kunlun Sect, is the most powerful disciple. Countless resources and sects have accumulated help, and they have only been able to build a foundation after practicing for 25 years. The two people the protagonist randomly instructs have already established a foundation. . It feels too fake. The cultivation of those big Tao sects has all been cultivated on Tao dogs? Others build the foundation casually as if they are playing outside, but they have worked hard for decades to build the foundation? This is a bit unclear. .

After watching most of it, I got excited⊙▽⊙The only bad thing is the character of the protagonist. He is over a hundred years old in both lives. The character of the protagonist seems to be innocent and loving. It would be fine if the protagonist was still in kindergarten. It is not worth taking risks for other people's affairs. Cultivation of immortality is destined to be a selfish, cold and cautious path. Anyone who gets in the way must die. Nowadays, there is no shortage of law but lack of money. So why should we care about the life and death of others at all costs? Which of the protagonists in the truly interesting books you have seen does not have this trait? The author should also refer to

Overall it's okay, but some of the words are too cumbersome and I'm trying to improve. It's a good author. Good luck.

Daluo Jinxian? The great Luo is at ease in the endless and infinite multiverse. How could he be trapped to death by a catastrophe at the end of the universe?

If the span of time and space is too small, readers will not be able to feel the power of time and the extraordinary power of immortality. After all, many fairy tale novels are weak compared to the real universe.

Stop writing this book and concentrate on writing it.

How should I put it? It's a bit too wordy. The first eight chapters are all about the protagonist talking to himself.

A new book has been released. Is this book still updated?

A little too much poison. I gave it up.

To be honest, the hang-up was too big and I didn't look back. The Catalog of Destruction is also cheating, but he doesn't tell everything in advance.

After seeing two pictures, I gave them up and said goodbye.

The pressure on your cultivation is too great. You are always practicing magic. You don't know that Tao is the foundation and magic is just to protect the Tao. If your cultivation level is high, it will be easier to practice magic.