Immortal Officials of the Great Zhou Dynasty

Text: According to the current plot advancement, the known information that can be speculated is that Li Qing and Zhou Shilang know each other. Zhou Shilang was the first place in the previous trial of Fuzhuan Sect and the man who sent Li Qing to get started, because only in this way can we explain why Li Mu appeared in Zhou Zhong's place without knowing him. The Talisman seal script is not lower than the Heaven level. In addition, when he killed the Baiyu County magistrate, the magistrate's soul was killed by the purple thunder. This can only be the purple sky divine thunder of Li Mu's religion. In addition, Li Qing's previous behavior of quitting the Talisman seal sect and the plot when he separated from Li Mu, there is no doubt that Li Qing was the one who killed the magistrate. Zhou Zhong played a role in delaying the case. Previously, the magistrate of Anyi County in Danyang County died of an assassination, but the case file was submitted to the Ministry of Punishment, but nothing happened. According to the normal process, the submitted documents were handed over to the Zhongshu Province, which was sent to the Shangshu Province, and the Shangshu Province sent them to the Ministry of Punishment. The Ministry of Punishment reported back at one level, which wasted time. By then, there were no clues and no clues could be found about Li Qing. As for Li Qing's journey of seeking revenge, according to the general routine, it must be related to Li Qing's father, because the people who were assassinated were all officials in the Ministry of Civil Affairs at the same time, and were promoted almost at the same time. It is estimated that Li Qing's father was involved in party disputes at the time, and was on the wrong team, or offended What kind of big shot was he? His confidant at the time was bribed by a political opponent with a huge profit, and then was stabbed in the back. The political opponent took advantage of the organization to frame the crime, which led to the death of the Li family. Only Li Qing survived because of Zhou Zhong's secret help. Now Li Qing feels that the time is ripe and is ready to kill those who participated in the incident. The climax of this third volume of Light in the City of Gods is likely to be Li Qing's case, unfolding the secrets of Li Qing, using Li Qing's case as the main thread of this volume, so that Li Mu's reputation will rise to the next level, and then he will successfully attack Li Qing, perfect the story of this character, and make this character more full-bodied, so that he will not become a forgettable character.

I gave up after seeing the later stage There were too many meaningless emotional scenes that dragged down the whole book. After the climax of the plot of "Establishing a heart for heaven and earth, establishing a life for the people, and creating peace for all generations", the entire level suddenly dropped sharply. The more I watched later, the more I felt that the character portrayal became hollow. Many times it felt like driving just for the sake of driving.       ，，，，，， But later on, I felt that the roller coaster reached its peak and then continued to decline. There were all kinds of coincidences and all kinds of abrupt driving. After the part in Baidi's Cave where I wanted to write about the Shura field but mishandled it, but it disgusted the readers, I felt that the author was a bit broken in the emotional scenes. Later, the two snake sisters came to the capital of God for no reason, and the White Demon King once again said "that year" I have a hard time chasing my wife, and I can't let my daughter suffer emotionally." I severed my relationship with Brother Li Mu on the grounds that during this period, I personally felt that the little green snake gave me the impression that I was not someone who dared to love or hate, but rather a slut. The White Demon King's personal image also collapsed, and the Queen also simply became a love-minded rich woman who was "jealous and missed him in a daze". I was really disappointed to see this.

The fox repays his kindness and pledges himself to him? The rich woman next door throws herself into her arms? The Empress' Favor, Cholera Chao Gang? The amiable old man next to me is actually a murderous old devil? The prince-in-law, who is praised by the world, has risen to prominence by repeatedly killing his wife and exterminating his family? In the bizarre world of Da Zhou, is this a distortion of human nature or a loss of morality? Let's see how Li Mu walks on thin ice in this dangerous situation, uncovers the shocking fog, suppresses the dandy, quells the chaos in the court, and sets off the wave of his new era! All of this is contained in the book Immortal Officials of the Great Zhou Dynasty!

​​                                                                                                                                           Traditional immortals and heroes are all golden elixirs and souls, which can be leveled up to fight monsters. Every character is vivid and deeply rooted in people's hearts. The way of chivalry. Don't do good deeds because they are small, and don't do evil deeds because they are small. Martial arts is gradually developing from a narrow sense to a broad sense, and the same is true for Xianxia. If it is too limited, it will hinder its development. Immortality is not only about cultivating immortals, but also cultivating skills, virtues, Taoism, etc. These are integrated into the practice system, and the thoughts of hundreds of schools of thought are integrated into the system to achieve true diversification.                                                                                                                                                                                                               ourselves all to be celestial beings but also       chivalrous people.

This is my first time to write a long review for a novel. I have read more than half of it. Let me tell you my feelings. The early stage of this book is really good. Whether it is the characterization or the storyline, it is a top choice. It makes people want to put it down. However, after arriving in the city of gods, it feels a little different. The name is Dazhou Xianli, but it writes too much about the partisanship in the court. The characters in the early stage are getting more and more weird. Liu Hanyan is always thinking about the protagonist when he lives with him in Beijun. He cooks for the protagonist and does the laundry for the protagonist. He has the image of a good wife and loving mother. What man doesn't like that? But after Liu Hanyan joined the Fu Lu Sect, he spent most of his time in seclusion. Several times, he couldn't see the protagonist even if he wanted to. The purpose of joining the Fu Lu Sect was not to hinder the protagonist and to help the protagonist when he was struggling. But what did he do when he came out? There were several times when he was able to help the protagonist. Is it really necessary to shut up so much all day long, and the character feels different from before. Sometimes the protagonist is asked to explain for a long time just because of the woman who may have an affair with the protagonist, or the protagonist is asked to sleep in the study, and sometimes the protagonist is asked to take away the ambiguous woman. I really can't understand it. The Tao Te Ching, Heart Sutra, and Nine Sons Mantra, which were so awesome set by the author in the early stage, almost never appeared in the middle and later stages. They may appear again in the later stages, but I haven't read it and I won't. As a harem novel, the first time between the protagonist and the heroine on their wedding night is skipped over in just two sentences. I waited for nearly 200 chapters for this paragraph. In fact, one of the motivations for me to keep reading is that the author can describe more about the first time between the hero and the heroine. It can be a sidestep or something. In the end, it was covered up in two sentences. After that, the couple had sex several times and it was covered up in one or two sentences. If I didn't look carefully, I wouldn't even realize that the hero and heroine had gone to bed. As a harem novel, you are pretty cool if you can do this. Friends who want to see the driving scene can go, this book is almost as clear as distilled water.

Yangqiu County, Yuquan Village. Beside a stream in a remote forest, two people, a man and a woman, were sitting. The man's appearance is not very handsome, but his eyes are a little extra bright. The woman leaned quietly on his shoulder, and was amused by some of his jokes from time to time. "Qingqing, close your eyes." "Stinky Li Si, what do you want to do?" The woman named Qingqing pretended to be angry and pulled Li Si's ears. Li Si catered to the woman's movements and said: "Ouch, my aunt, my ears are about to be ripped off by you." "Pfft" The woman's eyes turned into crescents with a smile. Li Si touched her hair and said softly: "Be obedient, close your eyes for a moment, just for a moment." ... Li Si's throat moved: "Qingqing, you can open it now." "What on earth are you doing? ..." The woman's voice paused: "It's the green hairpin!" "Well, do you like it?" "I do, Li Si is the best person in the world." The woman stood on her tiptoes and gave Li Si a light peck on his face, her face flushed. Li Si was not ashamed, he put his arms around Qingqing and said warmly: "I have become a policeman now, and I will have monthly money from now on. When I save enough money, I will build a house and then marry you home." "Are you willing to wait for me?" The woman poked out a red face from Li Si's shoulder, slapped Li Si's chest with her little hands, and said angrily: "Stinky Li Si... You are talking nonsense again." Li Si Her throat tightened and she trembled: "You... Don't you want to?" The woman looked at Li Si's expression and burst out laughing: "Fool, I've been waiting for you to marry me..." "I've been waiting for you all my life... ..." ... "Hey, Li Si, the brothers are going to Chunxiang Pavilion for a while. What's going on, come with us to see something?" A policeman patted Li Si who was counting money. Li Si said shyly: "You guys go and have fun, I still have some official duties to do." Another policeman on the side joked: "You don't know yet, Li Si has a lover, and he is just waiting to save enough money to go back and marry home in glory!" "Brother, we are all waiting to drink your wedding wine!" For a while, the Yamen became lively, all blessings to Li Si. Li Si scratched his head and said with a naive smile: "Definitely!" ... One day, Li Si went to the place where he usually patrolled as usual. But there was a strange feeling in my heart, as if something big had happened. Sitting in a noodle shop at noon, some words still reached his ears. "Hey, have you heard? Yesterday, Mr. Wang's house on the next street has a new concubine. He hasn't gotten up yet this morning. His figure is amazing!" Another person chatted up: "Really? How many concubines does he have? It's really amazing." "Who says it's not the case? It's just about the word money. I heard that Xin Na's concubine is only sixteen years old. She is called... Qingqing?" Then he smiled indifferently, it was definitely not her, and then he secretly made up his mind to seize the time to save money. After eating, Li Si didn't know why, but accidentally ran to "Weiyang Street", an area that was not under his jurisdiction. Looking at the vermilion door in front of me. Li Si patted his head: "What the hell am I thinking about? Qingqing is still waiting for me in Yuquan Village." Just as he was about to leave, a burst of sweet laughter made his footsteps stop abruptly. "Qing... Qingqing!" Li Si is very familiar with this voice. "Bang, bang, bang!" Li Si seemed to be going crazy, knocking on the tall vermilion door in front of him. The door opened, but what came out was a group of servants armed with sticks. "Smelly catcher! The Wang family is also a place for you to come and run wild!" "You guys fight me!" "Qingqing... Qingqing!" Li Si's eyes were red, and he rushed in with all his strength, regardless of the sticks coming from behind. The scene before him dashed even his last glimmer of hope. A young woman with a bright smile sat astride the lap of a middle-aged uncle with half-white hair. Her silver bell-like laughter was like a magic sound, destroying the defense lines in Li Si's heart one after another. The woman turned her head and saw the man in front of her. Her expression was startled, and then returned to normal. However, all this fell in the eyes of Mr. Wang. Mr. Wang lifted Qingqing's chin, narrowed his eyes, and smiled: "What, beauty? Do you know her?" The woman turned her face away and said coldly: "I don't know you." "Qingqing, why, why are you doing this? You said you will wait for me all your life." At this time, Li Si was already in tears. Mr. Wang pinched the woman's pretty face: "My wife said, I don't know you! Get out of here!" Li Si whimpered and rushed forward: "I know, he must have forced you, right, Qingqing, please say something..." The crazy Li Si was quickly taken out with sticks by everyone in the palace. He tried his best to wipe away the blood on his face and watched the vermilion door slowly close in front of him, still chanting: "Qingqing..." But all that was left in his eyes was the figure of the woman clinging to him. "Hahaha, for the rest of my life... For the rest of my life..." On Li Si's face covered with blood, he didn't know whether he was laughing or crying... ... Outside Chunxiang Pavilion. "Hey... Isn't this Captain Li? Come on, come on, come on in, the girls all want you." Li Si's dim eyes were devoid of any emotion, but he grinned and said: "Girls! I'm here again!" ……………………………………………………………… The writing power is limited, so let's just see it

A true passerby heroine. Li Qing was a tool to help the protagonist grow in the early stage. After the end of the first volume, there was nothing to do with her. Did he say more than 20 sentences in total? I can't understand why 13w likes her. On the other hand, the second female lead Fan Ji is still a supporting role in the middle and late stages. Looking at it individually, the contents of the first few volumes are all remarkable, but when combined, many female characters become NPCs who issue tasks. If they don't complete the tasks, they will have nothing to do with them, and if they complete the tasks, they will have nothing to do with them at all. In the later stage, it became a mindless and enjoyable novel. Except for the small climax before the ending, which was a bit interesting and surprising, it's okay not to read the rest.

After reading this book as a whole, I feel that the first and middle stages are okay, but the latter part is a bit stretched. The main reason is that there are too many female protagonists, which makes the emotional scenes feel a bit stiff. I suggest that the author write fewer female protagonists in the next book 😒

"The Immortals of the Great Zhou Dynasty" is Xiao Rong's fourth work. I feel that the content of this book is much richer than the previous books, and the plot is really well controlled! Xiao Rongde's novel about cultivating immortals is indeed very light-hearted and enjoyable, and each character's personality is well described. The protagonist Li Muhun traveled through time and in order to survive, he embarked on the path of spiritual cultivation with the help of his ex, the heroine Li Qing, who had a crush on his current... Well, he still had a crush on, and began a long journey of spiritual practice... The protagonist, who has been born in two lives and has already died once, did whatever he wanted to do for his own life in the early stage. He ate the heroine Liu Hanyan and the female lead... Well, the heroine Su He in the later stage. Until now, he hugged the most beautiful and fairest thigh of the Great Zhou Dynasty - the Queen of the Great Zhou Dynasty! But having said that, although Li Mu did eat a lot of soft food, it was all because of his sincere dedication and risking his life for them! Li Si said that the Queen would treat anyone who is really kind to her ten times better! In fact, Li Mu is not like this. In order for Li Mu to survive, Li Qing led Li Mu to practice as a guide. He has been selflessly helping Li Mu gather the seven souls and save Li Mu. He never misses any opportunity to help Li Mu even if he takes risks... And Li Mu later paid Li Qing back in order to help her avenge her. His father was innocent, and he wanted to bring justice to the world, and he went to fight against the old party bosses and the Manchu dignitaries... Li Mu risked his life at all costs to do it. If he did not do well, he would end up with both body and soul destroyed. But for Li Qing, Li Mu did not back down... Liu Hanyan also paid a lot for Li Mu, shed tears, went to practice for Li Mu, and returned to the sad place of the darkest period of his life - Shendu... And Li Mu's original intention of going to Shendu to break out of the world and hug the queen's thigh was not to better protect his beloved wife Liu Hanyan and give her a better life... To Now, Li Mu has seen all the injustices in the world and the people are living in darkness. He has also experienced what happened to the little beggar Yu'er. He has gradually changed his initial small goal of hugging his thighs for a better life for his family to burning his own calories and bringing light to the world for the sake of the people of the world and for the kindness of Queen Mingjun. At this time, Li Mu discovered another side under the majestic surface of the Queen... A man who was used as a tool by the family and stole the imperial energy at the cost of her lifelong happiness, and even almost cost her her life... The Queen was really good to him, and Li Mu was loyal to the Queen's courtiers. He was sincere and heartbroken. The Queen is powerful and lonely, and is willing to do almost impossible things for her. Although on the surface it is just to coax the Queen, she still does not hesitate to take action when she has the opportunity. While she lives up to the monarch, she also lives up to Zhou Wu... In short, "The Immortals of the Great Zhou Dynasty" still feels full of positive energy to me! There is darkness, but more of it is sunshine! The world of practitioners is full of human touch! Not too much killing, not too much plundering, not too many twists and turns on the difficult and sadistic path of cultivation, overall relaxed and happy! More heroes and heroines sincerely give and reciprocate, exchanging sincerity for true love, and using love to warm each other...

Emm, how should I say it? The overall feel is good, but the description of the character details feels a bit lacking. The overall logic is okay, but the protagonist's IQ is always off-line from time to time. (By the way, sometimes I will self-hypnotize when the protagonist is embarrassed. The protagonist is a lonely and seriously ill patient who has been lying in a hospital bed since childhood and does not know what society is. You must understand that the world after time travel is not the kind where information exchange is very frequent. In a complex world, it seems relatively more reasonable.) The emotional involvement of several heroines is a bit stiff, and the description of the harem and the dialogue between the protagonist and the heroine are a bit unreasonable. It is a good book. If I was in junior high and high school ten years ago, I would have liked it very much. However, when I entered the social work, I would have a poor sense of involvement. I hope the author can go further in the description of the characters' emotions. Come on,

In the first month of the new year of 2021, this is the update. I am also drunk. Invincible Duan Xiaorong. The number of words written in one month is not as good as that in a month, but I still sent 5 monthly passes at the last moment. I hope Duan Xiaorong can update more next month! Just short, this month is too short!

I rewatched The Little Scholar and liked 😢 especially Ruyi. I feel that Li Qing in Xianli should be a combination of Ruyi (the gentle part) and Ruoqing. Li Qing is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. He doesn't have Ruyi's family status but he has Ruyi is cold on the outside and hot on the inside, while Ruoqing is weak and strong; Ruyan feels like a combination of Zuimo and Ruyi. The jealousy of Zuimo and Ruyi is dripping all over Ruyan. The two women feel that they will have no effect in the future, and they conquered too quickly. In the later period, the queen should be the main line. The character of the queen can also be seen in Mingzhu and Ruyi (the violent part) 😏 In terms of family status, she is the first, so I just asked Li Mu to climb. The emotional part feels that it will take a long time to conquer, so refer to Ruyi and Mingzhu

Because Li Muping has two nieces for no reason, I give you 4 recommendation votes! !

Although there are few books by Rong Dashen, every one of them is my favorite. As a bookworm of more than ten years, I can no longer read most of the novels. I discovered a new world when I read Rong Dashen's books. I have read each of Rong Dashen's books several times. Tang Ning and Li Yi both gave me a strong sense of immersion. Please support me.

It's full and my head hurts.

2 Monthly passes are given. I hope that Xiaorong will not be in Xiaorong in November! Come on! Short Xiaorong!

I really want to beat Duan Xiaorong to death, but he stops updating when the critical moment comes, which makes me mad...

Duan Xiaorong unexpectedly updated a chapter of 6,000 words, which required 4 recommendation votes.

It's the familiar end of the month again. Just like last month, I continue to vote for the monthly ticket. 4 Monthly tickets are given. It's the familiar short Xiaorong again. The number of words in a month is not as good as the previous month. It is worthy of being short Xiaorong! If it weren't for Li Mu, I would have given this short Rong to...

Although Duan Xiaorong's current monthly updates are not as good as one month at a time, and Duan Xiaorong also said that the updates at the beginning of May are extremely unstable, I still sent 12 monthly passes without saying anything else, for the sake of Li Mu and his women...

5 Monthly passes will be given away at the last moment at the end of February. Although the short update is as short as ever, Li Mu's story is indeed well written, so keep up the good work!

At the last moment, 3 monthly passes were sent. Duan Xiaorong's update this month is still as short as ever, so the monthly passes had to be sent at the last moment... I hope I can write more next month, not so short...

Rongrong, get up and code 😆

That's really nice. I'll give you one as a gift.

The beginning of Queen Zhou is the beginning of the collapse of this work. The feeling of the first volume is gone forever. What tone is set in the first volume? The male protagonist himself is dying soon. Liu Hanyan is fighting for his life day and night. He is in love with Li Qing. The female boss is cold and silent. All this was ruined by the rise of Queen Zhou. Why? From the positioning of the female character, Li Qing is completely covered first. Not only the female boss. , She is also the ultimate female boss. Queen 2 is not only a powerful thigh, but also an ultimate combat thigh. 3 Not only is she silent and cold, with a cold appearance (to the outside world), but she also has an inner coquettishness. So intuitively, Li Qingpai's soft rice is all labeled as Queen Zhou, so the first volume of Li Qingpu The so-called complicated hidden secrets in the pad are extremely simple to put together. Because the structure is too small, it is just an official matter under the Queen. To make it a super sect hidden secret in the mainland, Li Qing still has a chance to play a role. Why do you say it is a little bit? The biggest failure here is to set Queen Zhou as a major figure. It can be said that the several conflict cards that promote the development of the plot are all about her. Naturally, it will be impossible to write after the big Zhou Dynasty. Liu Hanyan was originally supposed to have a Shura scene of "Main Palace vs. Mistress". But because Queen Zhou's setting was too strong, Liu Hanyan was no match at all. We can only forcibly elevate a passerby Fan Ji to be the leader of the Demon Kingdom. So far, Liu Hanyan has not even been completely passerby in the Shura scene. As for Su He, come on, now it is the mainland's top vs. Top, and Su He, who has not yet been promoted, is still qualified to appear. Because After all, the level of Su He's background setting is not very high. In any novel with multiple female protagonists, first of all, if you want to have more scenes later, you must have a deep background plot foreshadowing. For example, the girl in the servant and finally the princess. For example, Xiao Xun'er's identity in Dou Po Moreover, it is clearly written that the background aura is too strong to reach the finale. It must not be thrown out early and written as the core content. The characteristics must be distinct and not all taken up. If you take the current Dafeng as an example, it is handled much more skillfully. Queen). They are two people. And even if he has a "Seven Emotions", the Imperial Master is also trapped under the label of mature woman. It will not affect the labels of several other fishes. And Queen Zhou in this book basically takes advantage of everything and has no disadvantage. How to play this? Secondly, as a person with a fairy tale background, he lost his soul and fought for his life. He met Queen Zhou early and ate the soft rice of Queen Zhou early. The main line was cut off early... A potential harem novel in the world of fairy tales became a theater harem novel. And there is still an absolute hostess in this theater. The outcome is already divided. So how can you write this as a harem novel... The plot conflict can't be continued.

The long night is quiet, listening to the drums quietly Seeing the moon rise Waiting for the sunrise Going on the road with lovesickness Two heart-warming lanterns Lighting the way home Lotus blooming under the moon, paved with calamus Who is in the hut Reading quietly A few wisps of incense, a cup of tea, a tree full of flowers Behind the door, on the ruler, there are ink marks Li Mu Li Mu Miss you to the core No need to wait for you to come, wait for you to go Waiting for you to pass by here Listen to the rustling wind Watch the morning and evening It is a destined belonging Being happy Like this journey of life No longer deserted Blessings, deceit, betrayal and jealousy Eliminate them all Every little thing belongs to you

It's a bit unfinished, but it's top-notch among novels of the same type. There are some slight problems with some details, but it doesn't matter. As for what some people say about the collapse of combat power, I think it's just the opposite. This book is one of the few fantasy novels I've read in which the combat power is not broken. It was awesome in the early stage and is still awesome in the later stage. Except for the protagonist and his harem group, it is reasonable for everyone else to upgrade, and the reasons for the protagonist and the harem group to upgrade quickly are also very reasonable.

Holy shit, it's all over. I graduated the year of the epidemic and got a full-time job after I got a job. This was the first book I read using Qidian. I voted for recommendations every day, with a total of 891 votes. It is also the first book to be fully subscribed. The beginning is very interesting. It can be seen that Xiao Rong wants to join Bo Da, but he has too little experience and is too weak in the later period (maybe he is newlywed, which is a bit empty). I didn't expect that once I raised it, I would raise it to completion. I hope the next chapter will end perfectly. I really miss the little scholar and young man who stayed up all night reading Xiao Rong in the college dormitory. I hope we can all get better and better.

​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​​                                                                          The plot line of this book is very good, and the writing is not bad, but I can't accept the snake demon. The white snake is okay, because the misunderstanding is understandable, but I can't understand the green snake. But it gives me the feeling that it is just nonsense and too stiff. In fact, it may be enough to write about the previous heroines, Li Qing, Liu Hanyan, Wanwan, Su He, Xiaobai. Isn't this enough? Even if it is written as a romance later, I feel better than this, maybe it is because I am not suitable for reading harem novels.

Damn it, even if you go to God, it's really a forced intelligence. The previous unjust case of Dou E could create the evil spirits that massacred the county government, and the protagonist of Shendu made arrangements right after he arrived: molesting people in the street, riding horses and hitting people on the street. These plots follow the logic of the previous unjust case of Dou E, and God must not have evil spirits all over the place? ? ?