Senior Brother Is Right

I hope that authors who don't know how to write about female characters can feel free to write stories without female protagonists. When the female protagonist does not appear, the writing is obviously very good, but the style of painting changes suddenly when the female character appears. This is not the first time this has happened, it has happened in several books. There are very few books to read, but they still insist on writing female characters. If you can't write well, don't write. I really want to experience life first and understand what normal women are like. Don't think of the fake paper girls in anime as something that may exist in reality. I've never seen one in my life. Many male authors have huge errors in their understanding of women. They treat male characters as earthlings and female characters as aliens, which is all kinds of outrageous. Even if the female character is written as a man with a female body, female readers will not be left speechless. I don't know when male authors will understand that women are just as human as men, with the same brain structure, and there is no need to treat them so deliberately differently when writing. The early stage is very interesting and I look forward to the next book.

The book has been distorted since the beginning of this junior sister. The author constantly emphasized the justice of the protagonist in the early stage. In other words, what the protagonist team does must be correct. The younger junior sister is different from the second and third eldest children. The second and third eldest children became like this because of their own experiences, and the second and third eldest children are easy to change. The junior sister is more like a natural madman, who will bring uncertainty to the justice of the protagonist team. Even if the protagonist can change her personality in the future, it would be so troublesome for the author to change two normal people. Everyone reads online articles. Who has the heart to read your crazy junior sister with hundreds of thousands of words?

The whole book has no brains. Especially the protagonist, he must have been a pig in his previous life! Otherwise, the brain will not become mush after traveling through time.

It's so hard to clean up an evil sect like this. It's uncomfortable to watch. I keep worrying about this and I can't stand it anymore.

I see many book friends struggling with the protagonist's IQ! Actually, I really want to ask: "Are you stupid, or is the protagonist stupid?" The author left a message at the end of the first chapter of the book PS: "Don't care about the protagonist's IQ, this book is just a comedy." Didn't you see it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

The whole half day turns out to be the Xianxia version of the ancient war hammer, so will the protagonist become a Taoist god in the future? My power of thinking (grinding) is really beyond WAAAGH🐶. Throw a handful of green beans and endless green-skinned soldiers will appear.

I read other novels to feed you

It's pretty good in every aspect, but the junior sister feels a little stuck in her throat. The rest of the brothers and sisters are all normal people in this world, and suddenly something strange appears and their senses are severely disrupted. Also, the core of the comedy is that the senior brother is super powerful and the other junior brothers have a strong desire to survive. However, the junior sister completely controls several people as soon as she appears, which greatly distracts from this characteristic. This feeling is like having a good meal and suddenly discovering a "duck neck".

Let me just say that the early plot is about a protagonist with a firm mind and clear goals➕infinitely high force value and a bunch of bad guys saving the world in a half-funny and half-sensational way. The sudden addition of the yandere junior sister and the idiot junior junior brother in the later period completely took away the necessity of the existence of several senior brothers' characters. I don't even know why the protagonist spends so much time improving their strength. The improvement in half a day is not as good as the two newcomers.

The world in the author's eyes is simply impossible to realize. Equality for all is a dream. Those without desires are machines. Without desires, people will not be human.