Maoshan World: The Young Marshal from the Start!

The protagonist is disgusting. He has lustful thoughts about his uncle's daughter, which is equivalent to having lustful thoughts about his own sister. They're not even distant relatives. He's shameless. If he were a normal brother, he would never look at his sister's exposed body. It's hard to judge his character.

Selling clothes? You're not kidding, are you? Back then, people probably made their own clothes from fabric, right? Wealthy people either had clothes custom-made or kept tailors at home.

Author, your writing is terrible! In Chapter Four, there's a Thirteen Bodyguards' Horizontal Training Technique, and the first level costs 10,000! Do you think that's realistic?

The young marshal starts out not thinking about developing his military strength and conquering the world, but instead practicing Maoshan magic. He must be out of his mind.

Yes, you'll write about Uncle Nine. This time, don't go off the rails like last time. Go through all the plot points you want to write, including all the movies related to Uncle Nine and Maoshan. That'll be enough to write over a thousand chapters. Make sure you get it all right!

Chapter 111 is too harsh; the author should revise it. If I were your subordinate, you'd give me a military uniform for free the first time, and then charge me for it the second time? Are you kidding me? You want me to risk my life for you and then bleed you dry? And you're comparing this to charging for school uniforms? How are these two things the same?

Planning to take Ren Tingting in as a wife? Marriage between close relatives is a serious crime!

The formula is too old. The protagonist is a young marshal. Why bother with world-conquering and immortal cultivation? There are too many transmigrated characters in Uncle Nine's world who go to cultivate immortality. You've already set the protagonist as a young marshal; is it appropriate to abandon hundreds of thousands of troops to cultivate immortality?

Whether you choose to become an apprentice or follow Master Simu, watching a movie is just for fun, but encountering a senior brother like Qiusheng or Wencai in real life is truly a blessing earned through nine lifetimes of good deeds.

The unit price is high, but how many people will buy it? Throughout history, no one has been able to support an army with luxury goods, and clothing is a durable consumer good. Also, people might not recognize your brand, and they might not buy your products themselves.