The Bloodwolf’s Spring Dawn

Bai was so happy that I thought it was the male protagonist. If the author hadn't admitted that he was a man, I would have thought it was the female author. The author believes that the heroine saves a lot of troubles, such as marriage. This is the author's prejudice or lack of understanding. First of all, there are the most male readers of Qidian. It can even be said that Qidian is a male channel. As a male reader, you can never bring in the perspective of a heroine. Not all male readers watch Dear Dear. On the contrary, female readers like to watch Dear Dear most, especially Qiong Yao dramas. What do male readers watch when watching Game of Thrones? I saw that it was about farming, machinations, troubled times, things about male protagonists and female characters, especially dragon mothers. To put it bluntly, male readers don't like reading this book. Mother-in-law, it doesn't have the masculinity that male readers need, and the echoes of machinations in troubled times. [For example, the worst-written Game of Thrones fandoms have better scores than you. The key is that they have fewer words and the quality is incomparable with you], and female readers don't like to read it, because it's not enough Qiong Yao, and there aren't many men who want a woman, and who want a woman but not a king. Neither male nor female readers like to read it. If you want to achieve success, it is just a dream. It has more than one million words. I don't know how many people have read this book during this period. I have read it several times, but whenever I see that the protagonist is a woman, I immediately quit because men cannot bring in women. If they can, it means that there is something wrong with the readers, such as those men who think that they are women.

Hahaha, I finally saw the dragon with pig's feet appear, and then change the POV. It's such a magical way of writing. I suppressed my emotions for a long time, then stopped abruptly before the climax, and changed the story line to POV. It's a breathless one, and then the supporting characters tell the story in a straight-forward manner. Nb. If you're still not convinced by this author that Qidian won't let you sign the contract, why don't you give me a thumbs up? This Bolton red-robed monk can summon the shadow army. If it weren't for the dragon mechanical god and pig's feet, the whole army would be annihilated. Does the Red God know that this red-robed monk's magic is so nb? How did Dany survive in the Eastern Continent? How do the horse people deal with such naughty magic and witchcraft that drags the gods and ghosts to Mawang City to eat ashes?

Mention a few shortcomings: Too wordy. Chapters seven or eight are all dialogue, with no plot advancement at all. There are too few climax scenes. I know you are following the style of the original work, but Martin also has a lot of pornographic scenes to enhance the reader's reading experience. Simple presentation and dialogue seem boring. Also, readers want to see dragons and battles, not tens of thousands of words introducing the situation in Winterfell, those weak families and forces, and the infighting between each other. You can write about it, but in most cases you can just brush it off. What we are watching is not a documentary but a novel.

Seeing the comments section praising the author, I couldn't help but pour some cold water on it. The excellence of this book is obvious. It has excellent writing style, and the delicate description of each character is just right. Every scene has a strong sense of picture. But the lack of results is not due to the use of pov writing, but because the level itself is insufficient. The parts that test the most writing skills, such as plotting, temple calculations, war, and farming, are intentionally omitted, and the written parts are too simple, which is equivalent to giving up the most exciting parts of a normal novel. It is normal for there to be no readers. Moreover, the existence of the protagonist has very typical female video characteristics, the powerful background setting, and the actual operation that are too busy to cook, have a strong sense of dissonance. There is also the fact that the author has too much respect for the original work and does not use any swords throughout the whole process. Even if he does, it is irrelevant to the plot of the original work and lacks an eye-catching plot. If the first few pictures had the protagonist killing Jaime and Tywin in an unexpected way, this would be called a haircut.

The writing is quite good. The author may be doing it for love. In fact, the first point of view is also acceptable. The main reason is that the protagonist is a woman. Maybe the author is a woman? (My guess) It would have been better if the protagonist was a male. I am not discriminating against female protagonists, I just feel that this book is not suitable for the starting point and a certain green platform (you should all know which platform I am talking about). All I can say is, come on, author

There is no doubt that it is a good book. Both the writing and the plot are very exciting, but it is not suitable for me. There is nothing wrong with group portraits. But in fanfics, especially those with original protagonists, group portraits often jump from one line to another, and the time is not connected to each other. I don't know how other people feel when they look at it, which makes me feel very awkward. But the writing is indeed online, which is a pity. I have to wait for the author's next book

After reading Chapter 73, I really want to complain. After Chapter 65, has the author given up on himself? The quality has plummeted, and he has started to slap himself in the face without being logical? The previous chapters pave the way for the protagonist. She is the first female champion of the tournament in history. She can defeat Pakistan with her personal force. She can travel around the world and recruit fleets and subordinates as a teenager. She has a noble status, invincible military achievements, and dragons. Shouldn't this be the template for a legendary hero? This is much better than Nymeria. Since you have this experience and the protagonist is the youngest and most energetic, why should he be ridiculed by several counts? First, some count scolded the bald donkey in front of the monk and called him a bastard, and then he was ridiculed by Big Amber. Is it reasonable? It's so funny

Now available! ? The iron tree is blooming, although there are only a few pictures to be finalized first...

Source: vonsiakira

This was Bolton's march route after leaving Harrenhal, and the march to Maidenpool was to die. The entire navy's march route basically looks like this.