Dashang Supervisor

I've seen dozens of them. This is something that all gods, ghosts and immortals have. But there is a problem. The protagonist joins the imperial court, becomes Kamura, and has meritorious service. But the imperial court did not provide any exercises. Do you think this is normal? The protagonist started practicing popular exercises. If you want to practice martial arts, you have to find a way by yourself. If you are in the imperial court, then what are you going to do with your hard work and get the credit for it?

Big banner, the donkeys in the production team don't dare to rest like this.

It is written in the book that it is not easy for a dynasty to be so powerful, but it turns out that such a genius can be assassinated by aristocratic families casually. No, it cannot be said to be an assassination, but an explicit killing. I would like to ask, how did this dynasty develop into such a powerful one? Did it all rely on the children of aristocratic families? Do you think it is possible for a court to be filled with aristocratic families? Such an unhealthy dynasty cannot be powerful or exist unless it is at the end of the dynasty. However, the author also writes that the background is a world where humans and emperors are unified and immortals, gods, monsters and ghosts have to stand aside, so the summary is inconsistent.

With two limited exemptions in a row, wouldn't your book be sold directly?

It was written before that the dynasty was so awesome, but now the three religions have come out, and the lifespans are not equal, they are invincible in heaven and on earth, but they only have a lifespan of a few thousand.

A preliminary evaluation shows that the protagonist's enemies appear out of nowhere and cannot be solved. The enemies will become stronger. Then, the top bosses around the protagonist are all trash. The top bosses outside are all the same. The villain will never die (the explanation is that defeat does not mean killing). A cult woman has written hundreds of books and is still dancing. She can also blackmail other geniuses. She is really without any brains.

I came here from the free website and saw Chapter 529. What do you think of it? I feel that the first 100 pictures are very exciting, solving crimes and adding golden fingers. As we get to the back, the direction of the story has deviated from the original intention. I don't understand why the author is like this.

I was about to give up, but I was speechless. In the early stage, I said there were few experts in the inspection department, and this is the result? The pace is too slow and the suspense is a mess.

I have read more than 300 chapters, and there are many complaints. It has been there since the beginning, but it is getting more and more delayed later on. There are also problems with the setting. The most important one is to practice the exercises, training resources, weapons and equipment, etc. As an eagle dog. Shouldn't the government provide them with them? Is it a joke that I have to do everything myself and act like an eagle dog working hard to death and working hard to exchange for some money? Isn't this a joke? As long as the protagonist has cheats to solve the case, what about the others? Do they want to advance by squeezing the people or extorting money? Otherwise, why would you practice if you don't have enough food for a month?

What are you writing about? One case will be solved and the other will be a competition. And if you write it this way, it will probably not last more than a hundred chapters. The protagonist is of little use except for intimidation. He is so good at that, but it is not free after all. Can you add more hard stuff and not be so bad?

You can't update! Maybe I can only ask for the treasure of my bottom box.

Bloody tricks, a waste of my coins

How come the city wall was destroyed by the protagonist? The protagonist is obviously just an inducement. The power to destroy the city wall comes from the owner of the palm print. The protagonist is at most an ignorant person. He takes all the blame on himself. He is really an honest person.

I've been following the update till now, and I have some things to say, but I haven't solved a few cases so far. There are big bosses in other departments who can come and pass the blame as they please. How dare a broken dragon dare to flood a county? ! How many bags does this head have? ! Can the county chief arrest him? ! It's not like you have no strength if you kill him immediately. Even if you treat everyone in the world as ants, you won't let others step on you.

After reading four chapters, I found that the protagonist was not able to solve the case at the beginning, and then he pretended to be able to solve the case in order to enjoy the training resources. The character design was not very good, and it laid the foundation for the crisis for the protagonist. This situation was completely based on the previous events, saying that he was stimulated and unable to solve the case and then quit. I don't know if the protagonist will suddenly become like Conan in the future, but for the time being, it doesn't look very likable.

Let's make a complaint: Goldfinger can only be used when solving crimes. The protagonist keeps participating in the competition there until he solves the case, and he thinks that the star points needed for Goldfinger are not enough. You should write about solving crimes, instead of writing about competitions and secret realms, okay?

Can the protagonist be happy and happy at every turn? What's so fun? We are not happy to see it at all.

The writing has been boring since the protagonist joined the Inspector. He had just become the Inspector and was expecting the protagonist to solve crimes and be promoted, but it ended up being a big competition and so many chapters were spent.

I rarely post comments, but after reading the previous part of this book, I thought it was a new system, and I kept trying to accept it, so I would like to say a few words. The plot is not bad, but there are too many afterthoughts, and countless supporting characters are slowly discovered to "turn out to be masters." . . It's a bit nauseating to always engage in such plots. It's like playing a game and finding out at the end that except you as the player, everyone else is a support. It's just as disgusting.

These two chapters are well written, so I would like to give them a small reward. Come on! Give it a try, author🐰

Are there any living people in this novel? Let's gather them together. I think the author can keep updating the ones who can become gods.

It seems like your kid ran away.

It has been a long time since the update was restored. I thought it was a eunuch and removed the bookshelf. Suddenly, it has been restored and the update has been restored for several months 🤭

Sometimes Tianxin, sometimes witch god, sometimes witch god

Refinement

A book published in 2022, it's really awesome, and another one, I really hate the setting that can improve the character's realm without practicing or taking drugs, after reading it, even breathing makes me feel sick.

Don't do it, kid. I forgot about it, but it was updated, and it wasn't updated yesterday.