Witch Stop

I just subscribed to the previous work, what a sin. This book has a proper flow of prose, just like a primary school student keeping a diary. There will be a conference today and a cave tomorrow. The plot has no fluctuations at all, and the emotions between the protagonist and the heroine are not ups and downs. There is nothing worth watching, except for the occasional pornographic remarks. Having watched it is as if I haven't watched it. Currently I have a little more than 100, and I gave up. My remaining subscriptions were in vain.

Overall feelings about "The Witch" I was still very happy about 50 to 70 years after subscribing. I really couldn't stand it until the part about Du Rang Jin Dan. I couldn't understand why this part was needed. Senior Sister Xu didn't take up the role as expected. Even if it was to highlight the character of the protagonist, it was very unnecessary. Later, it gradually started to open up. The old monsters in the transformation stage started to find ways to stumbling upon them, such as soul-possessed disciples refining elixirs, and the Hundred-faced monster facing off against another boss from a distance. It was because the protagonist was too hung up and couldn't suppress it anymore. He became invincible at the same time and couldn't find anyone to show off to... Later, I started to follow the incense stream... I really don't like the incense stream, and I didn't write any features. It was just "gathering everyone's efforts" without any restrictions or requirements. It was just the function brought by the plug-in upgrade. So why didn't it appear earlier? I don't quite understand it when it comes out at this time, it's as abrupt as the airborne setting. Although I can understand that the author has already written the "foreshadowing" in the early stage, that is, the alchemy stove is very similar to the incense burner - my personal opinion is that it is better to put out the incense burner earlier Then the existence of other characters began to fade, even the heroine Brother Jiang in the early stage and even now has no sense of existence. Apart from the routine meal and "entertainment" in front of the readers, it is not even as good as Linger Cerebellum Ax, who is held in his arms every day (‵□′) The happier I am in the early stage, the emptier it will be later. This is my punishment for emptying my brain. 2333

It's an ordinary short fairy tale, but there are quite a few female characters and daily interactions in dozens of chapters, which is short Xiaorong's style. However, starting from the harem story, we really need to look at Xiao Rong. Judging from the experience of Gongzi Biexiu, Da Zhou Xianli, etc., At least this melon is generally cooked.

The beginning is still the same. Xiao Rong's book has never let me down at the beginning. It always makes me laugh at a certain point and a certain operation, giving people a very relaxed feeling. Come on, I am really looking forward to it.

It turns out Rong Xiaorong is still alive😭

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I feel like the writing is quite average, with no highlights. It seems that historical fictional novels are the author's strength. However, it's good to have new books to read. Please keep updating.

Xiao Rong, let's just write about history honestly. Don't worry about other categories. I was blown away by this book before I even read it. I think your biggest feature is that it's extremely easy to create that sense of relaxation. To be honest, so far I still think The Little Scholar is your only pinnacle work. All the subsequent books are almost boring. Only The Little Scholar I read more than ten times. I picked it up when I ran out of books. It's the only novel in which I can remember the names of most of the characters.

Sometimes, just by looking at a person's bookshelf, you can roughly tell what kind of person he is?

Congratulations to Xiao Rong for opening a new book, come and sign this agreement! 🤭🤭🤭

Is this okay?

Demonic Witch

In fact, if you think about it carefully, do people who like to read your book really care about the plot? For me, it's not that I just like to read a harem novel that has no violence and a light-hearted plot. It's not a lousy street novel that kills the whole family at every turn and destroys you if you mess with me. It's the kind of book where even if the villain is bad, he's still bad and interesting. It's like reading a short book back in the day. The King of Shu when he was a child, and the princes in Ruyi Xiaohuangjun later... What they like is to give a wife at the beginning but gradually develop feelings for it, and then bring a future wife with a bit of a sexual nature. When writing novels, just let it happen. Focusing too much on grades or other people's feelings will only lose the original you. 😳

Keep it first. I don't think there will be any big problems in the early stage, and I don't know if the writing style has improved. I have read all of Duan Xiaorong's books. The writing style of Little Scholar is a little green, but the writing style of Xiao Langjun and Da Zhou is quite mature. But I don't know why my writing skills dropped off a cliff when I got to Gongzi, and I often felt that I was out of touch. The dialogue between characters also seems very awkward. There is also the description of the battle. The previous book was a complete mess. Since I chose to write about immortals, I couldn't avoid the combat aspect. Hope it improves. As a harem novel, the heroine doesn't need to be too much, but at least she has to stand up. In the previous book, many of them had stereotyped heroines, and I couldn't remember the names of the harems in the last one. There is also the issue of divine concealment. The little scholar is pretty good, Ruyi Ruyi is online the whole time. In the later stage, Xiao Langjun basically no longer cares about Su Ru and Zhong Yi, and he basically disappears. After Zhou entered the capital, Liu Hanyan and Liu Shen disappeared. A big heroine basically has no role in the later stage. The young master was even more ruthless, and in the later period the whole harem disappeared. There are also daily plots, I hope the descriptions are specific and thoughtful. Don't be like a running account. In the previous book, a name just appeared, and there was no dialogue or development, so I just skipped it. Isn't the harem novel about the interaction between the male protagonist and the harem? I hope this can have a good story line and not be unfinished. Not many people write about harems anymore, and it is rare that there are still authors who insist on writing about harems. All I can say is come on, keep going. The more you write, the better.

I hope Duan Xiaorong can learn from it.

The whole story is too perfunctory, just to deal with us. There may still be some loyal fans subscribing now, but what will you do with the next book? To be honest, it will be really difficult if the next book is of the same level.

I wonder if the author still reads the comment section? I personally feel that this book is not as good as it should be. When I first watched "The Little Scholar," I was amazed. It had a wonderful plot, a lot of interesting character dialogue and plot development, and it was full of baggage and foreshadowing. Looking at this book now, it's like a running mat. There is not much dialogue between the protagonist and the characters. It is all about large narrations and backgrounds. The protagonist's inner activities are all dependent on the narration. The previous writing style that brought out the characters' personalities from the dialogue seems to have suddenly disappeared? Moreover, the direct love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also vague. There is no daily love, but the female protagonist suddenly falls in love! ? Then after the male lead is taken over, the female lead doesn't have much of a role to play. I can only say that I really can't find the same feeling I had when I watched The Little Scholar or The Young Master. I don't know why Rong Xiaorong stopped writing historical articles, and I don't know why the last few books have turned out like this...

Nowadays, the writing has no spirituality at all. It feels like there is no main line, and the heroine has no character characteristics. Where have the little scholar and the young man gone?

Some suggestions: First, strictly control the number of female protagonists. After flipping through the first books, there are only three or five young scholars and young men. The later books are getting more and more outrageous, and I can hardly count them. Too many will really affect the quality, at least you can't control it now; second, don't write the content of the copy so hastily. In many places, one chapter leaves the sect and the next chapter returns to the sect, which simply describes the process. In fact, some places should be written in detail. Finally, I have never written a book. These are just my personal opinions. How the author adjusts depends on him. If he can't stand it, some people will naturally give up.

Among Rong Xiaorong's books, Xiaoyao Little Scholar is the pinnacle, but the subsequent ones are getting worse with each passing day. I thought that a year of hard work would make people's eyes brighter, but I was still disappointed. Very disappointed

I found a very serious issue. For some heroines (such as Zhou Zixuan), once they are accepted, the author rarely describes her verbally, basically just a little profile description. Those female protagonists who were accepted were given very little writing, and the language description of communication with the protagonist was greatly reduced. After being accepted, the author gave her only descriptions of expressions and movements, as well as descriptions from a third-party perspective of what she was doing. There were no character traits at all, and she was very dull and boring, just like a puppet. There is a big gap between the author's descriptions of the heroines before and after they were taken in. It seems that after being taken in, these heroines have become tool people. They don't have much verbal communication with the protagonist, and their daily interactions with the protagonist have become very stiff. It seems that the author just dealt with them casually to show that these heroines still exist. This is also the case with the author's first two books that hit the market. I hope the author can work hard and improve this situation. (The book I recently read by Mr. Guan Guan is quite good in all aspects of the description of the heroine. I hope the author can learn from it 🙂) In a word, it's just one sentence: strengthen the presence of the heroine in the collection, increase their daily interaction with the protagonist, chat more and talk more 😁

"Stop the Witch" Author; Rong Xiaorong Recommendation index; 5 stars Tags: Fantasy cultivation, fairy tales, multiple heroines Work status; 16 .60,000 Words serialized' Plot synopsis: The protagonist Li Yu died heroically while arresting criminals in his previous life, and traveled to the world of Xianxia. He was a disciple of Baiyu Temple. His original body died due to failure to gather energy, and the protagonist traveled through time. Just when the protagonist is thinking about where he will go in the future at night, the demon girl who once saved him happens to come. Originally, she asked him to act as an undercover demon, so in order to be a better "undercover", the protagonist asked the organization for a few Qi Gathering Pills as funds to better serve the organization. From then on, the protagonist begins the story of obtaining resources on the evil path and climbing up on the righteous path. Recommendation: The author is Xiao Rong, everyone must be familiar with it. One of the heroes of fairy tale harem novels, the heroine is determined and unwavering. However, the problem is that the heroine who spent a lot of pen and ink in the early stage does not have much role in the later stage. She cannot keep up with the pace of the protagonist and disappears directly. I hope that this book Xiao Rong can break through herself and challenge the limit. Recommendation: A fairy tale harem novel that is worth reading.

It feels like I'm reading a novel from ten years ago, so cliche.

Xiaorong, I am a reader who has been chasing after a scholar since I was a child. Why is the writing less and less attractive? Don't be like a certain boy who engages in contests every day. His head hurts when he sees the title. This is the third contest in this book. Please enrich the content. The plot is really too bland.

New book for April? I just hope it won't suck anymore... By the way, let me tell you a problem that I personally think about. Duan Xiaorong's early books have one thing in common, which is that they use a large number of words to portray the heroine, ranging from a few hundred chapters to an entire book (such as Liu Ruyi) But in the current books, especially this one, I feel that Duan Xiaorong has no patience to portray the heroine. After just a few dozen chapters, she ends it and continues with the next one, which leaves no impression at all. I hope the new book will spend more time on writing to portray the heroine.

Now the author, I don't know why, always likes to write some depressive novels, and also likes literature. "The Son-in-Law" is obviously a hypnotic novel, but they are touting it as a magical book! The top family Ding Mingming looks very happy, what a noob! For example, the author Ruyi Xiaolangjun and Xiaoyao Little Scholar obviously have a market, but no one writes! He insists on writing some literary and artistic style, and the writing is depressing, suppressing the protagonist for hundreds of chapters, and the blood pressure rises when reading it! Why can't the novel be more relaxed? Looks better?

It's Yang, but it's not completely healed yet, and there are no more saved manuscripts.

There are temporary changes, and the book is expected to be released at the end of April or early May 😡😡

It's better to write historical fiction honestly. If you don't accept some things, don't always give people the feeling of selling out.

After reading part of it, let me talk about my thoughts: Always emphasize that the male protagonist is very, very handsome, justifying the multiple female protagonists, and also to cater to female readers. However, in this way, male readers will not have a sense of substitution. After all, there are many male readers who can compare with Pan An in appearance. This novel is not very Being handsome is the original sin, and you are not worthy of having a woman. It is the same as the current mainstream XXN thinking. It does not look at character and ability, but only looks at whether you are handsome or not. However, this is a novel. If you look closely, this novel can only be understood by very handsome male readers. If you are not very handsome, you are not worthy of reading the novel. In addition, upgrading in this novel depends entirely on taking medicine. With enough medicine, it feels like you can complete the foundation building in one day and complete the golden elixir the next day. It is said that it requires talent, but it is actually a lie. It can be seen from many chapters that you can level up quickly without any talent or understanding, and without any hard work, as long as you have medicine.