Witch, Don't Mess Around

Have you forgotten what you said?🤤

From the beginning, it was hinted that the male protagonist's parents are not simple, but the setting for the male protagonist is so useless. You can guess that there will be an opportunity later or his parents' inheritance will allow him to practice cultivation again. In the end, there will be a sister, a witch and a bunch of beauties to have a family fun. This template is so cliche.

After reading dozens of chapters, the old bookworm tried the poison online, and the IQ of all the supporting characters fell off the line. The younger brother spread rumors about his boss and the protagonist's date without thinking, and the second poison was about relatives. The second aunt gave the protagonist's mother's relics to the woman he met on the first day for no reason. The third poisonous point is that the heroine's IQ and EQ are not well described, she has no IQ at all, her characterization is not good and the emotional drama of the protagonist is too cliche. Inexplicable panic, inexplicable blushing, and inexplicable heartbeat. Is the heroine so easily tempted? The emotional drama is poorly written, as is the description of the battle between life and death. It feels like it's the product of the literary shortage of Dabai Wenshuang. Old perverts can read it but old bookworms can't stand it.

This is my first time writing fantasy. The background is based on fictional history, and fantasy elements have been added, mainly for the diversity of the heroine 🙂🙂. The background world view is still within the scope of low fantasy. In theory, it is still a story about daily Shura fields. The new book has just started. Please give me a monthly vote for reading and commenting. I would like to thank you or2-1

The synopsis looks familiar, the Crown Princess is replaced by the Queen, and the protagonist's name looks familiar once the name is changed. The formulaic article is already formulaic, right down to the introduction.

Why now novel. The whole story is either all about women, or it's all about practicing, or it's all about fighting, can it be interspersed? Don't you want the whole table to be filled with one dish?

I am speechless even when I read novels on female channels on male channels.

I suddenly lost motivation after reading Chapter 24. It felt like all the members had lost their wits because of the coincidence. So I can find the coincidental plots in martial arts novels. I will first find the most similar one for you (the first thing that comes to mind is Lao Huang's Double Dragon). The fox clan saint was replaced by the demon sect demon girl and the Celestial Master. The palace saint is replaced by a righteous saint, the protagonist is suspected to be the son of the first person in the righteous path of evil, the golden finger becomes a special cultivation method, at the beginning of the plot, a certain force kills an important person, and then the protagonist investigates the case, and this force involves the court (you can use the skin of an ancient dragon), and then the villain demon The girl happened to appear, and the real saint discovered it and started fighting. One side happened to be injured, and the protagonist happened to follow. The assisting one chased the person, leaving the protagonist alone. Then Xiangyan healed her wounds, and then the other one was injured later and the protagonist happened to run into it. Two After the end, there is the plot of the widow, which is indispensable for peeking in the bath, and then the plot of the suspected little princess and the little princess (Jin Yong's novels have many such plots). Liang Yusheng and Wen Ruian didn't think of it at the moment, and I guess they can match it. To sum up, the quality is acceptable, and it is a meal replacement in the book shortage.

This novel is based on a template. It basically has no evil points and can be read as a refreshing novel. However, the main character's strength is currently stuck and cannot be improved. There are several heroines in the beginning, but none of them are very likable. All in all, they are not exciting enough.

It can only be said that it is all water, and it is a pity to throw it away if it is tasteless. Reading it every day feels okay, but if I leave it for a while, it doesn't seem to matter. If it disappears one day, I might not notice it.

In the sequel to "Under the World", in the introduction, is that witch the heroine? Why did she marry the prince? Can Shen Nong tell me about the plot? I don't dare to watch it for fear of getting stoned.

I always feel that this kind of novel should give the male protagonist a small highlight at the beginning to attract readers more. After reading the first two chapters, it roughly implies that the male protagonist has a background, but he is very good, and it is a classic starting point where the female is strong and the male is weak. I also read the book reviews and saw two or three people complaining about the male protagonist being useless except for being handsome. After reading the first two or three chapters and reading these reviews, I no longer have the desire to read any more.

It's useless material again. It can't be cultivated. I don't know why I like to write trash material now.

People die as ghosts, ghosts die as ghosts, ghosts die as hope, hopes die as barbarians, nothingness dies, nothingness gives birth to Tao, Tao gives birth to one, one life gives birth to two, two gives birth to three, three gives birth to all things, all things give birth to Tai Chi, Tai Chi gives birth to two aunts, two aunts give birth to fourth uncle, four uncles give birth to eight cubs, eight cubs need milk, drink this milk, forget that cub, forget the cub milk

The quality is not even the slightest bit worse than the previous one.

I feel like the story is about to collapse at the moment. The protagonist can't practice normally. The only one who can help him doesn't want to help. There is no other way. He can't get along with the other heroines. The heroine is not strong enough to win at all. There are several key appearances.

In order to promote the plot, I did not hesitate to let the male protagonist suffer, or suffer the core strength improvement, and still put it in the beginning of the plot.

The author should open a book club, otherwise it would not be a problem for Uncle Liu Huang to be censored as soon as he came out for a walk 🙂

The protagonist has a father who defected from a sect, a childhood sweetheart who was taken in by a large sect, and a boss who came from a large sect, probably from the sect where his father defected. The protagonist even took off Qingmei's pants. Although the protagonist lives in a small place, his background is extraordinary. Later, Qingmei comes to pick off his pants, and the boss later learns that the protagonist is the son of a defected uncle, and then a love-hate entanglement begins around this. The married woman didn't seem to come out. Summary, the protagonist of a wealthy family, surrounding the love and hatred of three women

This is the wrong place. The car should be heading towards the female channel.

The bad news is that the setting is borrowed from it, the good news is that everything is borrowed from it, and it's all tied together. The male protagonist combines the setting backgrounds of the three protagonists Dou Po, Douluo, and Zhe Tian. In other words, he is stuck in the third stage of Dou Qi for a long time, and then he wants to go further. He needs to use a massive amount of spiritual energy to open the sea of consciousness like Ye Hei. Finally, the male protagonist has his cheap parents. It is Tang Hao's template, and the most classic plot. When the male protagonist's father was young, he was being hunted while holding the infant male protagonist, and then it was suspected that the male protagonist's sea of consciousness was sealed. In other words, the male protagonist will encounter the classic enemies of his father's generation later, which is like sewing up all the three fantasy gods of the year. However, there is better news. This is a harem story, and the driving speed is acceptable. It's good to put aside your brain and follow the author's ideas.

Others either have open harems openly, or they don't have a heroine who can focus on cultivation. It's still hard for you, the above-board scumbag in this book, to stand up

Brother, your book is pretty good when put together, but it's really a bit 💦 to read in a hurry. . .

Stop pulling the strings and push the plot forward.

I feel like the author is too young. Many people don't understand the world. Reading the novel is like watching an old Hong Kong movie. The characters are all too facial-looking.

I suspect it is AI-assisted, but I have no evidence

So fast and limited to free🙂

If the eunuch can't get out of this village with 1.5 Million words, he may write the finale

Traditional cultivation of immortality, healthy and green, multiple female protagonists in the harem, and clear emotional lines. It is a bit rushed and slow to warm up in the early stage, but it will also add some old-fashioned fun. The book will be better if you read it carefully. Emotional stories with multiple heroines are also different. There are sadistic, sweet, and strong heroines. Various styles will be played in turn.

I have a question. Qingmei has never appeared in the show, so why is she ranked second in likes?