Guide to Cultivation and Ascension

The world of cultivation in this book is real. If the forerunners have high cultivation, who doesn't want to harvest resources and control those below, such as the sect family, why not keep them for their own service? If someone else is gifted, does it have anything to do with you? Who would really give him resources for nothing? It is true that the top of the pyramid is controlled level by level.

How can I put it, the setting is quite good, the whole thing is very novel, I love watching it, but there are two things that I personally feel bad about. Regarding the realm, I feel that the realm is too high, a bit too high, and I feel that the entire world of cultivating immortals is dominated by big guys. Especially those spells, such as teleportation and flashing, give me the feeling that they are like game skills and have nothing to do with cultivating 😂This feels particularly bad.

Pure dark forest style cultivation, interesting

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This novel needs to be read calmly and slowly, not listened to at all. The author is very imaginative.

The class written by the author is so solidified, and the control of large sects is invincible, and any threatening ones will be destroyed when they develop. So how can the protagonist improve his realm in the future? Is the main sect subduing wisdom or is the protagonist cheating and invincible?

1. The Qidian Cultivation Stream is so convoluted. The protagonist is not in danger in the first three chapters, and then the golden finger is used to solve the plot to promote the development of the plot. It is spread out in a bowl of water, and there is no brief introduction by the golden finger. I guarantee that this book is already dead. 2Open the account early and reopen it. It is recommended to watch the video of Sword Attendant at Station B.

The explanation of not destroying the spiritual veins when others attack the sect is not good and unreasonable. I will return to the void at the end of my life. If you attack me and enmity, why should I leave the spiritual veins to you? I will die and destroy the spiritual veins. This is true. But your explanation is a bit bad. I can't say why you attacked me today and I destroyed it. Then you confiscated the goods to attack others. This must be too far-fetched. I suggest you change your explanation to say that because the sect formation is built on spiritual veins, destroying the spiritual veins is equivalent to destroying the sect formation, and the spiritual veins cannot be destroyed in a short time, but if you destroy the sect formation even a little bit, the power of the sect formation will decrease, making it easier for others to attack and kill you before you destroy the spiritual veins. It would be better to write it this way.

The protagonist's logical and decisive character is not like an indigenous child in the world of cultivation who left home at the age of 13. The author might as well arrange the identity of a time traveler, which may be more reasonable and more immersive...

I just like to see this kind of unsystematic native cultivating immortals, which is a bit boring but not too much. I was depressed in the early stage and then took off in the later stage. Only the plain life of a person is true. There are ups and downs but not many. I am glad that I did not miss this book because of its title.

The author has no outline at all. He writes wherever he thinks of, and the more he writes, the more boring he becomes.

There is a strange phenomenon in the Internet literary circle. The more black spots there are, the better the writing is. Because incompetent people cannot accept their own mediocrity, they want to drag others down too. Most black people are paid, because life is very tiring, most people come here to have fun, no one has time to post black people all day long.

After reading it, I felt empty. Countless monks have worked hard and tried their best to create the ascension of countless corpses, but it is nothing but pitiful and sad nothingness. After three reincarnations, all familiar friends have turned into dust, and who knows the tragic song of generosity millions of years ago.

The author does talk a lot of nonsense. Che Zhulun repeatedly said that more than 60% of the words in one chapter are like saying that the key to solving the problem is to solve the key problem. However, the author's setting is relatively strong and the characters are not demented. We can only see whether the performance of the author's future works has improved. It is purely the writing that is holding him back.

When reading this book from the previous one, some people have always said that the author is slow to update. The main problem is that the author's books are not those invincible and exciting books. How to write about debuts, how to write about adventures, how to write about slaps in the face and pretending to be cool. Or Gou Daoliu, which already has a mature writing format. The author's books are very different and have their own style of writing, so every plot arrangement must be thought of by yourself. The update speed is definitely not fast. If the update is fast, it may not be the type you want to read. I like to read the author's books because of his style!

Alas, this book is still well written, with a straightforward and steady narrative, but it lacks some ups and downs and an attractive plot. Looking at the subscription results posted by the author in the comment area, I found that he is just like the protagonist in the book, with shallow talent and rough experiences

Really, don't have too many narrations, otherwise it will be a bad book. The author's previous book could have been a god, but it was just too much nonsense, always adding some explanations and irrelevant descriptions.

Let me remind you, there are some books that had a great start and were expected to be worth millions, but in the end they couldn't bear to write out the supporting characters, and turned into melodrama and love drama like Wulin Inn. I wrote about love every day, and just upgraded and killed monsters around a few old supporting characters every day. There is no new attraction. Don't do this, there is a trend in this area.

I don't understand why there is a waste flow. It doesn't rely on qualifications and understanding, but relies entirely on cheating. It's not another kind of cool writing. Don't talk about the protagonist's hard work and hardships. He doesn't think about practicing every day. He makes elixirs today, makes talismans the next, and picks up girls the day after tomorrow. He's just like a street kid.

The name sounds like a popular product, but the content is inexplicably well written.

The early sign of a eunuch is that he always asks for leave

Very nice. The only drawback is that the girl can't walk. If only I could kill my sister and become a enlightened person like the Paradise of Reincarnation. I dare say the results will be better. It's a dark text, so why not just do it better?

The world view is well established, but the writing is dry and verbose. However, the plot develops quite quickly. It feels like reading a setting collection or a script.

Suddenly I found that he started to update, ⛽️

The Era of Decline of Formation Founder:? Duration:? Terminator: Li Qiao End mark: The emergence of the Zongmen Formation Zongmen Formation Era Founder: Li Qiao Sustaining time: hundreds of thousands of years Terminator: Zhou Tai Terminator sign: The Immortal Formation was destroyed The Five Saints Earth Era Founder: Burial Earth Lineage Sustaining Time: (Does anyone remember how long it lasted?) Terminator: Zhou Tai End Mark: Five Holy Lands were swept Earth Star Alliance Era Founder: Zhou Tai Sustaining Time:? Terminator:? End mark:? The author, the world of immortality has a long history. Is there an era of alchemists or an era of weapon refiners? Does it appear before or after the sect's formation?

I saw Chapter 300 in QQ. I like to see the protagonist adopt a daughter and not be a prisoner, but your two cauldrons start to look at each other every time they get something from the protagonist. They have no idea about their qualifications. I think it is better to let them die of old age and beg for it. After receiving the soul-calling banner, they can become immortals and ancestors and then be resurrected to make people feel better.

I still gave up after reading Chapter 129. I kept preaching, giving examples, and explaining. I knew you were writing a novel, but I didn't know you thought you were writing a textbook.

This novel does not have gorgeous language decoration, but impresses readers with its plain and true feelings. The sentences are smooth and coherent. The psychological portrayal and detailed description are very successful, giving people a sense of aftertaste! From a literary point of view, the material selection is very novel, the angle is clearly visible, the language is plain yet elegant, concise yet full of meaning, and it can be called a model of modern novels! This book shows extraordinary literary skills despite its plainness. It can be said that every word is a masterpiece and every sentence is a classic. It has reached a height that is elusive for us. From an artistic point of view, this book still needs to be improved, but its significance is far greater than the success itself. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" I really deserve to be the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time! How could there be such a wonderful novel in this world? I couldn't believe my eyes. Since the reform and opening up, I thought that no novel would ever impress me. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful book today. You made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, there is a world outside the world". After reading this book, I dare not reply easily. I am worried that my vulgar language will tarnish this rare novel in the world. But I still replied, because I felt that if I could not leave my own footprints behind such wonderful literature, it would be a regret in my life. Please forgive my selfishness! No matter how gorgeous the words are, it is impossible to describe the brilliance of this book, so I just want to say: Don't be stiff, the author. Your body is important, but the novel is more important, so take good care of your health and come back for updates.

Come on, the overall plot is ok, the layout of cultivating immortals is also ok, but it's a bit dry and doesn't feel very full, giving people the impression that it's really a novel about cultivating immortals, with no emotion. This book should have at least 100,000 fans, but it probably doesn't have enough exposure now.

Author, if you are still here, can you say something?