The Immortal Clan: Starting by Growing the Family

Damn, the more I read, the angrier I get. Leveling up is slow, and there are threats at any time, giving you no time to develop. And the clan system—what kind of clan is it with so many outsiders? Even though it's a clan system, there are too many women, and they're not well-developed. It's obviously a studio-produced novel. Author, don't be so stubborn; I've read several books with the same formula.

Gou Daoliu, at the eighth level of Qi Refining, fought against a mid-Foundation Establishment cultivator and an early-Foundation Establishment cultivator—that's something else. I originally wanted to continue reading, but I just couldn't bear to watch anymore; it was too jarring.

Dude, this kind of work should be a bit easier. Always working with people two levels above you must be exhausting. Let him rest.

Master Shen Fu, Master Chen Dan, Master Chen Qi, ... Anything else?

Why would a mere Qi Refining cultivator dare to negotiate with a Foundation Establishment family? Does the Qin family even respect rules? A Qi Refining cultivator with no backing, seemingly unremarkable in his thirties, yet he's risen to a Level Two Refiner in such a short time—and they don't care about such a huge secret?

The theme should be about having many children and the prosperity of one's family. Why include so many outsiders in the storyline?

I've reached chapter 300 and I'm about to drop it. It's supposed to have a lifespan of several hundred years (and could still be extended), but the writing makes it seem like the story will perish immediately if it doesn't cause trouble. The enemies are just being fed kills one by one. Tsk tsk.

I don't understand why current family-themed novels always have the protagonist marrying alone, without any offspring to work together – what kind of family-themed novel is that?

The author shouldn't use any messy cultivation settings; they won't make it a highlight. Write the world-building framework and cultivation levels exactly as other cultivation novels do—that's more familiar and immersive. The highlight of this novel should be the abundance of children and the development of the family.

The protagonist is too ruthless, too cowardly and afraid of death. He endures everything, even his wife, whose cultivation is higher than his, speaks cautiously. He's too cruel.