The Gate of Myth

God of Zhongshan, Zhu Jiuyin, you are properly written as a dragon. An innate god and demon, you have properly written it as an acquired species. It's obviously a law-based practice, but you have to write the Hou Tian Sutra. It looks high-end, but it cannot be escaped from the acquired editing. If you are an ordinary mountain god, you will be awesome if you have these two scriptures. You can return to your innate state the day after tomorrow. But your starting point is the innate gods and demons. He is born with magical powers and accompanying magic weapons. If you don't have magic weapons here, what you cultivate is still acquired. If you don't have magical powers, you still have to cultivate them. Those so-called magical powers can only be obtained through acquired cultivation, and they are brought by the dragon. The candle dragon is much more advanced than the dragon. Except for the ancestral dragon, all the other dragons are acquired. Can it be the same? Okay, all magical powers belong to dragons, or they are just acquired junk magical powers. Isn't it nonsense that a congenital god and demon even has to cultivate his own magical powers? Don't really think that Zhulong only has the magical power of opening to day and closing to dark. That is just the most common one. However, you regard a random one from someone as the ultimate magical power, and the rest are acquired. What are you thinking about? The good innate gods and demons were manipulated by you into the delinquents of tomorrow.

It's really not suitable for this kind of book. Apprenticeship with Uncle Nine is so good. I don't even think it was written by you.

The character is broken! Good to persuade you to quit. Not rigorous.

Some fans say that Zhutianliu is suitable for you, and I think so. Judging from the previous works, it is more popular with readers. You can read more Zhutianliu works by other great gods. It will be really difficult for you to get up if you continue to rush into the street. Brother, I am almost disappointed after chasing you so much! ! !

Well, so far, there are a lot of useless plots, which simply rise in the gate of myth, and are pretentious in reality, but they are gone. What Zhu Jiuyin, the Gate of Myths, medicinal materials, mountain springs, the scene is just superficial, without any depth In reality, it is even more true, and Zhu Jiuyin's identity, inheritance, and the medicinal materials, spiritual spring water, and various resources around him are available. Why does the protagonist go up the mountain? Why he killed people and why he offended the family is very unclear. There are no main lines, branch lines, plot advancement, plot development, or story narration at all.

What makes you feel that the Reiki Recovery Zaibatsu can become a top force? No matter when the country is definitely in the first echelon, no matter what it is, it will lie down until it has the ability to destroy the country, not to mention those heavy firepower weapons. With a base of millions of troops in the country, what sect can compare! The second one is definitely the sects from various famous mountains and rivers! Like Wudang Mountain, Longhu Mountain, Emei Mountain, Qingcheng Mountain, the three mountains and five mountains are definitely in the second echelon. If the spiritual energy recovers, they will definitely recover first! The third echelon is definitely the various martial arts schools with inheritance! So the chaebols and the like can be considered as the fourth-rate forces! When will the fourth-rate forces be considered the top forces? These people can also grab scraps that others don't want, like the hillsides here that are one to two hundred meters high! Because there are only so many famous mountains and rivers in the country! I can't even put you in the queue! A third-rate chaebol like the one in this book has to look at people's faces! You still have to kneel!

I've read more than a dozen chapters. Doesn't the protagonist have a medicine garden? Why should he go to the mountains desperately to grab the elixir? Shouldn't the medicine garden be digested first, and then the modern elixirs are better than those in the mythical era?

You are such a powerful candle dragon. If you replace the candle dragon with a monster dragon, no one will say anything. Your setting is completely nonsense, and what's even more ridiculous is that you have to pretend to be a myth. And the most ridiculous thing is that you actually dragged the Classic of Mountains and Seas into it, and you don't even have the character of the master of the Classic of Mountains and Seas.

The characters are seriously distorted! One thing to say, the writing is not bad, but I always feel awkward while reading it, but I don't know what the problem is. After talking with a book friend, I figured out what was going on. This was the style of early online writing. It feels like the author's manuscript that he had saved for more than ten years was dug out, and he simply added a gold-fingered beginning and published it. The characters are still set in ancient times. The villain looks down on the protagonist no matter what. Even if the protagonist kills the children of the big family who are higher than him and stronger than him, he still has the mentality that the protagonist dares to mess with him. Also, the protagonist is so powerful. The ex-girlfriend's mother still looks like she's trying to get close to me, and she doesn't even know how to win over me. So how did she manage to control the chaebol, with an aura of intelligence. The background setting is the same. It feels like the wild world is dominated by the chaebols, and the government departments have no role at all. When a resource point appears, all the major chaebols come. Why don't the government departments come to collect resources? Then how does he suppress the major chaebols to maintain peace and stability in the city? The world should have been in chaos long ago. Even after the protagonist killed so many chaebols, only one chaebol came to win him over. Do the government departments look down on casual cultivators so much? How did he recruit talents? That's all. There are still many problems. If this setting was more than ten years ago, there would be no problem. Now most books are pursuing logic, but the author's writing style is not bad, and it is suitable for beginners who are just getting into the game.

Compared with the apprenticeship of Uncle Jiu, it seems like a different author, and it is the same old routine ten years ago, except for the plot of the daughter living in a pig cage and the return of the father, the general.