Qingwei Tianzun

Very well written. The first is the map. It is not the type of changing the map, but it is in a huge map system from the beginning. This kind of expansion is grand and the connection between people is closer. The supporting characters will not be like leeks, cutting and growing again. The replacement speed is too fast and the characters are blurred. (For now, it is still on the same map, and it will be unclear in the later stages) The second is the characters. As far as the protagonist is concerned, what I see is indeed the behavior style that a decent person (or an immortal cultivator) should have. He is pure in heart but not stoic, acts with integrity, but does not overflow with the heart of the Holy Mother, cares about the affairs of the immortal world, and acts in a moderate manner. The plot is not procrastinating, not toxic, and the progression is reasonable. In short, based on my nine years of reading experience, this book will definitely not be bad. (The comments in this review are all based on real feelings. If there is any offense, please forgive me)

Is this really a good way to recommend a book? Let's work together on a small subject to change the ancient world's books. . . There were not many people watching, so those who were originally interested in group running may have been scared away...

I feel like giving up, why am I always struggling with dual cultivation.

Nine yuan for one head😜

The feeling of someone suddenly pinching my neck while I'm breathing😅

The writing is good, but I hope the author will not be too obsessed with the setting. The challenge of skipping levels is fun but also poisonous. Moreover, it is too far-fetched to kill people as the protagonist accumulates more and more realms. Although there is currently no actual over-level killing, some of the protagonist's own psychological activities have shown signs of killing people at a higher level, and he hopes to eliminate it in time. Nowadays, it is really not popular to kill people in higher realms. If you watch it too much, it will be poisonous because it goes against the setting. I hope the author can listen to his opinions.

Ordinary world: exercise, nourish qi, internal strength, Zhoutian Entering the Tao: eating qi, Tao foundation, inner scene, Dharma. The inner scene can be respectfully called the Grandmaster, the Dharma Appearance can be respectfully called the Grand Master, and the Dharma Appearance is usually called the Half-Step Dharmakaya. Dharmakaya: Human Immortal (life span 900+) lives more than 3,600 years before the change of heaven. Earth Immortal (life span 1800+) lived 19,800 years before the change of heaven. Celestial Immortal (life span 3600+) Before the change of heaven, the life span is one yuan. When the limit of one yuan is reached, you only need to survive one yuan of tribulations to get another yuan of life. The issue of monk longevity in Shizhou will be partially solved soon. Human immortals and earthly immortals can usually be respectfully called Zhenren, heavenly immortals are called true kings, and those in the ultimate realm of heavenly immortals are called immortal kings. (The Immortal Chivalric Story of the Immortal, Thanks to Squid Girl for the perfect setting 🌹)

To be honest, what I like most about this book is that when someone wants to plot against the protagonist, the protagonist will find out what is wrong when he senses something is wrong, and then prepare a response in advance. I feel so happy to read it. I was really drunk on some books. Every time the SB protagonist encountered a conspiracy, I could tell something was wrong, and then he would find the reason and say it was because he was nervous or felt wrong. Forget it once or twice. It was like this every time he encountered danger. It made me feel sick. Come on, author, don't be influenced by others, just write according to this rhythm. It's fine if you write less, just ensure the quality. Even the fighting scenes at the beginning are a bit weak, but it can be seen that the author is slowly improving. As long as the quality does not decline, I will continue to follow it. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง Finally, I'll add something. The author really likes to use the word "therefore"! There are many, and some places where they are used seem redundant, and some places actually read more smoothly without this word. Even if this word is removed, it will not affect it. It can be replaced with other words, such as so and so on. Frequent use of this word makes me feel uncomfortable. I hope the author can change it when he has free time. It is a bit discouraging to read. To be honest, I persisted at least. Others may not be able to read without it, which really affects the reading experience.

This novel is obviously too bland. Although it avoids many poisonous points, it actually eliminates many pleasant points. We cannot say that this is a bad thing. The author does not have much time to write the book. It is very good to be able to write it like this. From an objective point of view, I think this book is still very good. From the starting point Among the novels, I think there is no problem in ranking it in the middle or top. I suggest that if you are really short of books, there is no problem in reading it. Of course, this only represents my personal opinion. I have not been reading for a short time. In fact, I hope that everyone will be more considerate to the author. It is indeed not easy to write books nowadays. It is difficult to find a good book, and it is even harder to find a book that can be read.

Let me ask you a question! Those protagonists with poor or average qualifications can practice faster than geniuses. Anyone with a discerning eye will know there is a problem at a glance. Why is everyone ignoring this problem?

Subscribe on Q.         ，，，，，，，，，，；，，，，         ，，，，；，；，， Since I recommended it on the homepage, there have always been people coming here to comment on other books. Why is this book so bad? I'm sorry. I've read all the books you mentioned, and none of them are comparable. Only this book is the fairy in my mind. I love this one, so I hope that fans of other books can leave quietly and mellowly to read what you like. You can criticize, but don't leave a lot of other books with completely different styles from this book in the comment area, which will make you uncomfortable.

Authentic grass jelly with little starting point. On the road of growth, it is almost comparable to The Illustrated Book of Destruction and the Path of the Swordsman.

This book is still ruined by the over-level battles. They always beat people up one level after another without any breaks. The more I read, the more boring I get. Smooth development is enough, just stop tormenting yourself 🤫

Why do you authors like to make up words? Are your idioms used correctly? ? ? Or do you think this is okay? Or more unique?

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There are reasons why it is not popular: 1. The content is too bland and a bit watery 2. The writing of the fighting scenes is too poor, ppt style fighting, the fairy tale fantasy fighting scene is an important place 3. The protagonist's strength is unreasonable, Tao In the early 3 years of the foundation, I was initially said to be invincible. Senior Sister Qingyue, who is also a true successor, has also broken through the inner scene for 3 years. Her spiritual weapons are no worse than yours, her experience is richer than yours, and her skills are only a little bit worse than yours. But why the hell are you telling me that working hard is a 50-50 deal? It's so outrageous. It makes my scalp numb. Go and learn the legend of mortals cultivating immortals. There is a reason why people are so popular. At least it's reasonable from beginning to end, and their combat power hasn't collapsed.

The content is very good, but the protagonist always has to fight some opponents who are completely unbeatable (the earth immortals fight against the immortals before the Dharmakaya, the human immortals fight against the heavenly immortals, the earth immortals fight against the late stage or perfect heavenly immortals, and the earth immortals fight against the legends) time and time again, which makes it very tiring to read. Can't there be a few times where the opponent is a fellow practitioner or a crushing opponent. Moreover, after practicing for hundreds of years and nearly a thousand years, I still can't rise up. It seems a bit frustrating. At this speed, the merger of the ten continents will probably only reach the late stage of Tianxian. By then, there will be a lot of legendary creations. It is estimated that the protagonist still has to jump through levels, so can't he rise to the first echelon faster?

The name of the supporting character is so silly, Li Shangyin and Li Qingzhao. Even if you want to use it directly, the protagonist has traveled through time and at least has some reaction. Subtle nausea

Xianxia's situation is particularly angry Why, I have been thinking about why Later I found out that it is because the author dare not write or readers today are not able to pretend like the writers and readers in ancient times The simplest example is, Left green dragon on the right, white tiger on the right, does it feel very fake? The sun is shining brightly, and the sky and the earth are as wide as the sky. Uncle Feng came forward for me, and the atmosphere was fresh and cool. The phoenix's wings carry the flag, and when it meets the child, it reaches the Western Emperor. Pick up the comet and think of it as a bow, and hold up the handle of the bucket as a subordinate. The rebel land is separated from its upper and lower parts, swimming in the waves of startling mist. At that time, he was so wild that he summoned Xuanwu and rushed to his subordinates. Later Wenchang's envoys came and selected the gods to unite them. The road is long and long, but Xu Yan is strict and vigorous. On the left, Master Yu sent an envoy to guard Xi, and on the right, Duke Lei served as a guard. Translated: After passing Dongdi Taihao, turn right and let Feng Bo Feilian go ahead to explore. The brilliant sun has not yet risen to shine, and is flying across the sky and the earth. Uncle Feng serves as the vanguard of my team, sweeping away the dust and ushering in the coolness. Phoenix Zhang Caiyi supports the cloud flag and meets the golden god Lingshou at the West Emperor's place. Pick off the comet as a small flag and wave it, and raise the handle of the Big Dipper as a big flag. Five colors float up and down, wandering in the sea of ​​clouds and waves. It was already dark and the surroundings were hazy, summoning the seven Xuanwu stars from the north to run in series. Let the six stars of Wenchang take charge of the entourage from behind, and choose the gods to go forward with me. The journey is so long, rushing slowly towards the sky with the whip. The Rain Master is accompanying him on the left, and the Thunder Lord escorting his retinue is on the right. This is the emperor, this is Versailles, this is the pretense of being sober and refined.

Whoever copied who🙂 just want to see

Sorry, what is wrong with the author? I have no inspiration or something is wrong at home. I have to come out and talk about it. I said it would be Monday at the latest, but the result is silent again. If I don't post a single chapter, I can just leave a message in the comment area. There is no sound at all.

On the fourth day of July, the wedding day of the third son of the Liu family, the Liu family, as one of the four major families in Xicheng, naturally held a banquet. All the nobles and celebrities in the city congratulated him. After all, the third son of the Liu family was not only one of the best geniuses among the younger generation, but also became a disciple of the Qingping Sword Sect, a major local sect. Liu Qidong's name was known to everyone. On the fourth day of July, the Liu family was exterminated, and the headmaster of the Qingping Sword Sect was seriously injured. Taoist Yun Yan, the headmaster of the Qingping Sword Sect who was supposed to be married to Liu Qidong, was also missing. At the ruins of the Liu Mansion, under the toilet in the backyard, a stinking figure crawled out and disappeared into the night. The clear stream was suddenly polluted by black. A young man with a terrifying face emerged from the stream, looking in the direction of the Qingping Sword Sect with hatred in his eyes. The red strip of cloth on his body showed his identity. Liu Qidong looked at the strangely bloody stone bead in his hand, "You help me get revenge, I am willing to pay any price." "Even if it is your life" the strange answer appeared in Liu Qidong's ears, but Liu Qidong was not surprised at all, still staring at the stone bead in his hand, "Even if it is my life!" "As you wish, give your body to me." In the strange voice, Liu Qidong felt his eyes go dark and lost consciousness. Liu Qidong's eyes flashed red and he moved his limbs. "My body is really weak, but the few interior scenes are still easy to deal with. If it weren't for me... Forget it, just think of me as doing good deeds every day!" Liu Qidong turned into a stream of red light and flew towards the Qingping Sword Sect. "Who!" Taoist Qingping looked at the entrance of the cave. This was the forbidden area within the sect. He also issued a death order. Anyone who could still come here must be an enemy rather than a friend. He ran the technique with all his strength and secretly activated the secret treasure. "Guess." As soon as he heard the word "you", Taoist Qingping felt that the magic power in his body was stagnant, and he stood frozen in place. "Let me see why you want to kill this kid!" Liu Qidong pinched Taoist Qingping's head, a strange black light shined in his hands, and a golden light suddenly rushed towards Liu Qidong from Taoist Qingping's arms. Liu Qidong suddenly rolled on the ground holding his head and let out a shrill scream, "I am Liu Qidong, no, no, no, I am Master Jiyin, no, I am Liu Qidong, no, I am..." Two different voices kept intertwining, and the magic power that imprisoned Taoist Qingping suddenly disappeared. Taoist Qingping quickly took out the flying sword, pinched the sword technique, and the nine flying swords turned into sword light and rushed towards Liu Qidong along a mysterious route. A huge eight-armed demonic figure shining with black copper light suddenly appeared on Liu Qidong's body, and the nine flying swords were crushed without any hindrance. Taoist Qingping had no time to react before he was caught in the hands of the Demon God. "No, Brother Dong, no!" A girl wearing a green gauze feathered garment rushed in from the entrance of the cave and hugged the runaway Liu Qidong without any hindrance. "Brother Dong, it's all my fault, please let my father go." Liu Qidong's eyes were blank and he didn't react at all, but the Demonic God gradually let go of Taoist Qingping in his hand. Phew~ Liu Qidong's eyes regained their luster, and he stared at the woman in front of him. The dagger in her hand was completely buried in Liu Qidong's chest, "Yun Yan, you..." "Trash, even a useless person!" The originally innocent girl suddenly turned into a witch, Yun Yan looked at Liu Qidong, "Unexpectedly, it turned out to be you, the extremely yin old devil. Why, the supplement was harvested on this Lord Rabbit. If you don't want to notify Tianhe Immortal Mansion, hand over the Yuqing Sword Key, I know it is in your hands." "It turns out it's you, an old witch. This kid is really miserable." Liu Qidong's tone suddenly changed, but his old voice did not contradict anything. "It seems that I can't be kind today. Taiyin Demon God!" "Then let's try it! The Dharma of the Maiden, the Nine Heavens Mysterious Girl appears!" The two Dharma phases continued to collide, the small cave had long been broken, and most of the huge Qingping Mountain was destroyed by the aftermath. In the end, Liu Qidong was slightly better and took away Yun Yan and most of Xicheng with his Dharma self-destruction. In the ruins, Liu Qidong was lying on the ground with half a hairpin between his eyebrows, with stone beads rolling down beside him. The cracks on the stone beads continued to increase, and they turned into flying dust with the sound of "No--". After a long time, Liu Qidong woke up, pulled out his hairpin, and looked at the ruins, "Hahahaha, I got through it in the end. From today on, I will be called Taoist Baizhe. I will never die. I will become the strongest, and I will climb to the highest step by step. No one can deceive me or bully me, hahahaha——" Taoist Baizhe disappeared into the sky with the light of his sword.

"After taking over 50% of the family, I guess I will be secretly slandered by the juniors again." Li Shangyin maintained the image of a black-hearted weapon refiner, even for the family, there were not many exceptions. Li Shangyin touched the materials, "It's ridiculous to say that in the past, I also thought about building a high-grade Taoist foundation and restoring the family's former glory, but building the foundation has proved that I have no chance. Fortunately, I still have this talent for refining. Save money. Well, I hope I can collect enough materials to buy the Heavenly King's Life-Extending Pill as soon as possible!" "Grandpa Zu, according to your instructions, those cultivation resources have been sent to Brother Xuan." Two young-looking disciples bowed to Li Shangyin. "Well, go down and practice hard. Although your talents are not as good as Li Xuan's, you still have a chance to win!" "Yes!" "I hope Li Xuan can become a talented person soon, my family!" His eyes seemed to be closed but not closed. Recalling that when I first joined the Guizhen Sect, I was very proud. Although it was not as good as the Cui family, it could still suppress the four families easily. The Cui and Li families interacted with each other in the Chihuoyuan Copper Mine, but the number of times could not be said. I vaguely heard several elders and elders in the clan say that the Cui family is not comparable to our ordinary small families, and they occasionally let loose. The elders also said that my Li family is pretty good in this world. Elders passed away one by one, and I grew old. I watched helplessly as my family declined little by little, and I felt anxious! The materials I once saved for longevity, if I can't wait for the life-sustaining pill, I hope it can help the family cultivate more children.

The fighting power fluctuates. It can freeze the magic weapon of humans and immortals, but cannot freeze the middle stage of hair. No one can detect a curse from the demon sect. Only the protagonist can discover that the evil way is so difficult, the righteous way can survive.

Come on, author, keep the style, rarely reward, and enjoy reading.

The writing is not good, the fighting is rubbish, and the lifespan set is not too short. Even if you have practiced hard before, you can see the weaknesses of others at the same level again and again. Are you telling me that you have opened your eyes? The loopholes in other people's skills can be eliminated at a glance, and it can be suppressed by fighting. A new bird is so embarrassing that he has spent thirty or forty years practicing in vain.

Many people complain about San Miao's name being useless, so please help San Miao. You can apply for a supporting role here. Whether Sanmiao can use it or not depends on your ability. Name: Tao number: Race: Cultivation level: Major skill: Magic weapon: Affiliation: Personal profile:

Wasn't it a pigeon before? I deleted it from the bookshelf and told me it was finished?

(Borrowed from some settings in the Destruction of Luck Catalog) Dragon Realm is rumored to be formed by the ancestral dragon gathering many small worlds and practicing great magical powers. The northern part of the Dragon Realm has been shrouded in illusion for many years. This is the training place of His Highness Ao Li, the ninth son of the Ancestral Dragon, the first mirage dragon in ancient times. At this moment, Ao Li had just finished his training when a boy under Zulong came to invite him. It was said that Zulong had summoned him. Ao Li was not surprised. Since the last forced practice went wrong, Zulong summoned him many times to make up for the mistakes in his practice. It's just different from the past. The Ancestral Dragon Palace is quite quiet at the moment. There are fewer dragons who usually practice with the help of the ancestral dragon blood. The boy just leads the way to the door and signals for him to enter on his own. "Ao Li has met my father." I saw Ao Li saluting, and when he raised his head, he saw Zulong wearing a golden Taoist robe standing on top of him, supporting the entire dragon clan like a jade pillar holding up the sky. "Sit down, I'm calling you here now to tell you that there will be a big change in China. In order to prevent this catastrophe from being affected here, my father has decided to close all the passages in the Dragon Realm. The matter of the Chaos Hidden Mysterious Vine that you mentioned last time is over. It is better to practice with peace of mind to make up for yourself." Opposite Ao Li, Zulong said slowly. Ao Li could not help but be stunned when he suddenly heard something related to his own path, but at the end of the story, his face became firm. "Father, I have made up my mind. Although I am a mirage dragon, my way is based on the dream universe, and is not limited to the way of mere fantasy. I was born with insufficient heels, and I made a big mistake in my last practice. As the saying goes, one step is wrong, one step is wrong. Now I am between the two of the mysterious vines. If I don't give it a try now, how will I have a chance in the future battles between the ways?" "Besides, a time of great change is also a time of great opportunity. And when the heavenly secrets are in chaos, Taoism and Buddhism will be too busy to take care of themselves and suppress us, so I will just fish in troubled waters to make my own way. Moreover, my goal is only the Chaos Hidden Mysterious Vine, and I must be careful not to be involved in a catastrophe." Ao Li said firmly, obviously his mind has been made up, and he is only waiting for Zulong's consent. "Once you leave, I'm afraid it will be difficult to come back. If you stay in the Dragon Realm with peace of mind, my father will definitely protect you." The Ancestral Dragon Hall of China, this is the residence of the ancestral dragon in China, and is also a passage from the Dragon Realm to China. Ao Li came out of it dressed in green clothes. Looking back at the dragon world, after it came out, it was hidden in nothingness, and it was obvious that all connections had been disconnected. "I also want to focus on making up for my own cultivation, but my father has been seriously injured, and the Dragon Clan also needs someone to take over."

I didn't really like the system stream at first, but now the system stream is also called the behind-the-scenes stream. The system is a magic weapon. The form and name are different, so it is still acceptable. However, the first fight at the beginning is really speechless. The protagonist has just become a true disciple and goes to the sect to garrison. Then an unpopular alien prince comes to get close to him. I can't complain about this alien prince. My mother is gone, and he is an alien who is not welcome. In the end, I still don't want to fight or fight, and I keep retreating. It is true that aliens cannot be emperors, but this is the world of immortality... If you have the strength, it is still possible. Even if you really don't want to fight, you must at least have the ability to protect yourself. Until now, you are nothing but the people and things left by your mother. You have not developed at all... Now that you are getting older, Yu Yin can no longer protect yourself. Come here to find a stranger to be a dead horse doctor. An adult has no hands or feet? It can only be said that he was not decisive enough. If he hadn't figured out that he should develop more even when he was about to die, he wouldn't be without support even if he didn't fight. You think this persona is not a particularly worthy friend, right? At least for now, he seems to be a character with little courage. Even if the protagonist is given a baby to make friends with, to put it bluntly, people only come to make friends because of their status in the sect, just like the officials below to please the people above. It is understandable that the protagonist wants to repay, but he is not familiar with it at all. The consumption of magical weapons + formations + fighting recovery elixirs... It feels like the consumption of small boosts in the novice stage... Isn't it He Zhi Si? It's interesting enough for you to give him something to defend himself, but he's not familiar with it, and you have a job here, but you asked this prince to come to your office to break through (when he was about to break through, many princes wanted to kill him or cripple him) and why are you cultivating immortals and mixing with other people's royal families? It's not that it can't be done, but you don't have to. You are not a casual cultivator who lacks resources for training. The first battle in this novice stage is really speechless and full of shortcomings! One of the supporting characters has no charm, one of the main characters is unnecessary and has no reason... It's really terrible to watch.