Start by Pursuing a Talented Girl

Let me talk about my opinion first. The character of the author Chen Yanxi is really a god in my heart. The characterization is delicate and very charming. At first, I thought it was an industrialized girl with a discordant family and an unhappy childhood. She needs to wait for the protagonist to save her. But she finally wakes up in the world. But as long as the family is together for more than a day on weekends, they will quarrel. It's just that I'm not as upbeat as the heroine and my grades are not good. Coming from such a family, I am somewhat precocious. When I was in junior high school, I was so confused that I could feel that I wanted to escape from this family. When I was in high school, I just thought that I wouldn't have to go home all the time when I went to college. From my senior year to college, I had my own plan and understood what I wanted. To put it bluntly, it is freedom. Escape from the family is just an appearance. One sentence in the letter touched me deeply. Feeling is a person's most basic right and it is difficult to take it away. Because I feel uncomfortable, I don't do it because I want to do it, so I do it. This is the freedom I want to pursue. I am also an adult, and I also understand that many things require responsibility. You have to consider the consequences of everything. Real freedom is difficult to achieve, and it may not be achieved at all. The end of the road is still the road, but I want to go infinitely far on this road. Now I am a tavern owner. I drink when I am happy and don't accept guests I don't like. If I want to travel or perform a concert, I will close the door for two days. Here I hope everyone can understand one thing: the freedom I pursue is not passionate nor aimless doing nothing. I understand how to have enough funds to pursue my dreams without taking up too much of my time and energy. I am still working in this direction. Therefore, the heroine Chen Yanxi left a particularly deep impression on me. I always feel familiar when I see her plot. She is smarter than me. In the novel, she should also have a tavern of her own, which will liberate herself. We are all going further and further on our own roads. We will all become more and more free Finally, let's talk about my parents. They divorced. When I was in high school, my father married a stepmother. I talked frankly with them. It probably means that you don't need to discuss with me about divorce or marriage. Just live your life. At the same time, please don't interfere with me too much. I understand how you want your children to succeed, but I am me and not your puppet. Children are not trumpets given by their parents. We reconciled two years after I graduated from college

Give me a compliment? When I read the first few chapters and the character information cards, I was confused and felt a bit inexplicable. I didn't know whether it was embarrassing or too fake. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I couldn't help but praise the author for his delicate description of the mentality of the two heroines. But the problem comes again, delicate and realistic. It seems like this is going to be written in the direction of the harem? With such delicate emotions, I insist that the emotions are exclusive. At least the male and female protagonists did not grow up together as three parties (let's count them as three parties for the time being). It is difficult to imagine that they can coexist. This problem is unimaginably solvable. And looking forward to the follow-up. Then I saw Chapter One Hundred and Six. Try to rate it. There are mainly three people: Wang Ge, Chen Yanxi, and Gu Panyan Wang Ge In general, he has a weak personality, incomprehensible behavior, and is a pure tool and scumbag. In chapters 70 and 80, we started to prepare to create the male protagonist. In more than 100 chapters, we can't see much. In fact, there are two opinions. One, the male protagonist is too complicated and I can't understand it. Second, at present, the male protagonist is sick, and he is a real tool, and he is also a tool for tools. The tool is of course the system. The behavior of pursuing the two female protagonists is all given by the system. The system accounts for at least 80% of the reason for becoming a scumbag. The male protagonist is just rationalizing his own behavior. Pure tool person. The personality is also often changeable and difficult to understand. Maybe it depends on the follow-up. Gu Panyan The left-behind children turned into big sisters who were beaten out. Tattooed girl. In Chapter 18, the author throws out the character background setting and psychological description. I evaluated myself as being negative and wanting to die, and my heart was very tired. At this time, the protagonist chose to use the system plug-in to help Gu Panyan, who was still willing to struggle. There is actually a problem here. Judging from the content of more than forty chapters, especially the forty-two chapter "There is no regret medicine in this world. Since you chose to provoke me, you must be prepared to bear the consequences." It is obvious that Gu Panyan is aware of this problem, but Wang Ge is not. The author can write it and should be aware of this problem, but Wang Ge is not. But later Gu Panyan broke down what he said. In fact, from a setting point of view, it can be explained whether they are separated or not. But a big problem has arisen. Chen Yanxi also has this problem. Let me say this at the end. Then later, even though she knew Chen Yanxi's problems and her own character and Wang Ge's scumbag, she was with Wang Ge and talked about it together. Chen Yanxi Genius beautiful girl. In fact, it can be evaluated as a purely imaginary character. Just as Wang Ge's score is nonsense, Chen Yanxi's score is even more nonsense. Of course, this is not important, it is even good. Who doesn't like talented beautiful girls? This is a relatively extreme imaginary character, which can be said to only appear in stories. Appears at the beginning, setting a rational and calm mind. In the first chapter, she agreed to Wang Ge's condition of pretending to be his girlfriend, and after three months of pursuing her, the rational and calm setting began to collapse. Of course, if Chen Yanxi already likes Wang Ge, there is no problem. But a person who pursues freedom, learns perversion, here is learning in a broad sense, and can tolerate such parents, pursues the freedom he wants to pursue. People who don't want to be bound by love. It's strange that someone like Chen Yanxi can fall in love after sitting together in the library for three months. Wang Ge can chatter in the library without getting bored. On the day of the college entrance examination, Chen Yanxi ran away. Leave a letter. This is not surprising and adds depth to the character. But he will come back. Later, Baizhang and Gu Panyan had a verbal exchange in Haisha. Weird. "To speculate on future choices with the current mentality is disrespectful to the future and irresponsible for the present." On the surface, it is natural and there is nothing to say. But there is another sentence before it: "For me now, I really can't accept it, but for me in the future, that is something that is uncertain." You might as well just say that you are changing your mentality to accept this. You will allow Wang Ge to step into two different boats. This is the same problem as Gu Panyan. The two heroines, Chen Yanxi and Gu Panyan, may have the same choice when they know that Wang Ge is a scumbag. They can continue to like Wang Ge and not give up on Wang Ge, or they can like but give up on Wang Ge. But together they chose not to give up. Don't ask why, just ask because the charm value is high. The two also chose the same situation and did not reject Wang Ge when they knew each other. Don't ask why, just ask because the charm value is high. Why are these two points problematic? Because the two heroines are portrayed in detail in the previous article, the portrayal is very vigorous and profound, but the success is also delicate, and the failure is also delicate. The more classic love novels, such as Romeo and Juliet, Butterfly Lovers, The Legend of the White Snake, etc., Are also very profound in their depictions. But they have one thing in common, a single male and female protagonist. This creates a problem. No matter how you look at the scumbag male protagonist, it's disgusting. The two independent female protagonists portrayed before broke their own principles because of the male protagonist. Don't ask why, just ask that the male protagonist is more charming. It looks awkward no matter how you look at it. As another book friend commented, such a profoundly portrayed heroine is indeed very powerful in a single-female novel. Written as harem. So strange. Especially Chen Yanxi. Even expressing support for Wang Ge from a so-called free point of view (the code word is that he will accept it) is too strange. There is also a third girl with high math. I haven't written much about this yet, so I won't talk about it.

When I first read this book, I partly read about romance. Many of the romance novels I read before were about one person in the city, including the other one I'm reading now, which is also about one person. So I was very curious about how these three people were written. Writing about the city is not without a harem. Nowadays, writing about urban harems is like going back to the past, Hong Kong or Japan. There is also the harem, man, the harem is very exciting and I like to watch it. For example, I have several cats and it is not necessarily good to have more cats, but sometimes it is definitely fun to have more cats. Back to the main text, this book has been very detailed from the beginning to the present. Speaking of the heroine alone, she is free, courageous and romantic. Many people think of them separately and it is not right. Ai Xi cannot choose freedom if she does not have the courage. I don't know now, but about ten years ago, there were many people on QQ, and I met a group of people from home and abroad who were rich, poor, domestically violent, and pampered. Some people's families were really repressed like Ai Xi's, including mine. Girls were fine, but boys were beaten a lot. I heard a lot of words in that era: A filial son is really a stick, and if a child is disobedient, he deserves to be beaten. Having said that, some of the people I met back then got married. Sometimes I chatted and asked about regrets, regrets about getting married, and why I got married because of my parents' wishes. Sometimes when I want to be free, I often lack the courage, the courage to resist, and the courage to say no to others. I remember that I was quite lively when I was a child, but now I am also introverted. I pay attention to what others think, and I am afraid of making mistakes and don't dare to say no. Many people are like me and lack the courage to be free. Let's talk about Yanbao. Yanbao can be said to represent courage. She is very skilled in martial arts, good at fighting, and very brave in behavior. It can be said that the person has not changed. She surrendered her body and mind. For the first time, she was given the protagonist. But if we only look at the beginning, you will find that she is a poor student. In fact, she is a poor student. The student is not quite right, because she used to be a good student, but she can only call it campus bullying (language version) because Yanbao used courage to break the bullying but also got isolated. The protagonist can be said to have opened Yanbao's heart with romance, took Yanbao to skip class to see the stars, and used romance to break through Yanbao's heart little by little. The shackles of parents' divorce and remarriage As for Li Meng, many people actually say that two heroines are enough, and they don't want a third heroine. How can I say that now Li Meng's portrayal is very good, but there is no opportunity to enter the scene like Ai Xi and Yan Bao. Li Meng symbolizes romance, and many people want to go like her. Wherever he goes, he travels all over the world, but Li Meng was born as an orphan and grew up in an orphanage. When he was young, he experienced the death of his sister and teacher who he grew up with. In fact, from the description of the orphanage, it can be seen that this is not the only one who died, but this was a very close person, which brought the deepest feelings. My sister's wish was the seed of romance. She wanted to look pretty and visit various places. Then the orphanage's money was stolen and the director fell ill. One of her children took charge of the overall situation and brought about changes. It turned out that it was not like what the zodiac said, and she began to face herself. In fact, Li Meng and the protagonist have a lot in common, whether they are romantic or crazy. In one chapter, Li Meng asked him to fly a kite, but because of the weather, he couldn't fly a kite and go abroad. The protagonist agreed very much that he wanted to go. It is more about happiness than romance, happiness that is not affected by worldly worries, and you can do whatever you want and do whatever you want. Freedom and courage are indispensable to bring about romance. The writing is not good and the writing is too scattered. I have read so many books and I can only remember the plot in general. Please forgive me

This book is well written, very in-depth and interesting. The author should not stop updating. I have automatically subscribed and voted for the monthly vote. Come on, author!

It's so outrageous. Most of the books recommended by the author are about eunuchs.

I really felt deeply after reading this book recently. Self-reshaping is a long and painful process. The process of reshaping is to completely overthrow the previous values ​​​​and world view in your life. I am currently in the process of self-reshaping. I am not saying that I have the same unlucky family as the heroine, but I discovered after I graduated from my Ph. D. That my concept of scientific research was incorrect. After repeatedly hitting the wall, I discovered that my concept of scientific research has always been deformed, incorrect, and even ran counter to mainstream scientific research, so I made up my mind to start reshaping myself. In the process of reshaping, you really doubt your life. You need to read a lot of literature and bid documents, and listen to various courses. In the process, you will repeatedly doubt and deny your previous self. In the process of reading, you also need to think about whether what you read is really correct. Even if it is wrong, you have to force yourself to read it, just because it is wrong. This process is long and painful, so that one day in the future when you ask others, you will no longer tell you "You are weak in a certain aspect and can't explain it in a few words", but you will confidently present your own results or find a breakthrough point in the process of doing scientific research. It is difficult. I quite understand that the heroine "must go" ", many people think that this is a case of literary youth, why is a harem cool article writing this? It's so interesting for the two female protagonists to have a Shura scene. In fact, if you haven't experienced it, you have no right to speak. If there is no process of reshaping, how can there be a new you? You will always live in the shadow of your past and be unable to get out of it.

Theoretically, a perfect independent heroine cannot be written in a harem novel. Think about it from another perspective, as the male protagonist, can you accept one woman and two men? Definitely not. If a woman can accept a man having a harem, is she still an independent and perfect woman? So I say there is something wrong with what the author wrote. He wanted to create an independent woman, which makes no sense in theory.

This author is capable. He could obviously make three times the money by putting these three female protagonists in three pure love novels, but he still wrote a harem novel in one. He really made me cry to death😭😭

If it's a harem, don't write it in a hesitant way. If it's a single story, make it a little sweeter. It won't be good or bad, and it won't be very enjoyable, but the characters are well drawn.

Let's take a stab at the third heroine. She was hit in a car accident during the trip and her legs were paralyzed 🤓. The plot is old-fashioned but useful. Otherwise, I would never have imagined how she would fall in love with the male protagonist 😁

I just saw Li Zhimeng's part. To be honest, I can't hold it in anymore. Tears were streaming down my face while watching it. I once met such an optimistic, cheerful, and enthusiastic girl. She is not as strong as Li Zhimeng, and she even suffers from depression herself, but what she brings to our friends is joy and happiness. An accident took her away forever. Such an optimistic and enthusiastic girl could no longer open her eyes because of a drunk driver. The last time she chatted with her, she said that she was preparing to take the postgraduate entrance examination and had a very good boyfriend. The more I watch this part, the more I keep thinking of her. The world is really unfair. Brothers, this child never let us see her depressed side even when her depression was at its most severe. And just when she was strong enough to get out of her depression, Don't drive drunk.

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The three golden chapters are average, but starting from the story line of the two heroines Yan Bao Xixi, although it is a very vulgar plot of the hero saving the heroine, it is indeed well written and quickly establishes the image of two very distinctive heroines. Zhiwei, who only appeared after the relationship was confirmed, is also very vivid and lovable. However, many love harems in the system, including this book, have the same problem, that is, as the plot develops, it gradually feels that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonist. Because as a daily relationship, maintaining the relationship is very important, but as a love harem, this is not enough. The male protagonist performed very well in the early stage, but as the plot progressed, he focused too much on daily life and neglected the growth of the male protagonist. Xixi chose to stand with him from the beginning to the end, Yanbao was willing to give him the conditions to win against her, and Zhizhi finally joined, there was an indescribable awkwardness. A relationship can start with salvation, but it cannot last a lifetime, let alone divide the relationship into several parts. The author's description of the male protagonist's change of mind is very good. This idea of ​​responsibility and debt is very three-dimensional, but it is not expressed enough in action. The male protagonist can inherit the family business, but there are not many corresponding talents described. It basically relies on being a funny contrast to his father and brother. From the time Xixi arrived at school, all the male protagonist has been doing is constantly pulling between several female protagonists, and even the final plot advancement relies on his mental illness, which is obviously inappropriate. This is also something I think is done very well in love games. For example, Toru Watanabe insists on running in the morning to improve his physical strength. This is not only a subtle manifestation of growth, but also a clear way to break free from the shackles of the system through hard work. It is not a deus ex machina or a patch that is slapped on when the plot requires it. Overall, it is still an excellent work worth reading, but I hope the author can have a better plan before starting the book. With such excellent writing skills, he can write such a lovable female character. I believe that if he improves it, he should be able to achieve better results.

I told you not to accept the third one at that time, but you didn't listen. It's fine now. I don't even want to read it. The first two are so perfect. I have to have three. It's too much, dear.

It's not like the author came up with the recommendation words. Some people can scold the editor if they want to. The author didn't want to trick people who like single heroines into coming in. After all, there were two heroine color cards at the beginning, and now there are three...

I read it all night. The male protagonist is too greasy. Even though he has no immortality, this identity, and this condition, he is still so greasy that it's a bit licking. It's just that the author's writing is not strong enough and the plot is too rough to advance.

Tell a joke

After reading so many light novels, only Xiao Yuer, Shen Youchu, Qingye Rin, Lin Youxi and Xixi can really write into my heart. Especially in Qingye Rin and Xixi, I saw another youth, another life, and another world in them. What they are pursuing is something I have thought about, and only dared to think about, but have not taken any action on. I am not the hero of the novel. How much I want to participate in their lives, how much I want to meet and have a conversation. But I can only be an observer of their lives. Even if I can't participate in their lives, I will still support them behind the screen. I hope the author can give Xixi a happy ending. Her pursuit of freedom and the process of reshaping are destined to have many setbacks, but I believe that the world will fall in love with such a lovely girl and will not let her get hurt again. The ending of the story may not satisfy me, but I believe it will be satisfactory.

Thoughts after reading Chapter 117 I admit that I, Wang Ge, am a scumbag. Not only a scumbag, but also a rotten person and a bastard. I have never loved the world. I was just playing the role of a son in the eyes of my parents and a classmate in the eyes of my classmates. No one liked me. All they liked was this shell called Wang Ge. I never feel safe, system? That's just a little play in a boring life. Maybe it's also my seasoning? This world is pale, turbid, and rotten. I don't know how I want to live, how I can live. But I met you, You are Chen Yanxi, the rational and sincerely romantic freedom, your soul is unfettered, you are the sun, the light, you are the ship I parked, the sustenance of my heart and reason, I am i hope, the sinker of your free soul, a cloud on the way home. You are Gu Panyan, the one who is trapped in the filthy mud, the courage to not look directly into the abyss, but to punch away, the cessation of desire on the way back, the snake that bewitches Yin Tian Garden, my courage to face all despair, and the only one in the world. I am the prisoner of your body, the carrier of your spirit, and the one who leads thousands of people to me. Thank you for giving me the courage to face the world and the freedom to look directly into my heart. How can I let you go?

Unlike system novels, the sense of system existence is very weak Obviously he wants to be a scumbag, but the writing is very innocent To put it simply, it is a daily novel in various disguises Also, the author is absolutely shaking in his heart. One of the two heroines suppresses her IQ, the other suppresses her by force, and the protagonist acts stupid and cute every day...

It sucks, a lot of things are not explained clearly

I really like this book. Some people say he is a scumbag. If you read it carefully twice, you will find that the male protagonist in the article is gentle. In reality, how many people can do it? Most of them give up after persisting for a while. It is very gentle. In this book, both female protagonists know each other but still write a gentle and high-spirited book.

I really want to be Mr. Xixi's dog. I really want to ask you, the author, how you created the character. Xixi seems to be Nietzsche, the eternally shining god who respects equality and freedom. I love her so much, but she is not a god or Nietzsche. She is me, she is you, the last background and the humblest desire in people's hearts.

After staying up for three days and nights, I finally finished reading this novel. Personally, I found this book amazing at the beginning, but at the end, I felt like I just wanted to read it to the end. Maybe it was because there were too few narrations, which made me feel that some of the plots looked strange. Yan Yanzi's calmness and lack of emotion in the later period (I don't know how to put it) made me feel like an NPC. Maybe it was the plot of Yan Yanzi's development in the later period that made me feel this way. This book does describe the narrative from a very new angle, but at the end I was still very interested in Yan Yanzi's self-shaping. I wanted to know what Yan Yanzi did during that time, and her understanding of things after shaping her world view. The whole book may only be described a little in Xiao Ge, but for my personal understanding, it made me feel a slight sense of fragmentation. There is also the plot of Zhizhi later. I admit that my favorites in this book are Yan Yanzi and Zhizhi, but I think the pace of Zhizhi's plot is a bit too fast. It makes me feel as if they are together before they have experienced anything.

Chen Yanxi is absolutely rational and gentle, Gu Panyan is selfish and generous, and Li Zhimeng is optimistic and humble. The character creation is very good. I couldn't find any point in the whole novel that made me feel poisonous. This novel is perfect for me. I suggest Dan Dan try writing group portrait novels.

It's been a long time since I've read a love story. It seems I really lack something and want something. Looking back on the past ten years in junior high, high school and college, all the girls I met were very good at playing. I'm really envious.

Finished? Have you collected them all? I ordered the second half as soon as I received all of it.

I finished reading it on Q and it felt good, so what about the new book?

I object to the absence of Chen Yanxi in the last chapter!

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