Tianhai Xiantu

How hard can it be for a person to persevere? Starting from 100 first orders, I wrote 5 million words and finally wrote a masterpiece. This book is the epitome of many traditional Mortal-style works. The worldview at the beginning is a regular "Sea Islands" opening. Goldfinger is more of a farming and development type, creating a strong sense of anticipation for the main line. The author has not let down the readers' expectations. He persisted little by little and wrote the entire worldview in a rich, interesting and complete way. , Not to say amazingly talented, but definitely good-looking and well-produced. Currently in the later stages of updating the human world chapter, the plot is getting more and more exciting. It is estimated that the follow-up will include the spiritual world and the fairy world. I believe it can give readers a complete and good story that can be followed for many years.

I've seen more than 90% of it, let's talk about my feelings, and let's talk about the conclusion first: In the early stage, it was really not very good to read. Later, the writing got better and better, but when it came to Yuanying, I felt that the quality had dropped again. The biggest problem is that it is too watery. I gave the entire book a rating of 65 points. If 20% of the content can be streamlined, I think it can reach 75 points. My feeling is that I can read it, but I am not willing to vote for it. It can be seen that the author's overall idea is good, but there is too much homogeneous content. I see that I have started to skip reading now, and it does not affect my continued reading. Another problem is that the classes are too dense. The higher the level of cultivation, the more tiring it becomes. It's really tiring to watch.

The further it goes, the uglier it becomes. It's just a matryoshka. I suggest that it would be enough to see Yu Ying return to the original continent. Everything after that is repetitive content. What attracted me the most in this book at the beginning was that the Thunder Refining Body can be transformed by integrating the blood of monsters and beasts. However, when I reached the Nascent Soul stage, I said it was no longer useful and I just scattered the power. Then every time they fight, they shout out the water skills learned from the Jindan period, and they always use the same few moves. There are also all kinds of adventures in the early stage, which are quite exciting. After entering the Nascent Soul stage, I am invincible. People with higher realms than me can't beat me due to various restrictions. The protagonist can win every time he screams, and there are all kinds of matryoshka plots. I gave up the book completely. The responsible person said that Yuanying's writing was very good before, but it was all garbage since returning to the original continent.

The plot is quite classic, and it feels like dreaming back to ten years ago But now if you want to find a classic book like this, it's really hard to find, especially one that is classic but not very intellectual. Anyway, I have seen this book in recent years Deconstruction and counter-convention are popular nowadays Road, it is joking and funny, otherwise it has to be a system. This traditional underworld cultivating immortality is no longer popular. In recent years, I have really only watched this one. I have seen more deconstruction and anti-routine cultivating immortality, but it is not interesting. Too many people have written it, and it feels a bit samey. In comparison, this kind of traditional cultivation of immortality is pleasing to the eye. It has to be this kind of taste. This is right.

It has been updated to Chapter 93. After reading it, I feel that the protagonist's development of the golden finger is too poor to maximize the benefits. 1. Feed the spiritual fish in the water, and only feed two kinds of fish that you can use. Have you never thought of feeding other fish with great economic value? For example, shellfish (these can grow pearls, and different values ​​​​are different), turtles (the longer they live, the stronger they are, even if there is no turtle shell, it is a good material), and beasts will not mutate or upgrade? Even if there are no seedlings of high-level beasts, can't they be fed? If it's really not possible, we don't want high-level purebloods. Are there no low-level beasts with a trace of blood? 2. Can we only feed fish? Can't we grow plants in the water? What about spiritual herbs? 3. There is only water. Have you tried putting a small island on it, and then using the time difference or spiritual power difference to plant spiritual grass? 4. The protagonist's sect is too poorly developed. As mentioned in the article, the lectures are not given once. There are 6 peaks in the outer sect, such as weapon refining, elixir refining, etc. The protagonist has not thought about developing it. Currently, there is no support. As a side job, I simply use gold fingers to buy fish; and then I fight, and I don't develop spells much (after all, I didn't go to the class). I basically rely on body refining and spiritual weapons, which are immortal cultivation. 5, and the villain Wei Xuan, it is said that he has a foundation-building father, and then he is domineering in the outer sect? He also described that some talented disciples are also afraid, but foundation building is only the threshold to enter the inner gate. With such a background, is he overbearing? The description is very unreasonable. There are too many foundation-building parents in the outer sect and there are too many parents in the inner sect. It doesn't matter if someone named Sun appears later. This... 6. The protagonist's parents are foundation-building disciples of the inner sect after all, and Yuan Ying's physical training method is not without opportunity. Can't they give their son a good method? Not to mention whether the sect channels can be obtained, but what about outside the sect? If it has to be said that it is for the purpose of switching to more advanced skills later, it is hard to say. There are high-level skills, and its low-level skills are still yellow-level middle-level skills? It doesn't make sense Generally speaking, the development of Goldfinger is quite low, and I don't want to be a person who has traveled through time (I have never thought about going to places like the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion to see the varieties of spiritual beasts and spiritual grasses, how can they play a greater role); the development of sects is low, such as side jobs, such as the protagonist's single fighting method; Anyway, there are many things that need attention In the end, this book is still good. Although it has flaws, the flaws do not hide the good points. It is recommended that if the author cannot handle the emotional drama of the characters well, then he should not write a heroine in the later stage, and let the protagonist just focus on the Tao and pursue immortality. Come on, author

I would like to give some suggestions to the author. First, it is normal to have transitional texts. It is impossible for every chapter to be a fierce confrontation. However, in a copy, transitional texts appear very loose, and this copy is already very large. The second is to strive to advance each chapter in the main line or branch line in a non-overdone text. Although Haoyu Zhenxian is a eunuch, he handles this aspect very well. The standard of a good article is that if the reader reads ten lines at a glance, he may not understand it later because he missed the foreshadowing. The standard for a bad article is that it only looks at the title of the article and does not affect the reading of the next article. Of course, online article editors will also suggest that it's okay to go out for a while during the stuck period. It's purely a transition.

I didn't see the skill at first, but as the plot progresses, the author's writing gets better and better, and it's very interesting. The protagonist is a demonic monk who has a bottom line and is decisive in killing. I like this character very much. And the writing is not sloppy, which is very good.

The author's writing is good, and it feels like a mortal.

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What a great book, it's not too late to discover it now, it's enough. It is a rare novel that can be compared with mortals. If you like mortals, you can come in and read it! The writing is sophisticated, the plot advances reasonably, and it doesn't deliberately show off or exaggerate realm battles. It is worth calming down and reading slowly.

Few words, too many words, too many typos, it affects the perception, it's too uncomfortable to look at

Don't miss it, it's the first book you paid to read, a bookworm of 15 years.

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Based on my 20 years of experience in reading countless online books, this book is a rare masterpiece of fairy tales. Of course, there are some minor shortcomings, such as the level of cultivation is too detailed (for example, a mid-term stage of Yuanying is divided into the early stage, the ordinary stage, the mid-term peak bottleneck, the mid-term peak, the top mid-stage, etc.), But the flaws are not outweighed. The most problematic part of this book is the first 300 chapters. It is estimated that the author's writing skills were not very good at the beginning and his writing style was relatively poor. After more than 300 chapters, his writing skills improved dramatically, and it was like a completely different person. Other aspects of the storyline, rhythm, battle scenes, war scenes, world view, etc. Are all excellent. If it were not for the influence of the first 300 chapters, the performance of this book would be far higher than the current level. It is strongly recommended that the author revise the writing of the first 300 chapters. I also recommend readers to read it patiently, it is indeed a good book.

The author has divided the levels so confusingly that there are late stage, perfect, peak, and top. I can't even figure out the division of combat power.

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🤔 How long is the total lifespan of Yuanying? It took 300 years to break through the bottleneck of a small realm, but the protagonist is still stuck. I put it bluntly, are other people worthy of cultivating immortals? Is this reasonable?

I also made an initial subscription and then reviewed it. Does anyone have the contact information of the author so that he can refund the money and wasted 55 points on me?

Brother, this is just the transformation of gods, the combination of purgatory and the tribulation-transmitting Mahayana. How many thousands more words do you plan to write for how many years? Is it so difficult to become a Personalized God? Isn't it difficult to arrange a force that descends from the realm and grab a water-based spiritual object or a demon body? The pen is in your hand, but the opportunity is not arranged casually? How long have you been writing in the Nascent Soul stage? Most of the books were written after you ascended to the Nascent Soul stage. There are more than 7 million words. The total of the mortal world + the spiritual world is only more than 7 million words. You are a water-based practitioner. The sky is full of water. You are exhausted. Have you moved the South China Sea to Henan?

Author, you also need to shorten the space. Chapter 855 starts to advance to the Nascent Soul, but chapter 1244 has not yet reached the late Nascent Soul stage. There are almost 400 chapters already. How many chapters do you have to write for one Nascent Soul stage? The following Huashensi was also written according to Chapter 400? We can't be too watery, right?

After seven or eight hundred chapters, the writing style of this book has become more mature and stable. I hope the author will continue to work hard!

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It's hard for you to write something so ugly. It's the first time I've seen someone who hasn't made any progress after writing a book for several years. It's not even as good as before, it's smelly, long and white.

If I can't write the protagonist's main plot anymore, I'll start focusing on the small character dungeons. If I can't write it, it'll be unfinished.

The boundaries are too thin, and they are always divided incomprehensibly. Is this because of water? Or should I just write about becoming a god and end it 🤔

Frankly speaking, the author's structure of the overall plot is not good, and there is too much waste in some side details. Most of the whole story revolves around the beast pets, and he spends so much energy describing the beast pets. In the end, it is of no use. It is useless for the big battle, and the small battles are redundant. It eats up so many resources. In the end, it does not help the protagonist or is the icing on the cake. So why should we cultivate it and waste space? Isn't it bad to turn the protagonist's other skills into alchemy and weapon talismans?

1. There are too many realm divisions, too fine and too confusing, and there are various peak sects emerging one after another, and there are also various peaks of different sizes. 2. The description of the protagonist always expresses praise and surprise for the protagonist's growth from various angles. 3. Fighting is just the three-character classic, such as bang bang bang, roar, roar, etc., Lacking new ideas. 4. The author really needs to improve his writing skills.

The realm of the Nascent Soul is divided too finely. The early Nascent Soul, the early peak, the middle Nascent Soul, the middle peak, the late Nascent Soul, the late peak, and the Nascent Soul Great Peak. Why not just divide them according to the numbers 1 to 9?

The latter part is better than the first one, which is rare in this category. I am at a disadvantage because the number of posts is less than the number of chapters.

The branch of the demon body is a failure among failures. It's stinky and can't be read. It's so speechless to write so many branches for each character. Have you seen other authors write so many branches? Why do you have nothing to do when you're full? Can't you just keep pushing all the way to the top? Don't you always make progress if you don't reflect on your work?