Chaos Among the Immortals

I suggest the author revise the opening chapter. 1. At the beginning, it was written that the protagonist's impermanent identity was inherited from his cousin. Then we looked at the situation of the protagonist's cousin's family. Even his son could not afford a wife. It can be said that the family situation was very bad. From this, we can see that the impermanent identity has many restrictions. 2. If this inheritance is very good, why not pass it to a very poor son, but to an outsider? Therefore, it should be inferred that this restriction is very detrimental to the inheritor. 3. The desolation of the cousin and the various NBs of the protagonist are too different, and there is no reasonable reason.

Just added this book to my reading list! The author adds some details.

It's a complete mess, and it's only begun after a hundred chapters. I also wrote so much nonsense that has nothing to do with the main storyline. The writing of a good creative concept is broken. Why write so much about handsome men and beautiful women? If you focus so much on appearance, why don't you just write someone who relies on appearance to practice? The writing of a good subject matter is broken. It is more annoying than writing randomly from the first one.

A good book, but it's a pity it didn't run well

Like the author's other books, he has matured and is no longer good at writing. This book gives you ten golden chapters and you are not interested in reading it. Looking at the table of contents again, alas, there is really no hope.

I like the setting of this book very much, but since the heroine has been decided so quickly, there is no need for other women to get involved. After all, this is not the main plot. At most, the heroine can appear more often and show affection and write about daily life. Also, come on, speed up the progress.

TMI DE A book with a good beginning was ruined by the author. What is written after this is directly preparing to start a harem. Do you know where the focus of writing is. Too many routines are poison. Please read Jidao Tianmo or Kou Daozheng in "Gun Da". The more you write, the more crooked they are. It's really annoying to read. Brothers, if you think what I said makes sense, please go up and let the author take a look 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆.

The protagonist shouldn't be robbing tombs and being anchors. He should be looking at Feng Shui. Why is there no merit or luck in this book?

Are we going to be treated as dogs next?

IQ is a flaw. We can all guess the plot after killing the funny family. Just like fighting zombies after it is released, everyone can guess the plot from the second day after it is released! Author, are you really okay with this? Your ability has been exposed. You have another enemy. Kill the boss behind Wang Jinyang. Everyone knows who it is! If written like this, it will only appear as a troll in the eyes of a few people. The ruthlessness of the protagonist is not shown, which will only make everyone think that the protagonist's IQ is not online! Try not being online! The story structure, background, etc. Are all fine, but is it really good for the plot to continue like this after it's released?