Farewell, Young Master

I read it all night and all day, reading more than one million words. I am very pleasantly surprised about this book. I am pleasantly surprised that Xiaorong, an author whom I have been reading since a few years ago, has made great progress in this book. In my opinion, it is even comparable to the platinum author in some aspects, at least it is better in terms of the joy it brings me. However, after reading these more than one million words, I also have some thoughts of my own, and I intuitively feel some of the turning points and changes in this book. Many readers said that starting from somewhere, the pace got a little faster. Some people say it starts with pasting, others say it starts with deletion. I think it started after the five major countries changed from the background to the forces that influence the direction of the plot, just like the trip to Shen in the previous book. This kind of plot makes me feel a little inconsistent and out of place. At first with Xianli, I wasn't sure if I had these feelings, but by this book, I had a clear idea. In the world of fantasy and fictional history, foreigners actually appeared, and the division of power was the same as that of contemporary times. Surprisingly... To sum up, for me, this is a perfect example of a beautiful white jade with slight flaws, but perhaps for more people, this type of plot can also be a booster of the plot. This is the opinion I want to share. Next, I hope that Xiaorong will not be influenced by the outside world and can continue to bring joy to everyone according to his own ideas.

I like to sit on the grass of the Yishu Academy and watch the pairs of students coming and going. Of course, it's not for the woman with a happy smile, but because I'm a little envious of them from the bottom of my heart. Of course, as time goes by, I will also be able to tell who really loves whom and who is fake. The Royal Capital has always been a vanity fair where you and I come and go, where hundreds of lords often compete. The Foreign Art Academy is the epitome of the Royal Capital, because only the children of powerful families who have awakened to foreign arts have the opportunity to come here to practice, and I. . . I was born in the largest house in the royal capital. My father was a very powerful man and married many wives. My mother was just one of them, and not the most important one. Therefore, my family has an eldest son who will inherit the family business in the future. I have been raised in this big house since I was a child, and I am used to seeing all kinds of battles, life and death, so all kinds of bloody scenes in the folklore happen around me all the time. Speaking of which, I was once innocent. Who hasn't had a childhood? My mother, who is rational and calm, has taught me since I was a child not to reach out for things that are not my own. I have also been very peaceful since I was a child and never caused trouble for my mother. The pond and flowerbed in my garden were my childhood until I met her. Her name is Mint, but she wasn't originally called Mint. Why? Because she awakened the magic of ice. She always used her magic to cool me down in summer, so I changed her name to Mint. As for what her original name was, I didn't even ask. Now that I think about it, I feel a little regretful. It was a distant summer. Because I was afraid of the heat, the ice cubes at home were not enough. And I was afraid of the heat. I was sweating profusely every time and my whole body ached. My mother felt sorry for me, so she begged my father to find a way. After thinking about it for a long time, my father found mint. My father said to me: "If she stays with you from now on, you will not be afraid of the heat." My father left without saying much because he was busy with government affairs. Having said that, yes, my father is the Emperor of Xia, the supreme man of Great Xia, and my mother is Concubine Shu, the most sensible and calm woman in the harem, and I, a laid-back prince. From that day on, Mint was called Mint, and she spent the happiest time in my life with me in the Imperial Garden. We talked about everything and played together. Sometimes, we even took a bath together. Although this was against the rules, we always played in the water together while she was waiting for me to take a bath. We once said that when I grow up, open a mansion and have a fiefdom, I will take her out and travel with her throughout the Great Xia. We also said that when we grow up in the future, we will grow old together and I will marry her to be my princess. Mint just smiled and agreed with me. She was docile and gentle. As she gets older, it's not too old, it's only been a year or two. After all, except during the hot summer, Mint has never used her abilities, and is basically no different from an ordinary maid, and she doesn't practice. I asked her why, and she said that a girl from the Zhao family appeared in the imperial capital, with outstanding talent, so it would be great to have her as a wizard. She just wants to simply be by my side. I didn't say anything after listening, because it didn't matter. After all, as long as I didn't mess around, I would definitely have prosperity, wealth and stability. However, all this began to change after that day. I remember that it was the day when my father summoned all the princes to test their homework. I got up late and hurriedly ran from Qianqiu Palace to the Imperial Study Room. My stomach was growling, but I finally made it in time for the test. My father has already passed the examination for the crown prince brother. Because he is a prince, he is also very strict. When we are ordinary princes, it becomes much easier. We just go through the formalities in a hurry and it is over. I ran back in a hurry, not for anything else but because I was hungry. But as soon as I walked to the door, Mint happily came over with a food box and smiled at me: "I ran quickly in the morning and didn't eat breakfast, so I went to the kitchen to cook something simple for His Highness. I kept it warm in the food box, fearing that His Highness would be hungry." I smiled happily and greeted all the brothers with the food box. Of course, my father and the prince's brother had priority. My father was also very happy looking at Mint. He took a piece of snack and left because he was busy with government affairs. When I arrived at the Prince's brother, I saw that he was still very nervous, his face was a little pale, and he was sweating profusely. I thought that my father still had very high academic requirements for him, so I didn't pay too much attention to him. I picked his favorite food and comforted him: "Brother Prince, you are the hope of the future of our country. My father's expectations for you. It's very big, so it is necessary to be strict. The prince brother is already very powerful and can pass the test of the father." The prince brother did not look at me, but looked at Mint weakly, "Is this your palace man?" Mint felt very strange and asked me if His Highness the Crown Prince didn't like her. I said no. The Crown Prince's brother's studies are very arduous, so he might have to return to the East Palace to continue studying after passing the exam here. The days passed by, but I was still careless, climbing rockeries with Mint, going down to Yuhu Lake, climbing Yuyu trees, and digging out bird eggs. Time passed very quickly. I was twelve years old that year. At the age when I left the palace and opened a mansion, my father happily found a mansion in the outer city of the palace. I took Mint and my original team of servants and moved into the imperial palace. That day, I opened my house. And I began to fulfill the promise I made to Mint and took her around the capital until. . . We were assassinated, and this incident caused a big fuss. The crime of assassinating the current prince was not a small one, and many people were implicated, but I also lost Mint forever. I regret very much, because it was my playfulness that led to Mint's death. I was confused for a long time and could not get rid of my sad state. During this period, my father and mother came to see me, and the prince brother also brought all his brothers to see me. But I just lay on the grass of the mansion and looked at the sky, silently sad and remorseful. Late one night, someone suddenly sneaked into my room and said something to me. My outlook on life changed. I was surprised, angry, and filled with hatred. At this time, the sky in the royal capital seemed to echo my emotions. I screamed sadly in my own yard like I had gone crazy, pointing my finger at the sky and saying nothing. Then, a thunder and lightning struck from the sky. My anger seemed to have found an outlet. Every cell in my body was trembling. At this point, I awakened my superpower, thunder. In the days to come, when silence returned, I was still the cynical prince, idle every day. In the words of my father and mother, idleness is better than fighting, and better than a ball of rotten meat. So I followed my life step by step. After awakening my powers, I went to the Magic Academy. When the age for marriage came, I was arranged to marry the daughter of a powerful person. Although I didn't love her, I could still treat her as a guest. Only every time there was thunder, the biting thunder reminded me that I still had a revenge hidden deep in my heart that I had not avenged.

After reading over 300 chapters, I just can't stand it anymore. Although it can be seen in the early stage that the author's writing skills are somewhat weak, and some content settings are too rigid and unreasonable, at least the setting of the entire story is innovative and can be read. In the middle period, I can only say that I ran out of books to read, so I could barely keep reading. The section that prohibits the killing of exotic beasts and the prohibition of taking alien beast crystals really disgusts me and I can't stand it anymore. I can no longer describe the author as a pure virgin bitch. I can only say that the author's EQ, IQ, knowledge, and knowledge are extremely shallow. Farewell

，，，，，， Secondly, it is impossible for all powerful aristocratic families to want to join the royal family. There are no nobles close to the royal family. According to the current author's logic, the emperor also had a maternal clan when he was the prince. Why is it not reflected at all? If some nobles support an emperor, and then the nobles want to rebel, why should they support the emperor? Isn't the emperor stupid and waiting to be overthrown by his mother clan? Therefore, there are either powerful nobles who are close to the royal family, or members of the royal family, especially the prince, are not close to foreigners. Otherwise, if the prince supported by the Zhang family or the Song family comes to power, then they will be killed to rebel? Or is it about being close to the new emperor? Doesn't the current emperor have a maternal family? If you ask me, it is impossible for the royal family to let a child of aristocratic family become the queen. They can find some talented amateurs. Such a big country can always find them.

I feel a little disgusted when I read Chapter 109. The previous chapter was pretty good. Why did you end up with such a plot here? It's not that I can't accept the death of an NPC, it's just that it feels too meaningless. It would be acceptable if this NPC became the victim of the game between the protagonist and the villain. For example, it would be okay if he overheard the villain's conspiracy against the protagonist and was silenced, but in the end left evidence to help the protagonist. It's a bit vulgar, but it's better than losing some value and making it easier for people to accept. I feel that this plot is like the author Wen Qing being sick and forced to write a series of "the word "cannibalism" is written all over the book. I personally feel it is a bit poisonous. Also, after reading Chapter 109 so far, I feel that the writing is good, but it just doesn't feel like a fantasy novel.

One thing to say is that the fighting plot is too bland, but the trivial things in life are written in a very interesting way. I originally waited for the competition with full expectations, but I didn't expect it to be so hasty. When I see this, I just want to say one thing: Xiaorong, listen to me, everything on the Internet is virtual, the water is very deep here, you can't grasp it! Ahem, I was just joking😂, here are some suggestions. Special effects can give people a perfect visual experience when watching movies, making the program more contagious, expressive and shocking. I think the same is true for writing novels. Good fighting scenes are created, vivid images, and fully presented on paper, making readers feel as if they are immersed in the scene, and their blood is boiling. As Director Ang Lee commented in the documentary "Breaking with Bergman" (2013): I don't understand, but I was shocked! Of course, I don't mean to be disparaging when I say this, it's just a remark. From Xiaoyao Little Scholar, Ruyi Little Man, Dazhou Immortal Official, to Young Master Farewell Show, I have read every book several times, and I am considered a long-time book fan. With an attitude of striving for excellence, I hope that the author will continue to work hard, face up to his own shortcomings, and make more corrections. I am looking forward to the day when the coexistence of superpowers is exposed. I also hope that the author's book will become more and more popular and will soon reach the top of Nov. My speech is over, thank you!

Look at others, then look at yourself! I started following chapter 56, and now there are more than 150 chapters! I don't dare to watch it after it's free!

It feels like everything Xiuer does now is smooth sailing, which makes the novel as a whole relatively bland.

It started to feel a bit overwhelming starting from about 300 chapters. It was true that the more I read, the more uncomfortable it became. But I felt bad if I didn't read it after I ordered it. Then I couldn't stand it until I finished playing the Flame Bone Tribe on the Moon, so I just posted the synopsis.

Lin Xiu's abilities can be broken down into: "Identification - Copy - Storage - Application". Identification and copying should be possible for an unlimited number of times, and the possibility of being unable to be identified and copied is not ruled out; (for example, because the strength difference between the two parties is too large, the other party's ability cannot be identified, or the other party's ability is unique) The number of abilities that can be stored should be upper limit. It is not yet known whether this upper limit is a fixed value or can change with strength; (From a rational point of view, it should be increaseable, but I personally prefer to set the value at 8. Of course, if there is no upper limit, I will not say anything) The power of the protagonist's application ability is related to its own strength. It does not rule out the possibility that some abilities can be identified, copied, and stored but cannot be applied (such as the power of "if you are pregnant, you will have a child" 😏)

If Zhao Lingjun is not lovable now, then he won't be lovable. It's a bit awkward to accept him. He accepts it just for the sake of accepting it, but it won't work if he doesn't accept it.

I really look forward to Duan Xiaorong being updated every day, and more updates every day! But the author is also a human being and has human life! During this Chinese New Year, who doesn't have social gatherings that can't be avoided and reunions that should be enjoyed? ! Everyone should follow the instructions, but also understand and care for the author. I wish Xiaorong a happy new year!

If you want to see a villain, watch Huang Shiren in "The White-Haired Girl". It is said that during the performance of this play, the angry crowd threw stones directly at the actors. Everyone feels it is very real. It can be written about Zhang San, robbing Caiyi in the theater. Everyone is not angry about how bad Zhang San is, but they see how low the villain's IQ is. Caiyi can pull the tiger skin of the imperial concubine, and the tiger skin of Lin Xiu, but the result is not, giving people the feeling of a vase. Lin Xiu is a top genius, and Zhang San's father always tells him to stay away from him, but he just wants to be unafraid of power. This plot is not about the dandy kid robbing the daughter of the people, but the dandy kid defying power, offending the future supreme power, and then bringing disaster to the family three years later. Everyone knows that Lin Xiu is not easy to mess with. His wife is a top powerhouse in the future. She is protected by the emperor and is on good terms with the Xue family. These are top backgrounds. He is also a top martial arts genius. He has not been seen in hundreds of years and can be called a heaven-level genius. He needs a good background and top talent, and he can be called the top second generation. Even the prince was trembling with anger and helpless when he saw it. But Zhang San's level-level background is not as great as Lin Xiu's, and his level-level genius is not as good as Lin Xiu's. But I, Zhang San, just want to show off and slap Lin Xiu in the face. I, Zhang San, am super brave and not afraid of power. That's right. Playboys bully the weak and fear the strong. Before dealing with someone, they have to investigate a little or two. If they don't have the background, they will be punished to death. If there is a background, just retract it. But I, Zhang Sanchaoyong, am an exception

I hope this tribute doesn't survive the next chapter

It's a bit short, but because it's so good-looking, I just whetted my appetite and was addicted to the story, but it stopped abruptly. As I was helplessly recalling it, I didn't feel resentful, and it felt even more short!

Duan Xiaorong has been doing well these days. I will give you a few monthly votes to encourage you.

The Young Master's Farewell Show The Young Master's Farewell Show is the first book by Rong Da that I read. The writing style of Rong Da Fu Ben is excellent, and the story is compact and well-written. It is worth reading. The protagonist Xiu'er, a hidden loser, wakes up to cheating. Abilities are Contact>Copy>Application. As long as you have enough contact time, you can use them all, but proficiency and level need to be practiced by yourself. Then there are various IQ applications. After reading the current paragraph, I can sum up two points: awakening and using doctrine; all kinds of flirting with flowers. The hidden worry about this book is that there are endless cheats and copying, and copying will be boring; Moreover, dry soaking for girls is boring, and too much dry soaking will make people tired of looking at it. The overall feeling is that there is no center point and no soul. For example, what are the reasons for all kinds of provocations? There is no ideological support, and it is a bit empty at the moment. Let's take another look, Rongda should be able to solve it. (Tail picture seven-point activity)

Zhao Lingjun... Alas, a thousand words can only be turned into a sigh.

Reading is an interesting thing, and so is reading novels. Although the words are less than a thousand words, they are full of philosophy and carry all the author's thoughts and wisdom. Reading is endlessly memorable and full of emotions Here is the broad-mindedness of the clouds in the chest, and the openness of the rain. There are long sighs to cover up the tears, and there are also the true feelings that linger in my heart Every line and every paragraph touches me deeply. Just a beam of light in the darkness leads me out of the darkness and rekindles the hope of life. I seem to have begun to lose control of my hands. I want to show off my skills, use pen and ink, and wield the sword as wildly as I want. However, since my hands are often not very coordinated with my brain, I have to give up. Although I can't write, but this does not affect my admiration for you, the author. To put it in a cliché, it is like the surging river, endless, and like the Yellow River flooding out of control. The river is exhausted, thunder in winter, rain and snow in summer, heaven and earth merge, stones are like jade, and pines are like green. Lang Yan is unique and unique in the world. Well... There is so much water, it should be enough, experience +3. Farewell! ​

Is it difficult for the author's protagonist to build a generator? Whether it's animal power or water power, it's not too difficult, right?

I feel like this book is 80% written and may be finished at any time.

In recent plots, I tend to write whatever I think of, and there is a little bit of foreshadowing.

Although it is a little short, it is still a good and refreshing article. It was very enjoyable to watch.

Why is it over? . . .

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Power Source Character Event First Awakening Strength, Sun Dali, shook hands with the guard Bing, Zhao Lingyin, was knocked unconscious by Zhao Lingyin and carried on his back and sent home Beast Control, Chen Yu (Haitang), talked about life and took the opportunity to shake hands Space, Wang Wei (son of the third-class lord), knocked out and carried on his back to the hospital Second Awakening Lei , Li Baizhang, drunk and carried on the back to the inn Cure, Bai Shuangshuang, therapeutic contact Disguise, pretty face, knocked out and carried on the back to the hospital Sight, Liu Qingfeng, drunk and carried on the back The third awakening Flying, Xue Ning'er, the hero saves the beauty, the beauty takes Xiu'er to fly Fire , Princess Minghe, testing the ice and fire practice hand in hand Golden body, spying on the beggar, Xiuer is carried by the injured beggar Invisibility, Chen Ke, spending an exciting night in the mountains and old forests The fourth awakening Voice, Caiyi, Momoda Tu, Huangfu guard, cross-dressing boss kidnapped Psychic power, Zhao Lingjun, playing hand in hand Husbands singing and women following (same series expansion) Illusion, Qin Wan, the hug of love Speed, Jin Can, hooking up and chatting Jin, Sun Wei, following hypnosis and holding hands (same series expansion) Space, Chiba Rin, ventriloquism saving beauty (same series expansion) The fifth awakening (original alien magic evolution, giving and deprivation) Wind , Murong Yu, martial arts training Wood , Song Yulang, pat on the shoulder Water , Prince, toast Delete, Emily, invite to dance (use it for others to eliminate for a period of time, use it for yourself to wash some points) Light , Second Prince, shake hands Dark , the eldest prince, handshake Zoom, Andre, handshake Setting down, winning someone big, handshake The Sixth Awakening Silence, Sophia, the little girl in the bathtub Mind reading, Concubine Shu, Concubine Shu's thank you gift

Short Wing just wants to stay away from the Internet, be alone, and don't think too much.

The snow started to fall again. Cai Yi leaned against the window and looked at the busy traffic downstairs quietly. Today is December 7, the ninth year of Xueming. This is a special day. Nine years ago today, Xue Ning'er died. Nine years ago today, the Great Xia Dragon Chair changed hands. Nine years ago today. Lihuayuan became the number one in the capital. "Nine years." Cai Yi sighed: "Unknowingly, we have been married for nine years." Lin Xiucheng walked out from behind her and hugged her slender waist, "Isn't it good to be my wife?" Cai Yi earned She opened his hands and walked to the dressing table, "It will be our last performance, please prepare." "No matter what time it is, I am the most handsome." Lin Xiu had already told Caiyi about his ability to copy. In the past nine years, he has performed on stage with thousands of faces, earning the reputation of the "Thousand-Faced Actor" in the capital. "Ake just told me that Zhao Lingyin agreed." Cai Yi put on rouge. Behind her, Lin Xiu's body was stiff for a long time. "Sometimes I really feel that if Zhao Lingjun had not gone to the Da Luo Dynasty and Xue Ning'er had not left the city, would you still have married me?" Cai Yi pursed her lips and tears secretly slipped down. "It's all over." Lin Xiu's voice was a little hoarse. "The Zhao family rebelled, assassinated Emperor Xia, supported the crown prince, married two daughters, and dominated the government. Even the man on the dragon throne could not do anything to him." Cai Yi wiped away her tears, stood up and put on her costume, "But he offered a reward of ten thousand gold just for your head." "Countless people in the world want to know what Emperor Xia said to you that night, Qin Where did Wang and Concubine Shu escape? It's a pity that they racked their brains and couldn't figure out that the most popular actor in the capital is you." "After tonight, we don't have to hide..." Caiyi looked back and smiled, "It's you, not me." "I... You..." "Up. Come on, don't let that noble man wait too long. " Lin Xiu collapsed to the ground weakly... You played the pipa and played the strings while I sat in front of the actor's balcony How can I convey love words to my heart? White hair has been listening to the end of the play for a hundred years The breeze is floating, the face is like a flower, and the smiles are sweet How Let the beauty in the painting stop in the paper That day I left Beijing and drove away without seeing you looking back Looking at you waving your jade hands I rode in the carriage and drank all the sad wine I missed you and dared not look back ... This song "Painting Li Xian" is from Lihuayuan and is also Lin Xiu's famous work. That day, when he sang this song to her affectionately with a face worth tens of thousands of gold, even the head of the Zhao family applauded him and immediately rewarded him with a thousand taels of gold as a gift. From then on, he came here every month to cheer for him. Today is no exception. But, tonight, he can't get out of here. What a pity this Lihua Garden. Cai Yi thought, looking up at the affectionate young man, inexplicably thinking of the night he proposed to marry him. At that time, he was also so affectionate. It's a pity that it was just a step for him to help the dragon. "Perhaps, Lihuayuan and I are just a stepping stone for him to soar up. Perhaps, he has always loved only Zhao Lingyin, the mother of the world!" Cai Yi's heart was broken... Unknowingly, "Hua Li Xian" had finished singing. In the audience, the wealthy head of the Zhao family had already thrown out a gold ingot. Everyone is immersed in the world of music. No one noticed that the door of Lihuayuan had been quietly closed. This is the power of sound, and it is the only thing Caiyi can help him with. "Death to the old thief!" Lin Xiu cut off the head of the Zhao family's head with one sword, and countless warriors rushed out behind him to surround all the spectators. "Kill!" With one order, countless innocent lives disappeared. "Are all your counselors so cruel?" Cai Yi asked tremblingly as he watched each living life disappear before his eyes. "I am weak and if I don't be cruel to others, others will be cruel to me." Lin Xiu turned around and grinned. The killing in the audience has stopped, Lin Xiu leads the team to the imperial city. There, Zhao Lingyin and the people from the Tiandao Alliance have taken care of everything. "Lin Xiu!" Things went counterproductive, the matter has not been resolved yet - Zhao Lingyin was raped by the prince - No! It was the new emperor Li Baisong who held him hostage. "Lin Xiu, you take care of it." King Qin patted him on the shoulder, turned and left. "It's just me..." Zhao Lingyin cried desperately. She was placed on the edge of the city wall, only one step away from death without her body intact. Lin Xiu was silent. "Take me hostage." Caiyi took a step forward, "She is just a passerby, I am Lin Xiu's wife." Li Baisong agreed, and Zhao Ling was helped down. "Lin Xiu, I wish you happiness." With her meager strength, she brought Li Bosong, who was on the verge of despair, down the city wall. Ten deaths and no life. Lin Xiu lay on the city wall and shouted at the top of her lungs: "Caiyi! The only one I love is you!"

Thousands of people wrote in blood, begging for the imperial concubine to be included as the heroine

Harem story, a comparison of water, throw it in the trash can