Elden Ring: Selling Dung Beetles in the Lands Between

Although the background of the Dharma Ring is clearly understandable, it is in sharp contrast to the level of character creation. What kind of protagonist are you trying to create? You say you are a joy-oriented person, but what is the meaning of joy based on the tragedies of other characters? It is not uncommon for people to rob homes, buy and sell by force. Is this the so-called transaction? I know there will definitely be people who argue, "The protagonist is strong, so it's okay to do anything." But being able to do it and being able to do it are completely different concepts. This is called character creation. Ordinary people can torture and kill small animals, but no one likes such perverted characters. When you want to create a character, you must have a good grasp of his principles, thinking, and style, instead of randomly changing the character's behavior for the sake of the plot. When you need to use the reason "he did it because he can do it" to block my mouth, it proves that your character's image creation has completely failed. Also, the protagonist is the undead Ashes from Dark Souls, but I feel that the author's understanding of the plot of Dark Souls is as good as a cloud player. For example, the "real power" released by the protagonist earlier was a black liquid snake. I was still wondering what it was, but after reading the post, I realized that it was the human pus basilisk. The problem is that this thing is the abyss. It has nothing to do with the Prime Fire of King Jin or the dark soul of the dwarves. It is the mutation caused by the pollution of life in the abyss. Even in the abyss, it can only be regarded as a small soldier. What kind of powerful real power do you think this is?

It is said that the spells in the magic circle are all pyroxene spells, and pyroxene is a symbol of vitality And the spells in the soul world are all soul spells, using the soul as energy. No matter which world you are in, the essence of spells, spells, miracles, and prayers is the same.

The most important thing to write about in this part of the dlc now is to put the uncle on the giant hot pot and cook it. I don't want to hear about love affairs anymore😭

Broken Star was trying to survive by eating corpses, but we Kuku did it. Now it's better and turned into Xiao Nanliang's velvet ball.

Now Bengbu is in trouble, a huge reversal, Michaela has become the boss, how can it be so perfect, the president has become a real man, in this rotten world, all the children in Marika's family, except for Old Man Ge, are all expensive dancers, it's better to burn out all the madness like I said, at least it's clean

What can I say, I was very happy to read the first hundred chapters of this book, especially the chapters about Elle's church beating, and the explosion after the foreshadowing was very enjoyable to read. But the further I read, the more uncomfortable I felt. The protagonist lacked personal motivation. I knew from the beginning that he wanted to be a businessman, but after reading more than 200 chapters, I didn't know why he always wanted to be a businessman. The protagonist's intelligence goes up and down. Sometimes he feels quite spiritual, and sometimes he does things that make people's eyes dark. Generally speaking, it is quite fragmented, and occasionally there will be mindless perspective shifts and divine disappearances... However, the author said that this seems to be something wrong with the outline in the middle, and asked me to look at it later.

I'm in the Circle of Magic, and I've just passed the novice guide. Kill this mob to get some equipment

Supreme Will: Children, do you know why I run?

The book is very good. It is the best Dharma Ring fanfic that I have read so far that does not have eunuchs (there is also a secret cult that wears Dharma Rings, but it is a pity that it is a eunuch). When I first read the name, I thought it was just an ordinary contrasting novel about doing business in a fighting game and being a war criminal in a love game. At that time, I was still thinking, "It doesn't feel as good as the Sin Scholar's various dripstone red potions that can stack up to 99 times." When I looked at it later, I found that the protagonist did everything except business. He used up all the runes he earned from the business until it was put on the shelves. Later, he had to swallow half a Nimgfu plus a finger to recover. But the characterization and combat descriptions in this book are some of the best among the Tamaki fics I've read. The only thing I want to think about is the ashes and the fireproof girl who have traveled through time together, right? I think the real Ashes have this kind of cheerful appearance and crazy criticism on the inside. I never had an impression before, but after reading what the author wrote, I felt that "Ashes must be like this", and there is also Holy Lu who stirs up the earth. Isn't this much better than those that say how powerful they are but actually can't break the floor? (Dragon Clan Four Odin Can't Destroy Buildings. Jpg) In short, it's very good, except that the author is slow to update

Now everyone in the Godfrey lineage is a real man. Meng went to steal the Holy Tree from his hometown and kidnapped Michaela in order to help his brother defend the royal city, but he couldn't resist Michaela's charm.