One Strengthening Point a Day

The biggest advantages and disadvantages of this book all come from the biggest feature of this book: Reality. The world is real, the angles are real, the characters are real ■The world is real The structure and logic of the worldview are quite reasonable, there will be no inconsistencies, and the characters can easily jump out of the frame (such as primary school students who can write advanced math questions casually) and other plots. For example, when reading this book, you cannot substitute the worldview of other immortal novels or real life into it. You must imagine that you have really traveled through the past and faced a completely unfamiliar world. Otherwise, you will not be able to understand the protagonist's actions at all. (This is one of the reasons why this book was criticized. Of course, the nature of the criticism is that too many readers take it for granted) For example, many readers feel that even if they don't understand how to practice, they can just fumble around and it will not do any harm to the body. I feel that when entering a sect, you should show your potential so that you can be vigorously cultivated. What these readers say can be said to be correct, but the premise is that this book conforms to the worldview of these readers. Often when readers read this book, the world view of the book has not yet been developed. The protagonist does not understand the world at all, does not know how to practice, does not know whether this is a peaceful and fair world, and does not know whether this is a world with channels for advancement. That's why the protagonist didn't dare to take the risk of physical injury to practice, so he just stayed put when he entered the sect and chose to wait and see before making any plans. "If you can calm down and read this book slowly, you will have a deep sense of immersion and like the feeling of slowly exploring a new world" ■The perspective is real If you say that it feels like reading other novels, the author is like a god in the sky, observing the protagonist as an ant, helping the protagonist when he is in trouble, and pranking the protagonist when he is in a bad mood. In this book, the author is like a monitor installed in the protagonist's body, unable to interfere with the protagonist or external things, and can only record the protagonist's life silently. For example, in other books, when the protagonist needs a foundation-building pill, a way to obtain the foundation-building pill appears inexplicably. When the protagonist builds a foundation, he happens to encounter a secret realm that can only be entered by building a foundation. In this book, the protagonist does not have that much "luck", there will be failures, there will be misses. With repeated difficult attempts and my own golden fingers, I made breakthroughs little by little, from zero to one, from one to one hundred. Of course, it is not necessarily true that the protagonist has no luck at all. If there was no luck at all, this book would not be able to be written at all. But compared to the "luck" that seems fake at first glance in other books, I prefer to call the protagonist of this book "survivor bias" I saw a chapter comment before: How about the protagonist, isn't it arranged by the author? Although this is true, what I saw in this book is that the author did not deliberately arrange anything for the protagonist. This made me feel more immersed in the protagonist. This book has many first-person perspectives and is filled with the inner drama of the protagonist. It is full of the protagonist's thinking, exploration and research on unknown things. For example, if the protagonist obtains a seed, the protagonist in other books will take it for granted that watering is enough. In the end, the protagonist succeeds, which seems inexplicable and the protagonist is "lucky". The protagonist of this book will conduct comparative experiments on multiple seeds by watering, fertilizing, using spiritual energy, etc. To obtain the results. This feels much more reasonable. "A real world, plus a real perspective, I think many men in science and engineering will like this kind of research feeling" ■The characters are real This is also the biggest highlight and highlight of this book. The protagonist is like a real person. He can love, hate, be lazy, fight, be touched, regret, be angry, be irrational, deceive himself and others, fight for the one he loves, and put down the butcher knife. I was lazy at the beginning and didn't want to work. In order to convince myself, I even gave an excuse that it hurt. Limited by the geographical location, the "stupidity" of adults, and the inability of children, I have been able to travel for so long without gaining anything. The protagonist here is so real, just like everyone here has traveled through the past. (Don't rush to deny it, let me ask you, how many times have you helped your parents with housework? Do you dare to change the brand-name shoes on your feet to other brands and walk around in front of your classmates and colleagues?) The reason for being criticized here is essentially that everyone does not want to see the reality of themselves and does not like to see such a protagonist. It is also because the author did not handle it well (at the beginning, a protagonist who knew nothing about it grew up, but the author did not find a good reason), but fortunately, this little poison disappeared. Compared with other novels, the protagonist is always rational, always optimistic, and always decisive in killing. The protagonist of this book is more like a human being. Normally rational, but when encountering something that deeply touches you, encountering intolerable insults, or meeting someone you like, you will go crazy. Usually, he kills decisively, but when he encounters a person in distress who looks familiar to him, and sees the tears shed by others due to helplessness, he will help and put down his butcher knife. The frustration of this book basically comes from the cautiousness of the protagonist. The fun of this book basically comes from the protagonist's "madness" to break through himself The relationship between the characters in this book is also very smooth, and slowly heats up with the interaction with the protagonist. Well, that means wives. None of the protagonists in this book seem to have any good gay friends. There is no such thing as love at first sight, but more of love over time. Instead of Bai Fumei falling in love with a poor boy, it's more about the poor boy slowly turning into a tall, rich and handsome man, and thereby winning his heart. Instead of being confidant at the beginning, he slowly tested and gradually became confidant. The supporting characters in this book are also very real. The IQ is not low, the behavior is logical, and it is the author's description and control of human nature in this desperate world. "When reading other books, I feel like I am bringing in puppets, but here I am bringing in real people" ■The reason why the results are not so good 1. The characters are too real, real people have shortcomings, and readers don't like shortcomings 2. A bit slow to warm up, Internet articles are more fast-paced, and I left the first few chapters if I didn't like it 3. It is more mature in thinking, suitable for people over 20 years old, who have been beaten by society, and the proportion of such people in the readership is not high Of course, the above three points are not absolute, because Qidian users are huge, and there are definitely many people who like to read this novel. Some novels that are more popular than this are also very popular. The problem is that the readership group does not match the target readers of the novel, that is, the people who come in after seeing the cover, title, and introduction are different from the people who like to read the novel. Personally, I thought this was a novel for beginners at first, but it turned out not to be the case. I felt uncomfortable reading it at the beginning, but after reading a few chapters, I found it to be quite interesting. (I personally like to read about people struggling to survive in the apocalypse, so I think this novel is quite to my liking) Suggestion: The introduction can be changed so that people can know the characteristics of the book (real struggle to survive) at a glance. Don't change the title of the book, it's too risky. In addition, the golden finger of this book can also be regarded as a feature, which is quite interesting, but compared to the world view and struggle for survival, the golden finger is not that big a feature. ■Summary Don't read it for elementary school students and junior high school students. High school students, college students, and graduate students can watch it. Recommended for those who have been in society for more than one year. Recommended for science and engineering men who like analysis and research. Highly recommended if you can calm down and watch it slowly. "If you can calm down and read this book, a real world, a real perspective, a real protagonist, the sense of immersion will be really deep" ■ A small complaint about the author No matter how realistic the description of this book is, I still like it. Don't write about wife dying and minotaur content. Although it is reasonable, this is an online article after all. I am here to make you happy, not to make you feel uncomfortable. So even if there are no signs yet, I still have to give you a piece of advice: Don't write tragedies! Don't write about tragedy!

After reading so many fairy tale novels, and countless mortals or losers starting out, this protagonist is the first one that made me feel that a person is really a loser mentally. From the first few chapters, the protagonist pays the most attention to maintaining his appearance and maintaining the appearance of a so-called immortal cultivator. I didn't want to make money and left home to seek immortality. In the end, I left my hometown because I was sold by my parents. Are you a fucking immortal? Cultivation of immortality relies on brain power and luck, right? There is no system to send it, right? How can such a protagonist be attractive? It's all about adding points and holding it in your mouth. It has no charm at all. You still want to write about the sufferings of the world, so you write a book like this? Don't you look back at your writing? After a few chapters, there is a plot of one chapter, with all kinds of incomprehensible thoughts of the protagonist. We don't see a little bit of the suffering of the people, we only see that the protagonist's family is poor, and then change the map? You are so good

It's very toxic, the main character is pretentious and like a moth.

To be honest, when the handyman disciples who carried the boat were killed at will, the protagonist was just scared, but still returned to the sect as a slave without a single thought, without any plans for himself. Also, as you wrote, the fairy gave some foundation-building pills, the worst foundation-building method. The protagonist was grateful for Dade's exposed cultivation speed and joked with his own life. I couldn't stand it. Is it because he has never seen a woman? No matter how beautiful she is, she still stands on the bones of these people. Just throw a bone and the protagonist will wag his tail.

I think the writing is very good. The author has combined the real situation of a person traveling through the past with the rational planning of the world. Cultivating immortals is not about fighting monsters and upgrading, burning, killing and looting. It is like competing to be the boss in the underworld. In the end, the protagonist takes advantage of everything. The people he encounters either serve the people wholeheartedly to the protagonist, or they want to give the protagonist property, life, and experience.

The plot is okay, the writing level is average, and there are too many narrations. It seems that I am afraid that readers will not understand it or misunderstand it. Don't be too misled by the comments. Stick to your own ideas. It's difficult to agree with others. Writing is a relatively personal matter.

If I can maintain this level, I'll book it all. I have followed many books, but this is the first one that is so serious about class consolidation in this world, or the first one that is so difficult to write. In the past, the protagonists, even if they encountered this kind of situation, were able to get through it smoothly by relying on their own hang-ups, which was really cool to watch. The huge information gap has led to the slow growth of the protagonist. It is necessary to clearly realize that the protagonist's IQ is not very high, he is just an ordinary person, and he is afraid of being cheated. Don't talk about being a human being in two lives. I don't know if the combined age of these two lives is fifty years. How can those old goblins who have lived for hundreds or thousands of years fight, and there is such a big class gap. Actually, I look forward to the protagonist being able to change this class stereotype in the future. After all, only when the water is alive can there be fish. If a world has limited resources, then plunder other worlds, or research and develop new energy sources. It has been like this throughout the ages. But I don't know if this book has this intention. It's better if it does, but it doesn't hurt if it doesn't. Of course, judging from the current situation, the great change of heaven and earth is definitely a big plot point. Judging from the geographical location of the protagonist in one of the chapters, the author must have a relatively complete outline of the book, so I won't say too much about the main plot line. I would like to ask about the setting, how the beast becomes a monster. Because the existence of monsters is inevitable, maybe the ancestor went to defend the human race against foreign enemies, which was the battle between humans and monsters, or he might be a monk from another world. Of course I hope this question will not be answered here, I hope the author can reveal it at the appropriate time in the book. Although it is about mortals cultivating immortals, but one thing is said, the most enjoyable part of this book so far is the fairy's guidance and the concubine's devotion. It can be said that I have been depressed until now, which makes people feel a little distressed. According to the introduction, it is estimated that the protagonist will not defect from the sect until he reaches the golden elixir stage and has a lot of strengthening points. Nascent Soul Yexiu will not be afraid of being chased, and the protagonist's luxurious equipment and golden elixir should be no problem. Oh, by the way, I guess the protagonist's strengthening points can be used to strengthen the golden elixir or Yuanying. Also, will the protagonist Zhou Tai always be single? Although the author has repeatedly expressed in previous books that the protagonist does not want to owe anything to cause and effect, there should be a Taoist companion (a Taoist partner, not a wife). Even if it's just for a while, it will eventually be written to death. But I feel that if it is clear enough, this kind of dead Taoist monk will sublimate the book even more. Although I don't really dislike tragedy, in this book, I somehow felt that the existence of this kind of character was quite good. A world is not full of bad people, nor is it full of good people. Although most of them are profit-seeking people, there are still those who are simple and just do it for the love in their hearts. I think the protagonist's innocence about cultivating immortality is acceptable, but the position he is in means that the protagonist will gradually darken himself in order to survive. Although this kind of writing is relatively dark, where there is light, there is darkness. If you blindly write dark writing, your whole heart will be distorted. However, it seems that the author has handled this aspect quite well so far. After all, it is still in the early stages and the protagonist has not even passed the first level. The writing is quite complicated. I just write whatever comes to my mind, so it's a bit messy. Finally, the author, please persevere.

Let me tell you my opinion. This novel is actually quite rigorous. From a reader's perspective, we are from God's perspective, so we are not very able to understand some of the protagonist's actions. I think putting myself in someone else's shoes may also be the protagonist's situation. In any case, these chapters at this stage are not very toxic, and the author has laid some foreshadowing in the early stage. It depends on how the author describes it later. Come on, the author is optimistic about you

The reasonableness of the plot depends on imagination, the development of the plot depends on imagination, the protagonist's cultivation of immortality depends on imagination, everything depends on imagination, can't you just just have a daydream?

In fact, I grew up very slowly as I watched, and I was happy to see the protagonist's careful trial and error. However, after entering the sect, it was very problematic to write a large psychological description in the third person and write a bunch of inexplicable explanatory texts. After entering the sect, there are other characters and events, and there is no need to rely solely on the protagonist's brainstorming to fill out the plot and supplement the setting. As a result, the author is still forced to write the protagonist's single-player brainstorming activities to survive in the wild. . .

Let me tell you what I think. Recently, I discovered that this book is good. I would give it 4.3 Points out of 5. There are always some excellent texts that are delayed by their names, and this one is it. Advice to the author: steady the pace and don't collapse.

I actually like the setting of this book. Mortals are cultivating immortals. They have brains, caution, and golden fingers, but they are not too unnatural Let's talk about the poisonous points that persuaded me to quit. First: the inner drama of the protagonist. There can be inner drama, but there is no need for so many. I don't know if the author is doing it for the sake of word count or for some other reason. , This really affects the viewing experience Second: The protagonist can't walk when he sees a woman, which is completely different from his previous character. The protagonist is a cautious and pretentious time traveler, and then he wrote half of the chapter because of a woman's inner drama, and finally went into danger because of this woman. This is really the biggest poisonous point in my opinion. Maybe everyone has their own preferences, and some people may just like that kind of harem story. I only represent my own opinion, but the inner drama really affects the viewing experience.

1. The author does not take the initiative to delete comments, but actively faces readers' sane or insane words. I appreciate this. 2. For some readers who say this novel is "long-winded", I think this may be related to the fact that the author has not received positive feedback for a long time as a "stand-alone". In this regard, I can only say to take your time, or don't rush when watching. 3. The quality of some readers is quite disappointing, and they may have slipped through the cracks of quality education. 4. I haven't thought about it for the time being. I'll come back to "nagging" after I think about it.

After seeing so many controversies, let me say a few words. This book is not a cool novel, or even a traditional online novel. Those who have read some old-fashioned Western first-person novels will probably understand it better. This book is closer to that style of writing. Of course, it is only close. There is still a gap between the writing and the story. This book is characterized by its verbosity, and it is very verbose. But at the same time, once you read it, these long words will repeatedly refine and integrate the world view, and the images of the characters will become thicker and thicker, making you feel very real and depressing. Of course, the character of the protagonist in this book is not outstanding. He is a small character, a small character, very ordinary, even a bit useless. But also because of this, he is real. Different from other protagonists in Second World, this is the desperate struggle of a small character in the world of cannibalistic immortality. Like a real diary. So it is very suitable for leisurely old bookworms to make a cup of light tea and savor it slowly. Reading it in one breath is still very interesting. Of course, it's hard to read and catch up. It is recommended that you watch it once a week or two, and the overall plot will be very comfortable.

The writing is realistic and engaging, and it depicts a different world of cultivating immortals. It's good😊! Come on! Worth a look!

You can tell whether the author's writing is good or bad in the book review section. Don't criticize you for this or criticizing you for that. Who has nothing to do to criticize you? Wouldn't it be delicious if you have time to read a few more chapters?

As a bookworm for more than ten years, I basically look at things objectively. I don't want to brag about it. I can read it during the book shortage. But your book, the author, has been writing a lot of life principles about how to be a person and do things in a narrative way. You must know that you are not writing a philosophy book, you are writing a novel about cultivating immortals. However, the content of your first part is basically a narration, which is a bit like teaching book friends how to be a person and do things. If you want to outline the character's personality and three views, it can be slowly reflected in millions of words. Maybe the author doesn't have the writing power. If the following chapters contain this kind of content, I will most likely abandon the book. Of course, I have only read the first dozens of chapters to express my opinion. The author himself will feel free to give me some advice when I see this post. I can only give 3 points out of 10 for the first 50 chapters. Your Golden Three Hundred Chapters are indeed stinky and long.

The beginning of the chapter is close to life, but the more I write, the more chaotic it becomes. After reading 200 chapters, I wanted to abandon the book four times, but I still did.

I finished it in two or three days. It is a very slow novel with a protagonist struggling between life and death... It is very similar in style to a novel called "The Doomsday Fairyland System", but it is longer than that and the scope of the struggle is greater. This kind of subject matter is actually quite niche. After all, many novels are read to relieve stress, but there must be some changes. Reading too many refreshing novels will improve your intelligence. In short, this is a story about a little guy struggling in the world. Maybe he will become a big shot, but not yet. Well, I will leave a space for the last, seven monthly passes, in exchange for an opportunity to raise a book. I just hope that when I read this book, he will still be there and not give up on my dream. Thanks.

I saw a lot of books with titles like Gou this and Gou that. At first glance, they all sound like nonsense. This dish is called the real Gou.

There is a feeling that it is not a biological person. You cannot take the initiative to give up a home without love, you can only wait to be given up. . Come on! There are good and bad things in the world, and there are opportunities to find beauty in life. . I saw myself because of the protagonist, so I specifically downloaded the Qidian app. Let me tell you: "The truth has no weight or importance, only whether you can accept the falsehood with good intentions." Confusion is not bitter, and sincerity is rare. .

I started reading novels about cultivating immortals when I was 16 years old. Not to mention omniscient and omnipotent. I also know a little bit about it. It can be said that it ranks in the top 10 novels I know. The author's fighting and character descriptions are remarkable. The plot that attracted me was full of ups and downs but not disappointing. And the description of the world of cultivating immortals shows that the author has put in a lot of effort. 🤭🤭🤭

How did you get through the previous chapters? The god-level setting at the beginning was afraid that the appearance would affect the path to immortality and the person would choose to live a ruined life As an excuse, I would capture some small animals to repay the family But I think this is not right Not to mention whether he is an immortal or not In the face of life When I was raising my parents for ten years, I didn't contribute to the family because of my appearance and immortality. Is this really a person who grew up under the red flag? If we say that in the capitalist society in the previous life, interests came first and were cold-blooded and ruthless, it is understandable, but it is really unpleasant, because this approach is not essentially different from that of the old people. Another issue is the sense of substitution If you think your parents are your biological parents after rebirth, shouldn't you try to make some contributions? If you think you are not your biological parents, then shouldn't you be more grateful to the strangers who have taken care of you for ten years? In the protagonist's three views, what is value? Are the Immortal Path and Immortality the first place? Any other factors, no matter how small, that may affect these two points, are of far lower value than these two points. What is the protagonist's definition of life in the book? Do you think that if the life after rebirth is to walk on the path of immortality and live forever, what kind of story will this outlook on life write? I think this is not just heartlessness I have nothing to say about waiting for immortality. With such a strong desire, I am not even willing to try some relatively safe attempts. (I don't know whether I did it or not, but if I did, why didn't the villagers laugh at this lazy guy?) Above

The arrangement of these two chapters is too vulgar, Renaissance, right?

It's true that I haven't been reading novels for more than ten years like others, so I'm not considered an old bookworm, but I definitely have been for five or six years. Maybe it's because I've read too many novels. Every time I read a new book, I often have thoughts about where I've read some of the plots. It's really hard to find half of the novels that I can read all the time. The higher my expectations for some books, the more I feel like I'll find faults with things I don't like. The more I pick, the less I can read them. Now I can't even read the novels I particularly liked to read. After a few long sentences, I didn't know what to express. Anyway, from the beginning I wanted to say that this book was not suitable for me.

The pace is a bit slow. It's too empty and has no plot. These chapters are not well written.

The character started out lazy, with an ordinary appearance, but also engaged in skin whitening and skin care. The main reason was that he came from a poor family and did not have enough to eat and did not help the family. In reality, in this era of scarce food, he was either thrown away or beaten to death for wasting food, which discouraged most people.

The protagonist reflects on why he ended up like this, what he lacks, and says that he would be too weak if he cultivated immortality. In fact, the protagonist has just been dreaming, imagining that he can cultivate immortality and find a few fairies. What about the action? The so-called actions are his doings. What does the golden finger have to do with you? The so-called preparations are just self-made sunscreen mud. There is a hammock in the east of the village. I fell off the bed while doing immortal fighting. I was injured and worshiped the immortals. I was mentally prepared to kill. I have been working in the mine for two years. Isn't it because of the earthquake that I was planning to leave after feeling satisfied? After being hungry for three days, you met someone, you lay on the ground waiting for someone to save you, you were touched, and then you took a shovel and robbed the person who was guarding the carriage. Who gave you the courage and brains? At this time, it is described in the car that the lady sees that you are half a grown-up and gives you money. It is possible that the lady will give you money, but your IQ is beyond words, and most of the guards will cut you off. You are about to die, but you are still dreaming of becoming an immortal, with the arrogance of an immortal. Before a person cultivates immortality, he has the self-esteem and lustful intentions of an immortal. Look at my fair and tender skin. When I was a child, I never went to the fields. I collected mud by the river for sun protection and skin care. I waited for the immortals to fall on the hammock in the east of the village. I thought that I would be injured and prayed for immortality. , Only now did he know that he was an immortal and illiterate. He changed hands and entered the mine three times, and set a three-year period. After three years, the outstanding children in the mine can enjoy the pleasure of women. The protagonist vowed to escape as soon as possible, fearing that he would be haunted by inner demons. He would have nothing to befriend, owe nothing, and would not be affected by karma. After having enough food and growing up, he would stay for a while. In the blink of an eye, after two years, he would be singing and mining alone. Because of his long body, he was very good. Three years later, there was an obscene incident. An earthquake hit Happy Mining. The way out was blocked. I added some shovels and dug diagonally. I encountered a cave and picked up secret books. I didn't know how to read. I escaped and ascended to heaven. It had been three days since I'd been on the road. I suddenly saw someone coming. I hid my things. I lay on the ground and waited for someone to save me. I saw ten people on the opposite side. One person came forward and touched his clothes. Then he called the protagonist a poor beggar. The protagonist felt that he was going to starve to death and his brain was probably crazy. He picked up the shovel. Robbery of a passing car, a team leader, a maid, a coachman and four servants, the servant (guard) carries a knife and asks for a card. The lady is kind and gives a bag of silver. I don't know how many ten taels there are, and how many protagonists can be bought. The protagonist is arrogant in cultivating immortals, so he asked for half of the silver, and asked for some food for the rest, leaving the iron piece behind, saying that in the future I will be successful, look for it with the iron piece, and turn to me for help. I will definitely repay today's kindness. The protagonist was sold because he was lazy and never left the village. He thinks about cultivating immortals every day, lies in the hammock every day waiting for the immortals, and thinks about fairies. What I did was whitening and skin care.

This book is too long-winded and boring, and why must those who cultivate immortality have to be fair and pure? Cultivation of immortality was not officially started until it was put on the shelves. The protagonist is just a small fish and shrimp in the world of immortals, and he goes back to the mortal world to repay his kindness? Repaying a favor and bringing up a lot of nonsense, so is this the Holy Mother?

There are many people in the book review section who claim that it takes bookworms of more than ten years to understand the connotation of this book, which really makes me laugh. The whole lazy dog ​​protagonist has given many people a sense of empathy In order to have fair skin and make it easier to hook up with so-called "fairies" in the future, I never help the family. . . . Is this the logic of normal people? I'm speechless.